Look! There's Land of Green Dragon(LifeForAether)!

[lolicjj]

I think this deck is not as same as the deck.. but surely comment and suggest(like increasing and reducing) is NEEDED so much.. and there it is..


LifeForAether - Land of Green Dragon


Start with Story(that i've made when i went to school this morning)

     Once upon a time, there's a legendary land called 'Land of Green Dragon'. There's a rumor that if we step on that land we will be immortal. But since the land is mystery, no-one have found it. Plus, it said that people that step on that land cannot come back...
     One day, a cheerful kid, ________(insert your name) was playing ball with his/her friends, but when he/she try to get it, because the ball bounce too high, the kid cannot reach it. The ball rolled to a forest.
     "Hold a minute, ok? I will try to get the ball. Be right back soon!" Said the kid.
     He/She running trough the forest. After get the ball, he/she didn't know that he/she has travel too far, in other word.. LOST.     
The kid was scared, and try to stay a night there. When the day goes dark, he/she found a cave and rest a day there.
     The sun began to rise, the kid awake because a roaring sound. He/She was really surprised. After take his/her ball, he/she running to the voice source. Passing trough bush, lake, and strange creature, he was shocked to look at.. Land of Green Dragon.
     Happily he ran toward the dragon, step into the land. Suddenly he/she turn into...
    GREEN DRAGON.   
    The end
     (sorry for lot of mistake, I'm not too good at writing..)

so, here's the deck

by cjjkrenzbgt

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5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bs 5bt 5bt 5bt 5bu 5bu 5c2 5c2 5c3 5c3 5c6 5c6 5c6 61o 61o 61o 61o 61o 61o 61o 61r 61r 621 621 622 622 622 8pu

Good Luck, don't forget to spare your time for study!

Edit 1 - check some spelling and grammar..
Edit 2 - Now you can replace those quint. with pillar or frog
        - You can put the phase dragon, too..! Weapon like jade staff doesn't work here, except for aether weapon lobotomizer / electrocutor

[zombie0]

i liked the story

heres a story based on your story 

     Once upon a time, in the legendary 'Land of the Green Dragon', a mysterious power existed.  Common myth believed this land granted immortality, wealth, and power.  But no one dared to seek it, all knew that anyone who found that land could never return...
     One day, a cheerful child Adam was playing ball with his friends.  Adam hit the ball too hard, and it disappeared into the forest.  The other kids did not want to go into the forest.  Their parents forbid them.
     "Hold on!  I will try to get the ball!" said Adam.
     Adam ran through the forest, hunting for the ball.   He didn't know why he was not allowed to go into the forest, it was really nice.  He looked until he was tired, then laid down for a quick nap.
     Suddenly, Adam woke up.  He was scared, it was getting dark and the forest looked different.  The ground was covered with thorns, and the wind was howling.  He looked up and saw a giant frog with his ball in its mouth.  "Hey, come back!" he said, and chased it towards a pond he did not remember seeing before.
     Passing through the bushes and trees, he could barely keep up with the green creature.   Adam barely saw it dive with a splash into the pond.  He went over to the edge, looking for the frog and his ball.
     Adam noticed a gigantic green statue deep, deep in the pond.  It looked made of precious gems that gleamed and sparkled in the twilight.  Adam was transfixed on the beauty and power.  "I wish i could be an Emerald Dragon too!"  The water glassed over, and he saw his reflection on the surface.  His wish had come true!
     The end

[lolicjj]

i liked the story

heres a story based on your story 

     Once upon a time, in the legendary 'Land of the Green Dragon', a mysterious power existed.  Common myth believed this land granted immortality, wealth, and power.  But no one dared to seek it, all knew that anyone who found that land could never return...
     One day, a cheerful child Adam was playing ball with his friends.  Adam hit the ball too hard, and it disappeared into the forest.  The other kids did not want to go into the forest.  Their parents forbid them.
     "Hold on!  I will try to get the ball!" said Adam.
     Adam ran through the forest, hunting for the ball.   He didn't know why he was not allowed to go into the forest, it was really nice.  He looked until he was tired, then laid down for a quick nap.
     Suddenly, Adam woke up.  He was scared, it was getting dark and the forest looked different.  The ground was covered with thorns, and the wind was howling.  He looked up and saw a giant frog with his ball in its mouth.  "Hey, come back!" he said, and chased it towards a pond he did not remember seeing before.
     Passing through the bushes and trees, he could barely keep up with the green creature.   Adam barely saw it dive with a splash into the pond.  He went over to the edge, looking for the frog and his ball.
     Adam noticed a gigantic green statue deep, deep in the pond.  It looked made of precious gems that gleamed and sparkled in the twilight.  Adam was transfixed on the beauty and power.  "I wish i could be an Emerald Dragon too!"  The water glassed over, and he saw his reflection on the surface.  His wish had come true!
     The end

Your story is fantastic! Like it so much