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Title: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 10, 2010, 05:24:58 pm
(http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2271/shrouder.png)
(http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2383/theshrouded.png)
NAME:
Shrouder
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
4 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|2
TEXT:
:darkness :darkness:Target creature is shrouded.
Shrouded: The first spell or ability that targets Shrouder has no effect.
NAME:
The Shrouded
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
3 :darkness
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4|3
TEXT:
:darkness :darkness:Target creature is shrouded.
Shrouded: The first spell or ability that targets The Shroudef has no effect.
ART:
Kamietsu
IDEA:
Kamietsu
NOTES:
Shourder(The Shrouded) comes into play shrouded. All targeting spells and abilities apply to the shrouded effect. Shrouder(The Shrouded) is still affected by all shields.
SERIES:

Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Boret on December 10, 2010, 05:35:35 pm
I like the idea, but isn't  :darkness  :darkness a bit too much for the skill?
I guess a shrouded creature will not be affected by Fire Bolts or Reverse Time (or any skill that target a specific creature), but it'll still be killed by Rain of Fire?
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Dragoon1140 on December 10, 2010, 05:57:57 pm
You know, I really like this card.  It's simple enough for the game to be added right now, yet doesn't create any stupidly-powerful combos.  Also, nice art, it's crispy clean.  :)

I would only like to see a +1 attack on it, but otherwise it's fine.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 10, 2010, 06:02:15 pm
I like the idea, but isn't  :darkness  :darkness a bit too much for the skill?
I guess a shrouded creature will not be affected by Fire Bolts or Reverse Time (or any skill that target a specific creature), but it'll still be killed by Rain of Fire?
No. Rain of fire still targets creatures. You'd have to use two rain of fires because the first one wouldn't affect Shrouder(The Shrouded)

And I think 2 darkness is ok for the ability. It's not the most powerful, but it's still somewhat powerful.

You know, I really like this card.  It's simple enough for the game to be added right now, yet doesn't create any stupidly-powerful combos.  Also, nice art, it's crispy clean.  :)

I would only like to see a +1 attack on it, but otherwise it's fine.
Thanks :D

I think the art isn't so good. I'm rather tired still, and was all through making it XP but glad you like it!

I wasn't sure at all what would seem balanced as far as attack goes. I felt a lower HP would be good for it, so it's not impossible to kill or anything. So i just gave it an attack i thought was decent. +1 might be good for it.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: coinich on December 10, 2010, 06:19:18 pm
I've wanted Quint and PA to work this way.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Ajit on December 10, 2010, 07:42:20 pm
I like it, but considering it is already semi-invulnerable because of its ability, I recommend lowering its HP to 1 for both upped and unupped.  Kind of a balancing thing, if its gonna take two spells to kill it, it shouldn't take any more than two spells.  And I don't see a thematic reason why it should be able to take hits either.

And sure, for a price of 4|3, I'd say up the attack of each by 1 as well.

That's just my attempt at better balancing.

Like the card :)
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: AnonymousRevival on December 11, 2010, 03:54:50 am
I think one time should be enough. No active abilities.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 11, 2010, 05:42:02 pm
Thanks for the suggestions everyone.

