new deck want some feedback pls

[me1585]

Code: [Select]

4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vm 4vm 4vm 4vm 58v 58v 592 592 5bv 5bv 5bv 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5ol 5ol 5ol 5uk 5uk 5up 5up 5up 5up 5up 5up 6u3 6u3

[xKelevra]

I'm not quite sure what you're trying to aim for with this deck. Are you going to mutate your fireflies?

-Looks like a slow launch. You might some form of stalling (i.e. dim shields, sundials, ice shield+sogs, etc)
-Steals are unnecessary with two pulvs.
-You've got 5 weapons; I'd suggest you take out the owl's eyes.
-You're not using any gravity, time, death, water, fire, or aether quanta. Instead of the owl's eyes, you can add cc from those elements like grav force, oty, RoF, congeal, etc.
-50 card deck with no hourglasses is a big no-no. You absolutely need at least 4 hourglasses.

[me1585]

thx here is the out come

Code: [Select]

4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vm 4vm 4vm 4vm 55r 55r 58v 58v 5bv 5bv 5bv 5f5 5f5 5f8 5f8 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5rl 5rl 5rl 5rl 5uk 5uk 61r 61r 6u3 6u3

[DragonZProductions]

thx here is the out come

Code: [Select]

4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4sa 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vj 4vm 4vm 4vm 4vm 55r 55r 58v 58v 5bv 5bv 5bv 5f5 5f5 5f8 5f8 5oc 5oc 5oc 5oj 5oj 5oj 5oj 5rl 5rl 5rl 5rl 5uk 5uk 61r 61r 6u3 6u3

Why do u still have Obsidian Pillars???

[Ryli]

Can you afford to pay for the fire and time cards? I assume the mark would either be time or fire, but wouldn't that leave shortages in the one you don't choose. And yeah, drop the obsidian pillars, there's no need for them without the steals.

[trisk22]

Get rid of the pillars  and maybe one fire shield, if ur going for false gods, u should put an eternity.