What do you play this against? bronze? silver? gold?
If bronze: Just rush. Forget about the controls and fill the deck with graboids/spectres.
If silver: You need a reliable counter to monoaether. SoFo/pulvy are good examples. Also include heals, they are very valuable in silver rush matches to buy you a turn or 2. Also need more speed to make silver games worthwhile. (logic: if this has same speed as pdails in plat, why don't i use pdails for plat instead?)
If gold: Well control bows are reliable in gold, but there are a lot more deck that could rip you apart before you set up... Also need a stallbreaker/tiebreaker, whatever you call it.
If plat: No.
I understand the
of the issue. Oty/SoFo/pulvy all competes for
. That's a hard decision, but well... you need some perm destroyers, not just 3 single use PC cards.
You got a lot of space to improve the rush issue though. But, one of the best rush creatures, elite charger, is
again...