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Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg291686#msg291686
« on: March 16, 2011, 10:40:50 am »
NAME:
Onslaught
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
:fire
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
At the end of every turn deal 5 damage to the player with fewer creatures.
NAME:
Onslaught
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
:fire
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
At the end of every turn deal 7 damage to the player with fewer creatures.
ART:
The_GrimReaper
IDEA:
The_GrimReaper
NOTES:
If both players have the same amount of creatures, nothing happens.
It is stackable, but I also considered increasing the damage and making it non-stackable. Any opinions?

So, how is this supposed to buff flooding?
Well, it can work in two different ways. On the one hand, this could be used for creature spam decks. Flooding then works as an effective counter and can completely turn the tide (figuratively and literally :P).
On the other hand, Onslaught is a two edged-sword when you use it. If the enemy gets out more creatures, you hurt yourself. Flooding - however - can make sure that he/she won't have more than 7 creatures (if he/she doesn't use immortals, water creatures or malignant cells).
A possible deck for the second case:
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? are ment to be Onslaughts and Mitosis. Could need permafrost or something, but then again this is about the card and not about deckbuilding.
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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg291738#msg291738
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 02:34:17 pm »
I like it :)
would be used in many decks I feel

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg291870#msg291870
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 07:49:29 pm »
It definitley fits with Fire's burn theme.  Consider this a weapon that stacks IMO.  For 4 quanta you deal 5 damage each turn only if you have enough creatures,  and it will damage you instead if your opponent uses a lot of creatures like  swarm deck or Malignant Cell mutants.  I think it's pretty well balanced, since it can be countered in multiple ways.

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg292239#msg292239
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2011, 02:55:46 am »
This card passes my sub challenge.

It increases Flooding's potential when not used in tandem by being countered by Flooding.
However The_GrimReaper surprised me with a card that also would work well with Flooding (although the sample deck could use more than 12 potential creatures IMO. Perhaps a trio?)
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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg294234#msg294234
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2011, 09:57:10 pm »
Little update - art added.
Not quite what I envisioned first (Idea was involving some fire and a more interesting perspective), but my current art skills do set some limits to me. If you've got a nice image - let me know. If not I'll have to try improving it.
This was also taking longer than expected. In the end I got rather impatient, which is why Ivory dragon is lacking some movement and forest scorpion both anatomy and perspective. I'll let you figure out what the other 3 creatures are on your own.  :P
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Btw: We're supposed to submit our cards to the crucible only after the challenge ends, right?

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg294236#msg294236
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2011, 09:58:49 pm »
Btw: We're supposed to submit our cards to the crucible only after the challenge ends, right?
Yes.  Also I like how didn't limit the creatures in the art to just :fire related ones.

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg294255#msg294255
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2011, 10:30:17 pm »
Just a note, stating the obvious: Not for use in swarm decks.

I think that if you stack it, decrease the power, cause 6x5 = 30 damage in the first 4, 5 turns alone in mono-fire. Not fun without permanent control. And that's unupgraded. Ouch.
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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg294646#msg294646
« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2011, 11:26:29 am »
I think that if you stack it, decrease the power, cause 6x5 = 30 damage in the first 4, 5 turns alone in mono-fire. Not fun without permanent control. And that's unupgraded. Ouch.
Wel... One card I tried to compare this to was Lava Golem: The damage would be the same .The latter cost 1 more, but have the growth ability. They are weak to CC, but haven't got the "two-edged sword" aspect, leaving Antimatter aside. I'm not sure how to evaluate the last point, though. So more opinions on cost and damage are very appreciated.
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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg302803#msg302803
« Reply #8 on: April 01, 2011, 02:23:13 am »

Congratulations to Onslaught | Onslaught (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,23004.0.html) for winning the Honorable Mention award. While it has not won the competition it has also proven itself a well-made card.  If you like this card you may also be interested in the Winner, Psionic Shield | Psionic Barrier (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,22985.0.html) as well.
Interesting card here with both it's pros and cons. I would definitely be interested in seeing this in the game. :)

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg302844#msg302844
« Reply #9 on: April 01, 2011, 03:40:37 am »

Congratulations to Onslaught | Onslaught (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,23004.0.html) for winning the Honorable Mention award. While it has not won the competition it has also proven itself a well-made card.  If you like this card you may also be interested in the Winner, Psionic Shield | Psionic Barrier (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,22985.0.html) as well.
Interesting card here with both it's pros and cons. I would definitely be interested in seeing this in the game. :)
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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg303703#msg303703
« Reply #10 on: April 02, 2011, 07:01:15 am »
I like this card.  It's grammatically incorrect, though, and should say 'fewer creatures' rather than 'less creatures'.

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Re: Onslaught | Onslaught https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23004.msg303718#msg303718
« Reply #11 on: April 02, 2011, 08:08:58 am »
Art is awesome. I really like it.




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