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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140087#msg140087
« Reply #24 on: August 16, 2010, 09:27:36 pm »
Alright if I can stay in.

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Character Name: Zeni

Element: Entropy+Aether and anything he copies with duality.

Name- Zeni

Race-Human (chaos sorcerer)

Appearance- Zeni can mutate himself using the mutations spell to change forms but in his base form he is a human cloaked in a purple cloak. He has his staff of chaos with him at all times it changes as he does to disguise itself. He is a VERY friendly person and can make bonds with even the darkest personalities. He uses this and his mutating appearance to his advantage and infiltrates enemies.

Background- Zeni was born to a genius named Max and his wife Cynthia. Max had origiannly created the Maxwell’s demons and had granted them the intelligence to find and eliminate paradoxes. Zeni learned of all his chaotic powers from Max. Max and Cynthia died at a strategy meeting; they were meeting with the fallen elves to discuss an attack to the FG of death Morte, who was threatening them. The elves betrayed the Chaomancers (Chaos Wizards) and mutated them until they died. Zeni being an established Chaomancer already had opened a portal to watch the outcome, when the betrayal began Zeni went through the portal to teleport there. He managed to save max but only after a fatal chaos seed had been cast, Max’s last words to Zeni were “You are a master you are the king of entropy; I imbue you with my Entropic powers. Go and avenge us by vanquishing the evil that caused these elves to attack us.” With that Zeni left and began wandering until he came upon a pact of Maxwell’s Demons.

Belongings- A robe and a staff, Also a pact of demons.

Abilities:

Mutation- Zeni mutates target creature. It dies, turns into something weird, or becomes an abomination. This ability can be controlled to change a creature’s appearance. Character stays at same power level.

Atomic Control- Zeni can control atoms on a sum-microscopic level allowing him to Manipulate him and others atoms. (for example turning his hand into a steel sword, or turning an opponent’s hand into a pile of crap.) This ability takes quite a bit out of Zeni.

Entropic control- Years of studying with the Demons granted Zeni immense knowledge. He can use this knowledge to essentially mind control a weak minded enemy the stronger the mind of the enemy the more difficult to enter and control.

Entropic Transfer- Zeni can teleport and by doing so confuse the enem(y/ies) temporarily.

Duality- By tapping into his aether powers, Zeni can copy one of his opponent’s moves, and use it for himself. This move hardly drains Zeni, but the move that he copies can drain him depending on the power of it.

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140092#msg140092
« Reply #25 on: August 16, 2010, 09:33:52 pm »
Please refer to the character sheet on the first page. Your profile is missing quite a bit of information.

Your character cannot be from the world of Elements. So unless Maxwell's Demons are the natural inhabitants of your world, your character cannot have a pack of them as underlings.

Also, we might start this game early, if there are not enough people joining. Maybe more people will join when they see the game in action. And I've PM'd Helios; I hope he joins...
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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140096#msg140096
« Reply #26 on: August 16, 2010, 09:37:54 pm »
Please refer to the character sheet on the first page. Your profile is missing quite a bit of information.

Your character cannot be from the world of Elements. So unless Maxwell's Demons are the natural inhabitants of your world, your character cannot have a pack of them as underlings.

Also, we might start this game early, if there are not enough people joining. Maybe more people will join when they see the game in action. And I've PM'd Helios; I hope he joins...
Maxwells are natural from my world xD.

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140100#msg140100
« Reply #27 on: August 16, 2010, 09:43:35 pm »
The format of your profile must be exactly like the format I posted on the first page.

Also, where is the description of your character's world? And Maxwell's Demons are unique to Elements, so I highly doubt that the species exist in other worlds. I just want to see a bit of creativity in the player characters, instead of just taking things from Elements and turn this into a regular Elements RPG.
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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140103#msg140103
« Reply #28 on: August 16, 2010, 09:45:26 pm »
The format of your profile must be exactly like the format I posted on the first page.

Also, where is the description of your character's world? And Maxwell's Demons are unique to Elements, so I highly doubt that the species exist in other worlds. I just want to see a bit of creativity in the player characters, instead of just taking things from Elements and turn this into a regular Elements RPG.
Alright this may take a little while. Ill go create an original thing. *Cracks Knuckles.*

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140126#msg140126
« Reply #29 on: August 16, 2010, 10:10:13 pm »
Forum Name: $$$man

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Character Name: Zeni

Element: Entropy+Aether and anything he copies with duality.

Gender: Male

Race: Chaomancer (Chaos Sorcerer)

Age: 24

Appearance: Zeni can mutate himself using the mutations spell to change forms but in his base form he is a human.
Zeni’s Eyes are dark purple, His hair is Completely Black and his Skin color is peach.
Zeni always looks like he is in a bad mood although anyone who knows him knows that he is a very nice person.
Zeni can alternate his height but in basic form is 6’ 8. He weighs a measly 132 pounds. And he has a very lean build.
Zeni can change form but in his basic form has 4 scars across his rib area.
Constantly changing attire according to his mood.

Personality: He is a VERY friendly person and can make bonds with even the darkest personalities. He uses this and his mutating appearance to his advantage and infiltrates enemies. His only dislike is stubbornness and arrogance. He is straight.

Abilities:
Chaos Seed- Zeni’s target is inflicted with a random negative effect. This move can be used in quick succession to create a move known as “Pandemonium” which is much more powerful.

Dissipation- Any attacks at Zeni will heal him instead. This can be cast on multiple people at once.

Mutation- Zeni mutates target creature. It dies, turns into something weird, or becomes an abomination. This ability can be controlled to change a creature’s appearance. Character stays at same power level.

