I find it interesting on how you managed to make Time 'lucky'.
I have some good new and bad news regarding the card image itself.
Good news: you can probably shorten the text (or if Zanz wanted to implement the card as is, he could shorten the text easily by placing a cooldown mechanic on it and make the description more concise). I don't think I saw any formatting issues (maybe a misplaced spacing error in the card text/table), so this seems pretty good.
Bad news:
Before you submit it to the crucible, provide a quick image of you having written permission from the guy or change the art... but I love the idea nonetheless.
(Lifetime is the more appropriate synergy-name between the two elements now, eh?)