It's a bit large and seems to be trying to do too much to be especially effective at doing any one thing. It does bring up an interesting idea that I don't think I have seen before, which would be fractaling Brimstone Eaters until you've got a ton of fire quanta, then cremating them to make room for Fractal Ruby Dragons. Something like:
Mark of Aether
7x Burning Tower
6x Cremation
6x Brimstone Eater
2x Ruby Dragon
4x Aether Tower
5x Fractal
I suppose a Fahrenheit would be good in there too. Not sure how this would work in practice, this is literally the first I have thought about it. Biggest trouble I can see would be if you couldn't get a burning tower to get your first Brimstone Eater out.