Then people will complain about going WTF? when they do hit a voodoo with 9000+ damage, the doll dies, and nothing happens. Many are arguing that the card has to specify exactly what it will do, so I think it should be mentioned that it has to survive.
"If this creature survives an attack, damage and status are inflicted to your opponent. Damage is retroactive." would be fine, and "Voodoo:" could simply be removed from the text and only listed under passive skills.
The only reason status and damage would be moved to the end of the turn would be to clean up the text.
It makes no difference that I can see if the damage done to a Voodoo Doll is applied at end of turn or instantly...other than to clean up the text.
Example:
"I do 9000+ damage to your Voodoo Doll! It dies because it can't take that much damage. Nothing happens because it died."
That's how it works now anyway, I think.
More concise: Power up your Voodoo Doll, he takes all that lovely damage, you TU for the kill and you...end your turn and the damage is applied. Still no difference, other than dropping the "survive" bit. The point is, the damage & status effects are only ever applied as long as Voodoo Doll lives. Unless I'm missing something.
The reason the wording is sticky is due to the retroactive, or rather, the lack of the word "copy." Technically, ALL damage and status effects done to Voodoo Doll are retroactively applied to the Opponent. I simply chose the word because retro=behind and active=active. I felt people would instinctively get the concept that damage comes back again. Fine. But it still doesn't state specifically that the damage & status are retroactive
when copied.I like your wording, it's close, but not quite. The idea here is to be clear and concise. I know "Damage is retroactive" is like, murky-clear, and "Retroactive when copied" is a little closer. Ideally, I'd like to see "If Voodoo Doll is the target of a spell or ability, any damage and status effects are applied to your Opponent at the end of the turn. If Voodoo Doll is copied, any damage previously dealt to Voodoo Doll is retroactive."
Now there's a mouthful. Ugh. I don't know, I don't play the card often enough. What do you guys think? That's what the forum's for, right?
PS - This is eerily reminiscent of Empathic|Feral Bond.