Welcome to elements!
ScaredGirl has a stickied post in this forum here (
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5034.0.html) that shows how to enter a deck image instead of text. If you include it, you'll get more replies because most people have an easier time looking at the picture. You should also note which opponents you're targetting (AI3, FGs, etc).
You've got a lot going on in that deck. I recommend never taking less than five pillars of one element, cuz you'll never find them and you'll be stuck with cards you can't play. If you don't need five pillars, drop the element. To that end, I'd drop momentum and the time pillars and change your mark to time for starters.
There's a bunch of good decks on the forums, some of which are pretty similar to yours. Take a look and get some ideas.
Also, here's (
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5676.0.html) a great post that helps new players know how many pillars to build in a deck.
Good luck!