Vortex l Imporved Vortex

[Blacksmith]

NAME: Vortex ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 0 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 3 l 1 TEXT: Generate 1 quantum to your opponent of their mark at the end of your turn.	NAME: Improved Vortex ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 0 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4 | 1 TEXT: Generate 1 quantum to your opponent of their mark at the end of your turn.

ART: Odin Vanguarden http://elementscommunity.org/forum/card-art/my-card-art-imgur-page/ IDEA: Blacksmith NOTES: I'm always searching for new mechanics that in one or another way adds a new dimension to this game. The idea of favoring your opponent when playing something still hasn't been added to the game and thats why I made this card. Can be used as immo fodder, fractaled, mutation etc. Ps. really good art odin! SERIES: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/card-ideas-and-art/vigor-l-vigor/new/#new

[dark ripper]

Wording! 0 isnt needed or the : mark, also his/her is their! Should be something like: Give a quantum matching your opponent's mark.
I like the concept! Entropy ftw 

[dawn to dusk]

To get rid of the cost, get rid of the sign by making it other cost and simply get rid of the number. I like the idea of the series

[iDaire]

You're right. This would be a great addition to the game. But, I'm pretty sure people would summon this to immolate it. It seems to be near the level of a psion. Deadly, but with drawbacks.

[dracomageat]

How about the text "Your opponent's mark generates an additional quantum at the end of your turn."?

[Blacksmith]

To get rid of the cost, get rid of the sign by making it other cost and simply get rid of the number. I like the idea of the series

Done and thank you.

Wording! 0 isnt needed or the : mark, also his/her is their! Should be something like: Give a quantum matching your opponent's mark.
I like the concept! Entropy ftw 

Fixed and I'm happy you like it.

You're right. This would be a great addition to the game. But, I'm pretty sure people would summon this to immolate it. It seems to be near the level of a psion. Deadly, but with drawbacks.

I don't know how good it is actually. And yeah it makes pretty good immo fodder as well as mutation fodder.

How about the text "Your opponent's mark generates an additional quantum at the end of your turn."?

That seems smother. I'll change it but not until we have agreed if this is a balanced version or if any other effects would work too.

[iDaire]

Make it cost one quanta. If you don't I could fractal this and mitosis it. Infinitely without struggle. It also survives after play. So its if you want to say an evolved spark! Except this is overpowered if used properly.

Edit: Never mind. On closer look, it could be nice the way it is.

[OdinVanguard]

This is total LoLz if the opponent puts out a sanctuary... (now if only there was a spell that could "Give" the opponent the sanctuary ... )

The fractal combo is pretty potent... but I think it may be okay.

I can see several amusing uses in deception type decks. It would be fun to combo with a gp voodoo vortex-mare, or with a SaC-mare.

As strange as it sounds, I actually think it would be nice to drop its attack a little for both because that would allow shield-mare deception style decks to flourish.

For instance I could see it being used with titanium and diamond shields + nightmare.

It also makes an obvious choice for SoPa strategies.

[Blacksmith]

This is total LoLz if the opponent puts out a sanctuary... (now if only there was a spell that could "Give" the opponent the sanctuary ... )

The fractal combo is pretty potent... but I think it may be okay.

I can see several amusing uses in deception type decks. It would be fun to combo with a gp voodoo vortex-mare, or with a SaC-mare.

As strange as it sounds, I actually think it would be nice to drop its attack a little for both because that would allow shield-mare deception style decks to flourish.

For instance I could see it being used with titanium and diamond shields + nightmare.

It also makes an obvious choice for SoPa strategies.

I actually didn't think of nightmare when making this card. It makes it much more interesting. How about reducing the attack of the un upped to 2 and keep 4 for the upped ones. Then both of it's uses are viable.

[skyironsword]

Actually, I'd like to point out that the upgraded card image doesn't show 'Improved Vortex'

[AD TienzuStorm]

CURATOR COMMENT

This card will not be permitted to the Crucible due to one ore more of the following errors:

• Card name doesn't match the name in table for upgraded version (Vortex instead of Improved Vortex)

Correct these errors as soon as possible and feel free to submit it again when ready.

Thank you.


- ADSB

[Blacksmith]

CURATOR COMMENT

This card will not be permitted to the Crucible due to one ore more of the following errors:

• Card name doesn't match the name in table for upgraded version (Vortex instead of Improved Vortex)

Correct these errors as soon as possible and feel free to submit it again when ready.

Thank you.


- ADSB

Fixed.