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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg377895#msg377895
« Reply #24 on: August 09, 2011, 12:00:58 pm »
yeah, graduated with a masters degree in advanced biotechnology, im now doing cancer research, were all doomed because i dont use proper punctuation on an internet message board. 

davidy, get over it.
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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378635#msg378635
« Reply #25 on: August 10, 2011, 05:48:48 pm »
Ok I'm confused now, should I reword the card better or should I leave it as is?

It's really starting to get off the topic of whether or not I should do that....

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378642#msg378642
« Reply #26 on: August 10, 2011, 05:59:52 pm »
keep it, alternate is the appropriate term for what you intended.
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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378794#msg378794
« Reply #27 on: August 11, 2011, 12:26:49 am »
Appropriate? Yes, If there's a link to the wiki in the game.

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378795#msg378795
« Reply #28 on: August 11, 2011, 12:31:35 am »
Appropriate? Yes, If there's a link to the wiki in the game.

While the wiki link isn't in the game, if you looked below the game screen... :P

I would leave as is, just my 2 cents. You could also make a poll.

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378820#msg378820
« Reply #29 on: August 11, 2011, 01:39:00 am »
if you want to spell it out for people exactly what the word 'alternate' means in the notes section of your first post in this thread, go for it, but the card text itself is fine for the purposes of the forum submission process. 
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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg378976#msg378976
« Reply #30 on: August 11, 2011, 08:23:50 am »
Poll added, let's see what everyone thinks.

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg379013#msg379013
« Reply #31 on: August 11, 2011, 10:41:54 am »
The second and third options contain grammatical errors. "Not it's own" can mean the quanta, pillar, or quanta pool.

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg379028#msg379028
« Reply #32 on: August 11, 2011, 12:01:24 pm »
oh. my. god. give it a rest.  those three are synonymous in this situation, wtz.

seriously, are you really unable to understand the intent of those options, or are you just being ornery?
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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg379271#msg379271
« Reply #33 on: August 12, 2011, 12:19:17 am »
oh. my. god. give it a rest.  those three are synonymous in this situation, wtz.

seriously, are you really unable to understand the intent of those options, or are you just being ornery?
I can understand the intent perfectly fine now that I've read the notes.

The three options are not equivalent. They only appear equivalent after adjusting them in your mind. It is not entirely unlikely that a card could be developed to make pillars give quanta to the opposing pool, hence the need for precise wording.

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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg379296#msg379296
« Reply #34 on: August 12, 2011, 01:31:17 am »
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Re: Paradigm Shift | Paradigm Shift https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29400.msg379351#msg379351
« Reply #35 on: August 12, 2011, 05:42:10 am »
i like it, but i think you should clear up the card text a bit, and make it a permanent. to use this as a spell, Zanz would have to change most of the coding for the entire card usage portion of the game, and then there would probably be serious bugs with that. as for the text, you might make it say 'you can use this ability 3 times' instead of '3 charges'.

 

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