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Re: Crocodile | Killer Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg153895#msg153895
« Reply #24 on: September 07, 2010, 01:50:30 pm »
i saw the egyptian thing straight away but maybe to clarify you should say 'nile crocodile/killer nile crocodile'
i like guolins wording best btw

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg154385#msg154385
« Reply #25 on: September 08, 2010, 09:52:09 am »
Major update.

Name changed.
Upped stats changed.
Upped cost changed.
Effects changed.
Wording changed.
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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg154454#msg154454
« Reply #26 on: September 08, 2010, 12:38:34 pm »
i guess it seems pretty good to me now that its all fixed.. just needs some picture obviously but that can come later. maybe make the upped name Elite Nile Crocodile just to keep it egyptian.
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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg154459#msg154459
« Reply #27 on: September 08, 2010, 01:00:34 pm »
Like your global idea.

For the flooded thing wording, maybe two lines :

"~ is also considered as a water creature."
"~ gains +0/+X in flooded areas."

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg154696#msg154696
« Reply #28 on: September 08, 2010, 08:13:10 pm »
cool card but epic art... :o
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Re: Crocodile | Killer Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg154986#msg154986
« Reply #29 on: September 09, 2010, 04:30:56 am »
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-Change the names in the table to match the names in the card images
-Your text on the card image is a tad bit too small. You need to increase the text size and fix the card accordingly to make it more visible to readers
-Fix the discrepancies between the Text in the table and the card image


Direct damage doesn't feel very Time, nor does direct Infection. In my opinion, it would be fine as a 5|3 for 4 :time. Would put it on par with Mummy, and give Time a good mid-range attacker. I don't mind the passive skill idea either. Mummy has one as well, after all.
Pretty much this. Drop the bleeding effect - even with a 'red' Death bauble (that icon would certainly look cool :D), the idea of Time getting an Infect ability seems kind of unoriginal and non-thematic to Time. The passive ability in itself should be focused on more (whatever it's called), where the Crocodile would survive in Flooding situations. The ATK|HP values and cost can stay the same.

If you do want to keep all of the text though, here are a few examples that you should probably change it to:

":water Bite:
Target creature takes 1 damage
and is bleeding. Nile Crocodile gains +0/+2
in Flooded areas instead of dying."

...but my personal suggestion would change it to this:

* = Can be substituted for another passive name for it

"Reptile*: Nile (Elite) Crocodile
gains +0/+2 in areas that are
Flooded, and does not die in
them."

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg155732#msg155732
« Reply #30 on: September 10, 2010, 02:56:23 pm »
with all the updates, (especially the artwork) this is one card I'd love to see in game.

1 damage to a creature, plus bleeding is a very nice little power.  Not dying in flooding and gaining defense is a beautiful counter for flooding, and appropriate to the idea of the card.

Not over powered, but versatile.

Well done.

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg160031#msg160031
« Reply #31 on: September 17, 2010, 03:00:24 pm »
Updated.

Took out the not dying in flooded areas effect.
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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg161179#msg161179
« Reply #32 on: September 19, 2010, 03:42:56 pm »
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-Fix the text for the non-upped card in the table: ":water Sneak Attack: Target creature takes 2 damage." should be ":water Sneak Attack: Deal 2 damage to target creature."


I kind of missed the flooding immunity, but this version seems a lot simpler and more fluid in concept (no pun intended). :P I also like the transition between 2 basic damage for the unupped ability turning into a 'bleed' bauble effect for the upgraded version.

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg161262#msg161262
« Reply #33 on: September 19, 2010, 06:11:34 pm »
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-Fix the text for the non-upped card in the table: ":water Sneak Attack: Target creature takes 2 damage." should be ":water Sneak Attack: Deal 2 damage to target creature."


I kind of missed the flooding immunity, but this version seems a lot simpler and more fluid in concept (no pun intended). :P I also like the transition between 2 basic damage for the unupped ability turning into a 'bleed' bauble effect for the upgraded version.
I liked the flood immunity, but it made the card too complex. Btw, fixd.
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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg161270#msg161270
« Reply #34 on: September 19, 2010, 06:25:11 pm »
Not dying in flood isn't really complex.

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Re: Nile Crocodile | Elite Crocodile https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=12289.msg161301#msg161301
« Reply #35 on: September 19, 2010, 07:10:11 pm »
Not dying in flood isn't really complex.
I tried to keep as less text as possible.
I think that excessive text is really boring.
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