Living Dust | Dust Entity

[Schattenfresser]

Ok, i changed two things:
* changed the wording so that it should be easier to understand
* changed the name

[Zac33333]

Me Likes dis. It makes sensicles

You got my vote!

[GG]

for the art; why don't u find a screenshot of the movie Mummy, when Imhotep tries to kill the protagonists by becoming a sandstorm?

[bojengles77]

for the art; why don't u find a screenshot of the movie Mummy, when Imhotep tries to kill the protagonists by becoming a sandstorm?

Yeah, this doesn't look like a creature at all to me right now - it looks like a wave of dust... If you're going to name the first card "dust creature" it needs some creature-esque characteristics.

[Schattenfresser]

for the art; why don't u find a screenshot of the movie Mummy, when Imhotep tries to kill the protagonists by becoming a sandstorm?

that would be sand and not dust. 

Yeah, this doesn't look like a creature at all to me right now - it looks like a wave of dust... If you're going to name the first card "dust creature" it needs some creature-esque characteristics.

Which form has a dust creature? I could search for a similar picture to the MtG Dust Elemental (looks more like a dust dragon), but I don't like the idea to use a known creature consist of dust.
I look for some art that makes it easier to see a creature in it. Or I change the name again. Maybe Living Dust. 

[bojengles77]

Either one of those is a viable option, just as long as the picture matches the name

[Schattenfresser]

Either one of those is a viable option, just as long as the picture matches the name

I changed the name to Living Dust. I hope nobody wants to see a sign of life in the dust.

[Kael Hate]

Either one of those is a viable option, just as long as the picture matches the name

I changed the name to Living Dust. I hope nobody wants to see a sign of life in the dust.

Updated in Crucible poll

[Kuroaitou]

Here's some new art for you Schattenfresser, as promised. (Note: you might need to resize the image before it can be used in the card) ^^;;

If there needs to be changes to my art submission, feel free to correct them as necessary. I know that Bloodshadow, Fotosynthesis, vrt, and Zanz can make much better art that I can, but it was worth a shot! XD

[wavedash]

To be honest, I do not like this concept at all. That 50% makes this card very luck-based.

[bojengles77]

To be honest, I do not like this concept at all. That 50% makes this card very luck-based.

Many cards in this game are based upon "luck". To name a few:

pandemonium, chaos seed, dusk shield, fog shield, ice shield

Chance is part of Elements.

[TheOwner]

Cool card it would be interesting with fractal.  I think a better name (for the upped version) would be Dust Monster and make it look closer to a golem (I know it sounds stupid but I think it looks better that way)