Mermaid | Princess Mermaid

[Roseriya]

NAME: Mermaid ELEMENT: Water COST: 4  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 1 | 4 TEXT: While you have at least three creatures in play, increase your max hp by 2 per turn.	NAME: Princess Mermaid ELEMENT: Water COST: 4  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 1 | 4 TEXT: While you have at least three creatures in play, increase your max hp by 4 per turn.

ART: Yo_Chan IDEA: Roseriya NOTES: Feedback is welcome and necessary! SERIES:

[Nelde95]

I have no experience on creating cards (nor commenting on them), but I'd say that if this card was immaterial and referred to non-mermaid creatures rather than all other creatures I would actually like to see this card in the game.

[Roseriya]

I have no experience on creating cards (nor commenting on them), but I'd say that if this card was immaterial and referred to non-mermaid creatures rather than all other creatures I would actually like to see this card in the game.

They have to be your creatures under your control, not all creatures in the game.

[Nelde95]

I have no experience on creating cards (nor commenting on them), but I'd say that if this card was immaterial and referred to non-mermaid creatures rather than all other creatures I would actually like to see this card in the game.

They have to be your creatures under your control, not all creatures in the game.

I supose that's what I meant, sorry for the missunderstanding.

[artimies7]

Spoiler for what I thought:

Unda' da sea! Under the sea!
Unda' da seeeaah! Under the sea!

But seriously folds and yolks. This is an idea with potential, but it needs a bit of work.

It's worded a bit weirdly. I think if you change the mechanic a tiny bit, you can get a text that's far easier on the eyes. Try: For every creature in play, increase MHP by 1 each turn. Max of 5. (or eight, or six, or whatever's best for balance) Also for balance, increasing the max HP won't decrease the damage you've taken, but will add the buff to the other end of your health bar.

The art needs a bit of work; it's not very Elements-ey. I can whip up a drawing if nobody else can.

And I'd recommend increasing the cost by a couple quanta, just so rushes don't get out of hand.

[skyironsword]

I don't think it actually heals you outside of increasing your max HP.

No need for a cost increase.

[artimies7]

I don't think it actually heals you outside of increasing your max HP.

No need for a cost increase.

Oh, that's also an acceptable mechanic.

[Nepycros]

Fractal this along with some other cards and you've got a scary duo with Water and Aether...

Did I just use the Fractal argument? Yes I did. Aside from that, this card is fine! It's time something other than Light and Earth got their hands on health.

[Roseriya]

Updates:
+ 1  cost to balance fractal.
Wording on card to make more sense.
Upgraded card ability increased from +3 hp to +4 hp.

[Chapuz]

Mitosis + bond + cheap creatures are on the same element, so I think this should be buffed to be usable. Why at least 3 creatures?

[Anarook]

Before you go too far - is the art yours?
If not - did you get the person's permission to use it?

[ddevans96]

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