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Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg270796#msg270796
« on: February 14, 2011, 05:57:47 pm »
NAME:
Fire Scorpion
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
3 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|1
TEXT:
Pyrotoxin: add X/20 poison damage to each successful attack. X = number of  :fire you own. Catches fire upon attack.
NAME:
Red Scorpion
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
3 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|3
TEXT:
Pyrotoxin: add X/20 poison damage to each successful attack. X = number of  :fire you own. Catches fire upon attack.
ART:
EmeraldTiger
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az4rel, Werdbooty and OldTrees
NOTES:
poll said catching fire means get poisoned and +1|0
SERIES:
scorps. deathstalker (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,9468.msg120682#msg120682) forest scorpion (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,9441.msg120304#msg120304) dune scorpion (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,9467.msg120675#msg120675) all by zanz, added for reference.







I started this because I wanted to make a scorp. series but then I noticed that poison for every element would be bad for death.
so I did just this one.

also for I was thinking that I could give it some Hp lower the attack and change it to damage dealt to opp max Hp. thus  preventing healing.
if people like the idea i'll finish the table and submit to crucible.

the art is just a filler.

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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg270805#msg270805
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2011, 06:24:49 pm »
So.... it doesn't need a buff to make at least one attack, and once it's buff, its attack power is much, much higher than normal scorps...?

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I mean, having HP equal 0 instead of attack is an interesting idea, but the card needs to be rescaled (ex - make attack power 0 as well), or else it would be a bit overpowered.
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg270811#msg270811
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2011, 06:43:13 pm »
u'r rigth but a 0|0 fire creature, make not much sense.
maybe 1|0?
as making it enter poisoned does not fit in the card.

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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg270830#msg270830
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2011, 07:30:46 pm »
0|2 \ 0|3 the poison counter becomes red. Pyrotoxin base additional on :fire
make it somewhat like dune scorpion.
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271020#msg271020
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2011, 12:08:39 am »
0|2 \ 0|3 the poison counter becomes red. Pyrotoxin base additional on :fire
make it somewhat like dune scorpion.
the thing is that fire creatures usually have low hp and high attack it would make sense for this to be capable of attacking but dieing fast.
maybe instead of poison I should make a 2|1 scorp that lowers max health.

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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271025#msg271025
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2011, 12:12:32 am »
0|2 \ 0|3 the poison counter becomes red. Pyrotoxin base additional on :fire
make it somewhat like dune scorpion.
the thing is that fire creatures usually have low hp and high attack it would make sense for this to be capable of attacking but dieing fast. How about making it vulnerable to its own poison?
maybe instead of poison I should make a 2|1 scorp that lowers max health.
it would be: Whenever this card deals poisonous damage it suffers as well
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271029#msg271029
« Reply #6 on: February 15, 2011, 12:21:49 am »
0|2 \ 0|3 the poison counter becomes red. Pyrotoxin base additional on :fire
make it somewhat like dune scorpion.
the thing is that fire creatures usually have low hp and high attack it would make sense for this to be capable of attacking but dieing fast. How about making it vulnerable to its own poison?
maybe instead of poison I should make a 2|1 scorp that lowers max health.
it would be: Whenever this card deals poisonous damage it suffers as well
I was thinking about that but i cant make it fit the card is too much text.

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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271534#msg271534
« Reply #7 on: February 15, 2011, 11:42:09 pm »
Here's a wording that fits. But barely.
Pyrotoxin:  Add one poison damage to this creature for each poison damage dealt by this creature to the opponent. 
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271734#msg271734
« Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 05:10:06 am »
Here's a wording that fits. But barely.
Pyrotoxin:  Infect this creature for each poison dealt by this creature to the opponent.
Fixed?
(Even more condensed: Pyrotoxin: Infect this creature and poison the opponent each attack.)
This ^ is an interesting Venom variant.

Pyrotoxin is sure to be used combined with Basilisk Blood and/or Heavy Armor.
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271741#msg271741
« Reply #9 on: February 16, 2011, 05:20:35 am »
Huh, sounds like a nerf to poison. But I still like it :D

About the effect (not the wording). The scorp could get 1 damage each turn it deals poison, and give as many poison counters as fire quanta/20, rounded up (pretty much the same as 1+ :fire/20 rounded down). And Pyrotoxine sounds good.

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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg271769#msg271769
« Reply #10 on: February 16, 2011, 06:27:32 am »
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Re: Fire Scorpion | Red Scorpion https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21191.msg272063#msg272063
« Reply #11 on: February 16, 2011, 08:52:11 pm »
it isn't very good imo
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