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Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292242#msg292242
« on: March 17, 2011, 02:59:25 am »
NAME:
Python
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
6 :death
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|3
TEXT:
:death :death : Strangle
Kill the target creature (less HP's).  This card gains 1 HP.  Poison your opponent.
NAME:
Elite Python
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
6 :death
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|4
TEXT:
:death :death : Strangle
Kill the target creature (less HP's).  This card gains 1 HP.  Poison your opponent.
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NOTES:
EDIT: Poison is one poison counter.
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292245#msg292245
« Reply #1 on: March 17, 2011, 03:01:57 am »
OP
way stronger than oty
despite the cost, it's very good
the fact that it's death makes it even better
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292248#msg292248
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2011, 03:04:45 am »
Quote from: TheIdioticIdiot on March 17, 2011, 03:01:57 am
OP
way stronger than oty
despite the cost, it's very good
the fact that it's death makes it even better

This is a moment where I think 'wtf was I thinking'.
I meant it for it to be 0|5 0|7.. Omfg xD
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292249#msg292249
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2011, 03:07:09 am »
Strangle is a Good Mechanic however the stats of the creature could be improved and in the process balanced.
0hp was a good choice IMO please keep it as such.

Stangle>Devour
The value of Devour is dependent on the starting hp of the Devouring creature.

I would drop the hp to 3|4. This would allow the cost to drop a bit as well.
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292254#msg292254
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2011, 03:21:14 am »
Quote from: OldTrees on March 17, 2011, 03:07:09 am
Strangle is a Good Mechanic however the stats of the creature could be improved and in the process balanced.
0hp was a good choice IMO please keep it as such.

Stangle>Devour
The value of Devour is dependent on the starting hp of the Devouring creature.

I would drop the hp to 3|4. This would allow the cost to drop a bit as well.
Fixed.  Thanks for input!
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292418#msg292418
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2011, 12:51:23 pm »
I don't really understand why it should poison your opponent.^^
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292427#msg292427
« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2011, 01:44:25 pm »
I agree a constrictor does not poison.
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292460#msg292460
« Reply #7 on: March 17, 2011, 03:28:20 pm »
Quote from: EmeraldTiger on March 17, 2011, 01:44:25 pm
I agree a constrictor does not poison.
What would be a better name for this creature?
Each creature it kills increases its virulent hold over the opponent.
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292463#msg292463
« Reply #8 on: March 17, 2011, 03:35:05 pm »
From Wikipedia: Agkistrodon Contortrix (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Agkistrodon_contortrix)
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292555#msg292555
« Reply #9 on: March 17, 2011, 07:06:04 pm »
Quote from: Kaos. on March 17, 2011, 03:35:05 pm
From Wikipedia: Agkistrodon Contortrix (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Agkistrodon_contortrix)
What are you suggesting?  What does this have to do with anything?
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg292603#msg292603
« Reply #10 on: March 17, 2011, 08:06:15 pm »
Quote from: MisterMello on March 17, 2011, 07:06:04 pm
What are you suggesting?  What does this have to do with anything?
Quote from: EmeraldTiger on March 17, 2011, 01:44:25 pm
a constrictor does not poison.
Quote from: OldTrees on March 17, 2011, 03:28:20 pm
What would be a better name for this creature?
Each creature it kills increases its virulent hold over the opponent.
Quote from: Kaos. on March 17, 2011, 03:35:05 pm
From Wikipedia: Agkistrodon Contortrix (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Agkistrodon_contortrix)
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Re: Python | Elite Python https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23038.msg293020#msg293020
« Reply #11 on: March 18, 2011, 02:31:57 am »
Poisoning mechanic is too complicated, you need to at least vaguely mention it in the card without possibly referring to a simpler mechanic that currently exists (the skill "poison", give 1 counter to the opponent)

Plus, you lots of stuff worded wrong. The text should read:
:death :death : Strangle
Kill the target smaller creature (less HP's). Python gains +0/+1. Poison your opponent.

But "Poison your opponent." still needs to be changed. I'd take out the HP gaining, and go with:

:death :death : Strangle
Kill the target smaller creature (less HP's). Poison your opponent depending on the target's HP's.

And remove the "(less HP's)" if necessary.
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