Well, your image is a bit small so I'll post a bigger deck image for you.
7an 7an 7an 7an 7an 7an 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7ta 7tb 7tc 7tc 7tc 7tc 7tc 7tc 7td 7td 7td 7td 7td 7td 7um 7um 7um 7um 7um 7um
Blanks are 6 Dark Pendulums.
It looks like you have too many Siphon Lifes. They are useful, yes, but I'd take 3 or 4 at most.
You also might want to add another Eclipse simply so you draw it earlier, and also as a backup in case your first one gets blown up.
Finally, take 2~3 Steals. If the opponent plays any shield, it will slow you down. Permanent control is nice to have.
So, something like this, maybe?
7an 7an 7an 7an 7an 7an 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t4 7t9 7t9 7ta 7ta 7tb 7tc 7tc 7tc 7td 7td 7td 7td 7td 7td 7um 7um 7um 7um 7um 7um
Blanks are 6 Dark Pendulums.