Atomic Control- Zeni can control atoms on a sum-microscopic level allowing him to Manipulate him and others atoms. (For example turning his hand into a steel sword, or turning an opponent’s hand into a pile of crap.) This ability takes very little out of Zeni.

Mind-Control- Years of studying with the Demons granted Zeni immense knowledge. He can use this knowledge to essentially mind control a well minded enemy. the stronger the mind of the enemy the more difficult to enter and control.

Teleportation- Zeni can teleport and by doing so pop out of a portal, if this leaves the enemy in a vulnerable position Zeni attempts to attack them with his long sword.

Duality- By tapping into his aether powers, Zeni can copy one of his opponent’s moves, and use it for himself. This move hardly drains Zeni, but the move that he copies can drain him depending on the power of it. Zeni can choose what move(s) he copies.

Background and World Description: Zeni was born to a genius named Max and his wife Cynthia. Max had originally created the Poisonous Garbs and had granted them the intelligence to find and Aflatoxin and they considered evil. Zeni learned of all his chaotic powers from Max. Max and Cynthia died at a strategy meeting; they were meeting with the Nuetrals(Demons in the world of Posgn) to discuss an attack to the Torturer of death, Xerolance, who was threatening them. The elves betrayed the Chaomancers (Chaos Wizards) and mutated them until they died. Zeni being an established Chaomancer already had opened a portal to watch the outcome, when the betrayal began Zeni went through the portal to teleport there. He managed to save Max but only after a fatal chaos seed had been cast, Max’s last words to Zeni were “You are a master you are the king of entropy; I imbue you with my Entropic powers. Go and avenge us by vanquishing the evil that caused these elves to attack us.” With that Zeni left and began wandering until he came upon a pact of Poisonous Garbs. He joined with them. *This is when the story starts in Zeni’s eyes.

World Story:
Zeni’s world:
Language: Chaolo- The use of random terms to create sounds that represent what you are trying to say
Appearance: Chaotic- Random things in random place. Lakes in the desert and mountains in space are just a few such landmarks.
Races: Random- Random races that appear from nowhere teleported into Posgn. Also Poisonous Garbs the most dominant Entropic Race that keeps everything in the land in check.
Back-story: When Posgn (the world) was first created, the ruler was none other than Thoro, Zeni's great grnadfather.. Eventually upon conquering all the other lands, he Forgot about Posgn leaving it be.

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140129#msg140129
« Reply #30 on: August 16, 2010, 10:15:36 pm »
I hate when people use classes as races.

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140131#msg140131
« Reply #31 on: August 16, 2010, 10:16:14 pm »
I hate when people use classes as races.
Lol should I change it?
Edit: too late I already did. xD

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140143#msg140143
« Reply #32 on: August 16, 2010, 10:45:11 pm »
Still not acceptable, $$$man. There are a couple of problems:

- There are no False Gods in your world. FGs are unique to the world of Elements.

- Your world was not previously ruled by Annihilus. Annihilus is an interdimensional Deity-level entity that devours other worlds, and he is not associated with any individual world; he cannot have ruled yours, because 1) he would have simply devoured it, and 2) he had been imprisoned for the past zillion years. At the start of the game, only my character knows about the existence of Annihilus.

- Your world is still tied to Elements. I see Fallen Elves in there.

- Your world cannot have things taken from other worlds. All worlds exist by themselves, and interdimensional beings such as Annihilus, or the Imps, have no home world.

- Fix your punctuations and capitalization. Your spelling and grammar are OK, but sometimes I find it hard to understand what you wrote because you didn't add the proper punctuations.

- This is only a suggestion, but maybe change your ability names a bit to make them easier to understand? For example, your Entropy Control should be Telepathy, Entropy Transfer should be Teleportation, and Duality should probably be Mimicry or something.

Also, how tall is 6'8? I use the metric system, so I cannot read feet and inches. Guess I'll have to do some math to find out...
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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140146#msg140146
« Reply #33 on: August 16, 2010, 10:48:00 pm »
Still not acceptable, $$$man. There are a couple of problems:

- There are no False Gods in your world. FGs are unique to the world of Elements.

- Your world was not previously ruled by Annihilus. Annihilus is an interdimensional Deity-level entity that devours other worlds, and he is not associated with any individual world. At the start of the game, only my character knows about the existence of Annihilus.

- Your world is still tied to Elements. I see Fallen Elves in there.

- Your world cannot have things taken from other worlds. All worlds exist by themselves, and interdimensional beings such as Annihilus, or the Imps, have no home world.

- Fix your punctuations and capitalization. Your spelling and grammar are OK, but sometimes I find it hard to understand what you wrote because you didn't add the proper punctuations.

- This is only a suggestion, but maybe change your ability names a bit to make them easier to understand? For example, your Entropy Control should be Telepathy, Entropy Transfer should be Teleportation, and Duality should probably be Mimicry or something.

Also, how tall is 6'8? I use the metric system, so I cannot read feet and inches. Guess I'll have to do some math to find out...
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6' 8 is 80 inches there I did part for you now you do the rest xD.

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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140148#msg140148
« Reply #34 on: August 16, 2010, 10:50:04 pm »
Reserve a spot for me.

I'll edit this post with my character page.
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Re: Clash of Worlds by Bloodshadow https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11305.msg140150#msg140150
« Reply #35 on: August 16, 2010, 10:51:48 pm »
Use the Microsoft Word auto-capitalization thing if you have it, though I don't think it corrects punctuations for you. I suggest you reread what you wrote afterwards, and see if you can add a comma or so in some places.

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