52o 52o 52o 52o 52o 52o 52q 52q 52q 542 542 542 542 542 542 542 542 542 542 542 5bu 5bu 5bu 5bu 5c8 5c8 5c8 5c8 5c8 5c8 8pn
I'd invert the Pend/Mark setup and then convert six of your Life Pends to Emerald Pillars; the deck itself actually requires very little to function so you won't need too much of it generated over the course of the duel. Otherwise, I can't find anything that needs improvement.