I think one time should be enough. No active abilities.
I feel that would underpower this card. Since you can't buff it until it's been targeted by a spell/ability, then once it's been buffed, you can just shroud it again to protect it. Making it a one time effect would sort of defeat the point and idea.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: AnonymousRevival on December 12, 2010, 06:52:50 am
But wouldn't it overpower if it can keep on negating the spells effects?
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: OldTrees on December 12, 2010, 06:59:08 am
But wouldn't it overpower if it can keep on negating the spells effects?
No. The simple fact is that Shrouded will just cause the opponent to delay until they have 2 targeting cards (the first could even be insufficient normally or even a buff). Once they have the two cards they destroy Shrouded without you getting a chance to replace the shroud.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Drobbit on December 12, 2010, 11:04:22 am
I really like this card. Very interesting idea and fits perfectly into darkness.
The shrouded idea could also be put in a new darkness armor: shrouding cloak. Very good alternative for quintesence.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 11:21:39 am
But wouldn't it overpower if it can keep on negating the spells effects?
No. The simple fact is that Shrouded will just cause the opponent to delay until they have 2 targeting cards (the first could even be insufficient normally or even a buff). Once they have the two cards they destroy Shrouded without you getting a chance to replace the shroud.
*nods* Don't forget about creature abilities, or weapon abilities. Those work the same way as spells. Not many opponents don't have some kind of creature with an ability, or weapon with a targeting ability. So like Oty, or Mind Flayer, it would just take two of them on the field to do something about this card. Such as the target of Oty, then the second Oty can eat it, or a spell could kill it, or whatever.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: AnonymousRevival on December 12, 2010, 11:30:27 am
But wouldn't it overpower if it can keep on negating the spells effects?
No. The simple fact is that Shrouded will just cause the opponent to delay until they have 2 targeting cards (the first could even be insufficient normally or even a buff). Once they have the two cards they destroy Shrouded without you getting a chance to replace the shroud.
But what about AI? Do they cast two spells in one turn?
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 11:32:17 am
But wouldn't it overpower if it can keep on negating the spells effects?
No. The simple fact is that Shrouded will just cause the opponent to delay until they have 2 targeting cards (the first could even be insufficient normally or even a buff). Once they have the two cards they destroy Shrouded without you getting a chance to replace the shroud.
But what about AI? Do they cast two spells in one turn?
If the AI targets it, obviously, only the shrouded effect will go away. But it's still on the field, and the AI targeted it in the first place, so I'd assume they would target it again if they could.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Drobbit on December 12, 2010, 11:34:58 am
There are a lot of ways to deal with this skill. You can also use a non-agressive ability like heal on it to desactivate the skill and then kill it.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 11:45:39 am
There are a lot of ways to deal with this skill. You can also use a non-agressive ability like heal on it to desactivate the skill and then kill it.
Yep! :D All in all, I think it's balanced because you can't even buff it (aside from nightfall/eclipse) without either wasting a spell/ability, using someone more useless on it first, or hoping the opponent only targets it once.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Drobbit on December 12, 2010, 11:54:51 am
did you read my suggestion about making a cloak that grants this ability? it would be awesome and there you have an alternative to quintesence for the darkness.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 12:01:07 pm
did you read my suggestion about making a cloak that grants this ability? it would be awesome and there you have an alternative to quintesence for the darkness.
Mhmm, i saw it. Initially, I had though to make the shrouded ability able to target any creature, but decided against it for whatever reason. But I think another semi-quint-like card isn't really what the game needs. It would just make creatures even harder to kill as it is. Or at least that's my take on it. Maybe I will put up a poll and see how many would like the Shrouded ability as a stand alone buff card.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: OldTrees on December 12, 2010, 04:29:17 pm
A standalone Shroud card would either
A) Not give the creature the refresh ability
B) Remove previous abilities

Instead of a standalone spell have a creature skill that can shroud other creatures.
That way you can refresh vs Mass CC and it doesn't Lobotomize the creature.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 06:10:32 pm
A standalone Shroud card would either
A) Not give the creature the refresh ability
B) Remove previous abilities

Instead of a standalone spell have a creature skill that can shroud other creatures.
That way you can refresh vs Mass CC and it doesn't Lobotomize the creature.
I think you have it confused a little. The Shrouded stand alone spell would be a one time buff. Not giving the creature the ability to continually shroud itself.

But if it did give the creature the ability to continually shroud itself, then yes, it's previous ability would be removed.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: OldTrees on December 12, 2010, 06:22:51 pm
A standalone Shroud card would either
A) Not give the creature the refresh ability
B) Remove previous abilities

Instead of a standalone spell have a creature skill that can shroud other creatures.
That way you can refresh vs Mass CC and it doesn't Lobotomize the creature.
I think you have it confused a little. The Shrouded stand alone spell would be a one time buff. Not giving the creature the ability to continually shroud itself.

But if it did give the creature the ability to continually shroud itself, then yes, it's previous ability would be removed.
My point is a one time shroud is not very useful and may not even be worth a card slot. However a creature that can shroud other creatures would be worth a card slot.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 12, 2010, 06:29:21 pm
Alright. I see your point. That does make sense. I'll have an updated card up soon.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: joebob777 on December 13, 2010, 04:12:29 am
im not sure if this is balanced or not but if shroud is a spell, pretty useless if it targets one, but if it shrouds all creatures on field (including opponent's) that might make a shorud card more useful
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 13, 2010, 01:11:00 pm
Card has been updated :D
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Ajit on December 13, 2010, 08:21:14 pm
Like the changes, looks ready to me
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Drobbit on December 13, 2010, 08:51:39 pm
Perfect!
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: AnonymousRevival on December 14, 2010, 12:02:49 am
I guess it is ready for the crucible. :)
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Essence on December 14, 2010, 06:54:41 am
The card is nonsensical.  It says "target creature", and then says that Shrouder isn't affected.  Why target a creature if the Shrouder itself is the one that's unaffected?
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: OldTrees on December 14, 2010, 07:11:52 am
The card is nonsensical.  It says "target creature", and then says that Shrouder isn't affected.  Why target a creature if the Shrouder itself is the one that's unaffected?
It targets a creature and gives it "Shrouded"
"Shrouded" negates 1 targeted effect
Shrouder starts "Shrouded"
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Essence on December 14, 2010, 07:38:59 am
Oh, I get it.  That's confusing; it looks like it's just a description of what Shrouded does, not a separate ability.
Title: Re: Shrouder | The Shrouded
Post by: Kamietsu on December 14, 2010, 01:55:09 pm
Oh, I get it.  That's confusing; it looks like it's just a description of what Shrouded does, not a separate ability.
You are right, and that's mostly what it's there for. To let people know what the ability does. But in the text in the table below notes it does come into play Shrouded. It would have an icon, or an overlay type of color, something to let you know that when you play it, it will be visibly shrouded so there won't be any confusion for the most part.
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