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Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg487623#msg487623
« on: April 26, 2012, 03:10:05 am »
NAME:
Whirlwind
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
5 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5 + X | 5 + X
TEXT:
Grows with your :air. Cannot be played if you have less than 15 :air.
NAME:
Tornado
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
5 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
6 + X | 6 + X
TEXT:
Grows with your :air. Cannot be played if you have less than 15 :air.

ART:
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Occluded_mesocyclone_tornado1_-_NOAA.jpg
IDEA:
Rutarete
NOTES:
Growth rate is X = +3 (+4 upgraded) per 10 :air.
The reason for the requirement of >15 :air is for thematic-ness. It doesn't make much sense to have this little tiny clump of air be a tornado now, does it? Originally it was >20, but reduced to 15 after a playtest.
Edit: Forgot to mention, this art is placeholder art. If you have something better, please let me know.
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« Last Edit: June 22, 2012, 02:53:38 pm by Rutarete »
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Re: Tornado | Whirlwind https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg487625#msg487625
« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 03:12:56 am »
This sounds cool... posting to keep track.  :)
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Re: Tornado | Whirlwind https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg487649#msg487649
« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 04:15:37 am »
Really liking it. Thematically vicious. A nice take on the Tornado. I do think that the upgrade's name and the standard's name could be switched though.
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Re: Tornado | Whirlwind https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg487650#msg487650
« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 04:17:43 am »
Really liking it. Thematically vicious. A nice take on the Tornado. I do think that the upgrade's name and the standard's name could be switched though.
Noted, will fix the names tomorrow.
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg490391#msg490391
« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2012, 12:36:28 am »
Well, I forgot to change the names until now, but now it's done. Also a bump for more feedback. Is it crucible-ready?
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg494166#msg494166
« Reply #5 on: May 07, 2012, 07:35:41 am »
Pretty good and it seems pretty well-balanced. Good job, Rutarete! I think it is crucible ready.  ;)
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg494201#msg494201
« Reply #6 on: May 07, 2012, 11:49:29 am »
Tornadoes are not predictable IRL, so perhaps the cost should be lowered, and a random destruction mechanic should be added, such as `every time Tornado attacks, there is a chance it will destroy one of your own creatures or perms instead.`

Or, perhaps, just rename it to Air Elemental or some such.
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg504777#msg504777
« Reply #7 on: May 27, 2012, 09:47:27 pm »
Tornado is now in the crucible awaiting your votes! Go Tornado!
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg513697#msg513697
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 05:15:28 am »
I'd like to thank those who supported this in the crucible. There was a tie with Spider Web, and spider web won. Please continue to support it and provide feedback!
« Last Edit: June 22, 2012, 02:45:48 pm by Rutarete »
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg513710#msg513710
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2012, 05:38:12 am »
I would suggest changing the wording a bit. You have space, so there is no reason to not say "cannot be played if you have less than 15 :air".
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg513799#msg513799
« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2012, 12:35:37 pm »
Make the card tekst more clear
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Re: Whirlwind | Tornado https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39202.msg513819#msg513819
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2012, 02:53:55 pm »
Make the card tekst more clear
I would suggest changing the wording a bit. You have space, so there is no reason to not say "cannot be played if you have less than 15 :air".
Done.
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