Why Druidic Staff? The last thing you need is another weapon. The cost isn't worth the clunkiness it causes IMO. Otherwise, I agree with your changes.
I removed an Owl's Eye because of the strain on Air quanta, then simply filled its "slot" as a weapon with Druidic Staff as a cheaper alternative to the SoG. I'd have to do tests to see if the Weapon-to-FlyWeapon ratio is a problem, but 6:5 seems OK at a glance.
That said, I'm not sure -1 Owl's Eye was a great idea anymore, as you really can't afford to not draw one. Perhaps Falconion's variant is the most dependable vs AI4?