CURATOR COMMENT-You need to add the elemental icon after the card's COST in the table for both cards (it should read "4
" instead of just '4', to match the card image).
Please try to do this for the rest of your Avatar Series if you can Ignion! ^^;
-Specific idea has been done before.~
~ = Hey Ignion, you may want to look at this:
and also this:
Basically, while the majority of your Avatar cards are original and fairly interesting, these two (Darkness Avatar) cards cannot (under -any- circumstances) move up into the Crucible with their current mechanic, since it basically copies from the Trickster/Blue Mage ideas already in the Armory. While I like the way you interpreted the skill, two people have already been acknowledged for the same mechanic idea - I can't let anymore cards with that same concept go into the system, so you -need- to think of a different ability. ^^;
Also, all of your cards are -almost- ready for the Crucible, excluding the COST issue (as I outlined above). Once those are addressed for the entire series, I'll move each card to the according element poll in Level 1 (except this one unless the skill changes). Thanks again for understanding the situation.
By the way - WELCOME to the Card Ideas & Art (or CIA
) board! Feel free to P.M. me with any questions you have regarding card formatting and other issues if necessary.