Anti-FG deathbow~ Needs help

[LongDono]

Ok I need to raise this decks ability to slay false gods.
A couple issues are..... Not enough stall early game, draw power?, perm control.
I have done some very limited testing in the trainer, and I like this deck and I think if I can make a few changes it will be awesome!
Note: fighting FG's in the trainer is not the same as the real game I have heard so please keep that in mind.
Results so far.
Graviton 1 win, 1 loss. ( 1/1 wins were EM's. )
Gemini 1 win, 0 losses. ( 1/1 wins were EM's. )
Destiny 1 win, 0 losses. ( 1/1 wins were EM's. )
Ferox 0 wins, 1 loss
Elidnis 0 wins, 1 loss
My loss to graviton was due to him having too many creatures and me having no way to block.
my loss to Ferox was due to the same reaso as graviton but I had even worse luck this game
Elidnis managed to poison me too much, if I would have had 1 more SoG I would have lived. I had just got his field clear and I was in 100% control with a bone wall that had about 20 bone shields, and an oyt.

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So what do you think?

[geekz_always_win]

Why death mark?

It'd be better to have time mark and death pendulums, not the other way around. If you draw more cards early, then you can draw your death pendulums and more quanta, etc.

[LongDono]

Yes I know, but I have this thing about using the same old thing that everyone else dose. Besides this kindof reflects what my Aeather bow is and that deck dose very well, though I must also admit again that  this deck is much larger and thus pendulum balance sucks I think...
Besides it would be hard to play any death cards if I don't draw pendulums. ( the point of this deck. )

Can I get away with adding 1 more death card?

[geekz_always_win]

Yes I know, but I have this thing about using the same old thing that everyone else dose. Besides this kindof reflects what my Aeather bow is and that deck dose very well, though I must also admit again that  this deck is much larger and thus pendulum balance sucks I think...
Besides it would be hard to play any death cards if I don't draw pendulums. ( the point of this deck. )

Can I get away with adding 1 more death card?

You only have 6 death cards and you have 10 time cards. Therefore, it would make more sense to use a time mark +death pendulums.

[LongDono]

Did you count basic quanta cost? Also I plan to add 1 more death card.

[ArtCrusade]

Add a Gray Nymph. With that amount of death it shouldn't be any problem to use her (finally I find a use for her)

[LongDono]

Good idea.... Ijust wont be able to use her.... T.T I dont have one..... yet.