False Pretense | False Pretense

[SunnyGreens]

NAME: False Pretense ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 2 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: - TEXT: All healing is dealt as damage for two turns.  : Heal target for up to 3 HP.	NAME: False Pretense ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 0 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: - TEXT: All healing is dealt as damage for one turn.  : Heal target for up to 3 HP.

ART: http://www.sxc.hu/ IDEA: SunnyGreens NOTES: - COMPETITION: Another Epic 3 Card Design Challenge

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Type the word Darkness in the Element section of the table, and remove the icon. means Darkness quanta, and not the element Darkness. The two are not interchangeable.
-Add a  after the card's Cost in the Cost section of the table (i.e. - 2 )



So in other words, this is basically a Eagle's Eye that can counter Antimatter for two turns, correct

This sounds like a god send against enemies that use Heal, Purify, Bonds, Shards of Gratitude, and Miracle though... >_>

[SunnyGreens]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Type the word Darkness in the Element section of the table, and remove the icon. means Darkness quanta, and not the element Darkness. The two are not interchangeable.
-Add a  after the card's Cost in the Cost section of the table (i.e. - 2 )

Fixed.

So in other words, this is basically a Eagle's Eye that can counter Antimatter for two turns, correct

This sounds like a god send against enemies that use Heal, Purify, Bonds, Shards of Gratitude, and Miracle though... >_>

Also gives Holy Light more flexibility in Light decks.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT

Aside from the art link: http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1195513

Your picture seems ready to go! Please make sure to add that to the art section when you can. ^^;

[Nepycros]

Does the card die after 2 turns? I think it should remain on the field, since it's a way to heal yourself once the effect has expired.

[Uppercut]

I'd prefer a rewording of the card's first ability. As its currently worded it has no trigger to sacrifice (which I assume is intentional) yet stays in play with an ability that nerfs healing for 2 turns...for the duration its in play? I think it should be reworded to have counters.

I also don't really like the card.  is not an element that CCs through removal, nor is it a color that burns the opponent directly. While this is technically a  it only functions as one for the purpose of flavor, but not as far as actual card functionality.

[AnonymousRevival]

Make the light effect up to 5HPs.

[kobisjeruk]

This card seems powerful in that it literally stops healing effect and made it a drawback by hurting the owner of said healing effect. And in a glance, it seems powerful because the existence of the most broken healing effect that are readily available for all element; Shard of Gratitude. Unfortunately, at least to me it seems this effect is too narrow to stand on its own. The genius thing about this card is that it has a built-in effect that can do some wonders even if your opponent is not using any heal effect of their own. Only that permanent with 1 turn limit usually cannot use the ability on the same turn which means you either have to reword the text to something along the line of making it a trigger effect instead of increase the turn to 2 as it was in unupgraded form.
Rework text for trigger effect replacement :-
All healing is dealt as damage for one turn. Heal target for up to 3 HP. Use up as you play this card.