new at building decks [Voodoo doll deck]

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Okaay.. part by part.

In general, it's a pretty good deck and idea.
I would take out the Phase shield, with only one, it's not going to do much.
I will probably run better without the Electrocutors as well.
I don't think you need the obsidian towers either, so you can take those out as well and it will run pretty smoothly, I'd say.

It's just a small stall in case he gets a bad hand or he is taking too much damage by the end of the game (Phase Shield.)
Electrocutor is damage, and also Lobotomize's the opponent's critter, especially those who might turn out making a big problem for him. (Ex : Purple nymph, even though you don't find those very often. Or if you just want to be more tactical and think of something that appears a lot, Ulitharid and Mind Flayer.(
The Obsidian Towers I --Think-- They are a alternate route for quantum, if he faces a Pillar Destroying deck.

To the original deck now --

With only 2 liquid shadows it won't help much - But then again you have those TU's, but the liquid shadow might just be too late. I'd recommend putting a few more or if you have it, add a Obsidian Nymph (Do not take out the liquid shadows you already have) for both damage and L.S.

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nymph will suck all dark quantom ..the point in the liquid is that you will have enough dolls to kill the enemy and refill your hp in 6turns the liquided dolls will die... so basicly i dont need to much if ppl will do phase shield i need few dolls around.. i might put few steals in this deck

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no comments...? i  really want to do somthing from this deck...

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nymph will suck all dark quantom ..the point in the liquid is that you will have enough dolls to kill the enemy and refill your hp in 6turns the liquided dolls will die... so basicly i dont need to much if ppl will do phase shield i need few dolls around.. i might put few steals in this deck

No it won't. Supposing you get it through mid-game it might just be the right thing. If you still think it'd be bad, you could always exchange the dark pendulums for fire pendulums, aether pillars for aether pendulums, slap a darkness mark 'n call it a day.

But that is supposing you get a nymph.

One way or another, this deck is pretty much already well built. The only other  optimizing for it would be narrowing the deck to 30-32 cards. I'm still mumbling with myself on how to do that.

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uhm you prob right about the fire pendulms .... ima check it when il be back from school

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god... no one really helped me with this deck :\ i might give up about it

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I'm trying =P

Okay, this is probably a crazy idea. But check this out.

Take out the 2 obsidian pillars and turn all darkness pendulums into fire ones. Replace the aether pillars for aether pendulums. Change mark to darkness.

Since we are going to be heavy on darkness, take out the phase shield and add a dusk one.

Deck List = 33 cards.

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7dr 7dr 7dr 7dr 7dr 7dr 7f2 7f2 7f2 7f2 7f2 7f2 7t8 7te 7te 7tg 7tg 7tg 7tg 7tg 7tg 80b 80b 80b 80b 80e 80e 81q 81q 81q 81q 81q 81q
It was a major change I made to make the deck smaller. You can take out the shield for 32 cards.

I didn't play many matches, but the ones I did, it worked.

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i tried somthing like that but with the shield and 2 steals... but aether pendulms? pshh didnt think about that and what matches did you play?
im thinking about adding explosion [ w/e the name of that destroy item card in fire deck ]

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I played around 10 against AI5.

I found that, very often, the shields would bug me. So adding a explosion would be nice.. I'll try to fix that. But now it's time fer lunch 

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GO EAT! lmfao i tried to do this deck with 3fractals and few pest's.... very hard to controll the deck no defense against rush and stuff....
im trying to do scorpion deck against FG it can kill some but i need to tweak it so it really will work