Well, simply by cutting out 1 of each of the combo cards (morning star, animate weapon and SoW) your quanta issues can be solved and the drawing chances for dim shields are increased. However unless you add miracles or sanctuaries i cant see a single reason to prefer this over mono aether.
I tried something like this and won 3 times against against AI4, but I am not sure whether it is any better than your deck:
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