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Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405285#msg405285
« on: October 06, 2011, 01:01:43 pm »
NAME:
Disorder Buckler
ELEMENT:
Entropy
COST:
3 :entropy
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Shield: Swap weapons if your opponent's hits you. Any damage from spells is reflected.
NAME:
Disorder Shield
ELEMENT:
Entropy
COST:
4 :entropy
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Shield: Reduce damage by 1. Swap weapons if your opponent's hits you. Damage spells are reflected.
ART:
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IDEA:
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NOTES:
Right now, Dissipation Shield / Field are very niche shields which only work for decks with tons of quanta. This shield provides an alternative for an element that sorely needs another option, much like how Light's shields are too specific to stand alone, but in total they provide a good variety of options for different types of Light decks.

Entropy has many answers to creatures, but few answers to spells. This may help.
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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405292#msg405292
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2011, 01:20:11 pm »
As I mentioned in Chat, the two effects could easily be split up into two different shields. I like both the effects though.

And congratulations on posting your first card idea!
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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405304#msg405304
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2011, 01:38:58 pm »
As I mentioned in Chat, the two effects could easily be split up into two different shields. I like both the effects though.

And congratulations on posting your first card idea!
Scaredgirl, similarly, feels that the Weapon Swap effect and the Chaos Seed effect are too unrelated to find a home on the same card

The reactive Chaos Shield effect could be its own card for sure and stand as a simple counterpart to Fire Shield for 5|4 :entropy quanta. However, I want to think about this further and gather more feedback if I can before making such a change.


For the purpose of discussion and disclosure, here are some other versions of the card which were discarded:

"When struck by a weapon, this shield swaps your weapon with your opponent's. When your opponent alters your quanta or alters your hand, you heal 2 HP" This shield would have been used to hand your opponent Discord and heal back some of the damage as well as serve as a soft counter to denial. And there are certain situations where being hit by a Discord effect is desirable, like a rainbow wherein you have a very tight budget in a certain element but have quanta to spare in several others.



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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405344#msg405344
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2011, 03:11:24 pm »
I really like the idea; casting chaos seed on attackers is cool, and having a second shield option in entropy would be really nice.

I'm a little unsure about the weapon swapping; the card might actually be better without that.  In order to make the best use of this card, you'd be better off without a weapon.  I mean, otherwise you're giving your opponent a discord or something to hit you with for a turn.

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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405346#msg405346
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2011, 03:17:28 pm »
I really like the idea; casting chaos seed on attackers is cool, and having a second shield option in entropy would be really nice.

I'm a little unsure about the weapon swapping; the card might actually be better without that.  In order to make the best use of this card, you'd be better off without a weapon.  I mean, otherwise you're giving your opponent a discord or something to hit you with for a turn.
It's looking likely that I'll end up splitting these ideas off into two separate cards, thanks for adding your feedback to the group that's small but growing there. :D

Now then, as to the weapon swapping. Handing your opponent a Discord enables some cool tricks. For instance, you can run a mono or duo deck that has some splash cards and intentionally hand your opponent a Discord so that your Fate Eggs, Mutations, or even just a handful of creatures with low-cost skills can be paid for. All the speed and reliability of a good mono/duo plus, when you're ready to hand your opponent a Discord, all the flexibility of a rainbow!

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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405352#msg405352
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2011, 03:39:20 pm »
I disagree with one statement, and that is that
Right now, Dissipation Shield / Field are very niche shields that require tons of quanta to play. This shield provides an alternative for an element that sorely needs another option, much like how Light's shields are too specific to stand alone, but in total they provide a good variety of options for different types of Light decks.

The reason I disagree is due to the simple fact that :entropy has so many other ways to deal with creatures that in fact does not need another shield.  While all are obviously situational, they have Maxwell's Demon, Chaos Seed, Pandemonium, Antimatter, as well as Fallen Elf (to an extent) to use for CC in addition to Discord (denial IS control, you know:P).  Keep in mind, this is not a comment on the card itself, which I like, but rather your reasoning for justifying its existence. 
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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg405357#msg405357
« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2011, 03:49:03 pm »
Can I pester you for your general feedback on the card beyond "I like it" by chance? This is actually great feedback regarding my card notes which I'll get to, but I'd love card feedback while you're stopping by, if ya don't mind. :D

I disagree with one statement, and that is that
Right now, Dissipation Shield / Field are very niche shields that require tons of quanta to play. This shield provides an alternative for an element that sorely needs another option, much like how Light's shields are too specific to stand alone, but in total they provide a good variety of options for different types of Light decks.

The reason I disagree is due to the simple fact that :entropy has so many other ways to deal with creatures that in fact does not need another shield.  While all are obviously situational, they have Maxwell's Demon, Chaos Seed, Pandemonium, Antimatter, as well as Fallen Elf (to an extent) to use for CC in addition to Discord (denial IS control, you know:P).  Keep in mind, this is not a comment on the card itself, which I like, but rather your reasoning for justifying its existence.
Thank you for adding those considerations to the discussion! It's true that even though they go about it in different ways, reactive Chaos Seed and Diss Shield both ultimately wind up being primarily a way to reduce incoming damage from creatures.

What if the weapon-swap shield was simply made into a spell-reflecting shield and the reactive CS was moved to a new shield?

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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg406982#msg406982
« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 12:42:03 pm »
Reworked the card. Updating OP shortly. Can has go to Crucible yet? ;D



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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg407025#msg407025
« Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 03:26:52 pm »
I like the weapon swap. Does protect artifact stop this from working? Also i found a typo on the upped - in the last line: pells in stead of spells
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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg407034#msg407034
« Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 03:55:00 pm »
Quick note here, Gumbeh - It says "Damage pells" on the upgraded card instead of "Damage spells".

Interesting take on what a shield can do.

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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg407045#msg407045
« Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 04:23:08 pm »
What happens if you or them has no weapon? Do you still swap?

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Re: Disorder Shield | Disorder Buckler https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=32074.msg407164#msg407164
« Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 08:45:12 pm »
What happens if you or them has no weapon? Do you still swap?
As long as you are hit by their weapon, you both instantly Steal each other's weapon. If you're not currently holding one, bully for you! They can ofc retrieve their weapon by hitting you with another one - though if you are a tricky punk, Animate Weapon will yield entertaining results.

Regarding PA/Morning Glory, Disorder Shield would work on them. "If your opponent's weapon hits you"
Animate Weapon can work on protected weapons, after all, and damage shields work just fine on quinted creatures. Titan already isn't affected by shields, so if Morning Glory also ignores this shield, 17% of the cool weapons are immune to the defining shtick of this shield. How you think Mr. Disorder gonna pay da bills if nobody will play with him?


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Or I could play with the liquor dispenser from here: http://www.b-risingsun.com/2007/09/liquor_dispenser.html
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