Sinner | Wretch

[Pineapple]

I think you mean "Hoard" for Greed's skill name, not "Horde".
I suppose these cards are fine. Kinda fun, and not too powerful.

Heh, thanks Higurashi.

[Pineapple]

Okay, once 5 people vote "okay" in both of the polls, I'll send this in to the crucible.
Edit: Well, that was quick.

I'm starting not to like this card..I don't really see there being any way to fit this card in any deck except a dark-based rainbow deck structured for the sole purpose of making Sins..
Elements needs more cheap(in terms of how much of a deck must be reserved so the card works), situational cards.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Fix the discrepancies between the Text in the table and the card (For Wretch, the card image need to reflect the table's correct text)
-Provide a link or source of artwork that isn't your own (Or specifically, you should cite Wretch's art as being done by redium; if the others are done by you, you can leave that part blank)


Excluding those mistakes, the variances in 'Sins' are decent. (I suppose I personally embody Sloth in both element and in real life XD). I feel that Sinner | Wretch could be the 'rare' cards for Darkness, assuming the cost of Sinner | Wretch is decreased, while the ATK|HP values of some of the other sins (mainly Sloth, Wrath, Greed, and maybe Lust) increase. As you said - this would probably work best in a Darkness-based rainbow, but it'd be a fun card to use.

[Pineapple]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Fix the discrepancies between the Text in the table and the card (For Wretch, the card image need to reflect the table's correct text)
-Provide a link or source of artwork that isn't your own (Or specifically, you should cite Wretch's art as being done by redium; if the others are done by you, you can leave that part blank)

done.

Excluding those mistakes, the variances in 'Sins' are decent. (I suppose I personally embody Sloth in both element and in real life XD). I feel that Sinner | Wretch could be the 'rare' cards for Darkness, assuming the cost of Sinner | Wretch is decreased, while the ATK|HP values of some of the other sins (mainly Sloth, Wrath, Greed, and maybe Lust) increase. As you said - this would probably work best in a Darkness-based rainbow, but it'd be a fun card to use.

As I tried to balance the stats to include ability to buy 6 of the card, it being a rare card would definitely need a decrease in cost and boost in atk|hp, but those changes will be made (if ever) after it goes through all of those stages and then zanz likes it and adds it in the game..plus, i don't like rare cards that require a deck to be built around them (i.e. pharoahs D: )

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-You have a couple of card text discrepancies to fix still:

Wretch: The word 'Sins' needs to have the plural 's' removed to match the imageLust: The part in parenthesis needs to removed from the table so that the text reflects the card image

As I tried to balance the stats to include ability to buy 6 of the card, it being a rare card would definitely need a decrease in cost and boost in atk|hp, but those changes will be made (if ever) after it goes through all of those stages and then zanz likes it and adds it in the game..plus, i don't like rare cards that require a deck to be built around them (i.e. pharoahs D: )

Pharaohs are hard to build around, true, but that could be said of any rare card actually (most weapons, like flying adrenalined staves; arctic squid decks; decks with miracle; etc.). That said though, the card costs and abilities are probably good as is, and I'm glad that you managed to draw the filler art for your cards. (I like the concept of Sloth the best by the way)

[Pineapple]

CURATOR COMMENT
-You have a couple of card text discrepancies to fix still:

Wretch: The word 'Sins' needs to have the plural 's' removed to match the imageLust: The part in parenthesis needs to removed from the table so that the text reflects the card image

whoops, sorry about that. done.

As I tried to balance the stats to include ability to buy 6 of the card, it being a rare card would definitely need a decrease in cost and boost in atk|hp, but those changes will be made (if ever) after it goes through all of those stages and then zanz likes it and adds it in the game..plus, i don't like rare cards that require a deck to be built around them (i.e. pharoahs D: )

Pharaohs are hard to build around, true, but that could be said of any rare card actually (most weapons, like flying adrenalined staves; arctic squid decks; decks with miracle; etc.). That said though, the card costs and abilities are probably good as is, and I'm glad that you managed to draw the filler art for your cards. (I like the concept of Sloth the best by the way)

I liked my concept of Sloth the best too, but I didn't draw it very well..Just wondering: Do you see two eyes on the top and a smile or a drooping eyelid covering an eye with a bag under it? Cuz (hint-hint) those aren't two eyes on the top.. xD

[Pineapple]

Hey guys, we made it to the Crucible! (cue noisemaker)
Please vote for this card! :3