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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg252605#msg252605
« Reply #24 on: January 20, 2011, 03:50:07 pm »
Thanks for pointing that out. They are all fixed now  :)

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg252690#msg252690
« Reply #25 on: January 20, 2011, 06:58:20 pm »
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-You need to add the elemental icon after the card's COST in the table for both cards (it should read "4 :darkness" instead of just '4', to match the card image). Please try to do this for the rest of your Avatar Series if you can Ignion! ^^;
-Specific idea has been done before.~


~ = Hey Ignion, you may want to look at this:



and also this:



Basically, while the majority of your Avatar cards are original and fairly interesting, these two (Darkness Avatar) cards cannot (under -any- circumstances) move up into the Crucible with their current mechanic, since it basically copies from the Trickster/Blue Mage ideas already in the Armory. While I like the way you interpreted the skill, two people have already been acknowledged for the same mechanic idea - I can't let anymore cards with that same concept go into the system, so you -need- to think of a different ability. ^^;

Also, all of your cards are -almost- ready for the Crucible, excluding the COST issue (as I outlined above). Once those are addressed for the entire series, I'll move each card to the according element poll in Level 1 (except this one unless the skill changes). Thanks again for understanding the situation. :)


By the way - WELCOME to the Card Ideas & Art (or CIA ;) ) board! Feel free to P.M. me with any questions you have regarding card formatting and other issues if necessary.

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg252828#msg252828
« Reply #26 on: January 20, 2011, 09:55:42 pm »
Hi, Kuroaitou.

Thanks 4 the tips. I'm out of town for a little while, but I'll be sure to make those corrections when I get back. No problem about the dark avatar's skill. I like coming up with new ideas. I'll do that during my 2 more hours of drive. :)

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254939#msg254939
« Reply #27 on: January 23, 2011, 05:09:20 am »
Just wiping my prvious msg  :0

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254974#msg254974
« Reply #28 on: January 23, 2011, 06:51:50 am »
OK. So, I changed dark avatar's skills  :)
You can check on the front page, but for your convenience, here they are:

Dark Illusion: As long as this card is on the field, all numeral values are invisible to your opponent.

(upped) Shadow Illusion: As long as this card is on the field, every card will look like this card to your opponent.

I suppose there will be some questions, so I'll go ahead and explain some. So, for dark illusion, your opponent has no idea what any creature's attack|Hp are, your or his/her LPs are, how many quanta you or s/he has. But, this is only an illusion, so the game play will carry out just the same. It just makes it confusing to your opponent. So, maybe instead of seeing 2|4, maybe your opponent sees X|X. All quanta will have "X" instead of numbers. Or, whatever makes sense and easier for the programmer. For shadow illusion, every card's image is swapped with this card image ONLY TO YOUR OPPONENT. You can still see just fine, but your opponent can't tell which card is which! Then again, this is just an illusion, so the game play carries out the same, still it'd make things pretty tough for your opponent :P

I hope you like them!

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254975#msg254975
« Reply #29 on: January 23, 2011, 06:56:58 am »
Wow, it may be quite too much. But IDK, since your opponent can still target your creatures...

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254976#msg254976
« Reply #30 on: January 23, 2011, 07:03:10 am »
Yes, s/he still can do everything fine. It's only "visually confusing." If they have a good memory, they could even remember which creature/permanent was in which square. But, of course, it'll increase the chance of targeting a wrong creature, etc. :)

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But, I'm fine as you can see lol....

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254977#msg254977
« Reply #31 on: January 23, 2011, 07:08:00 am »
Yes, s/he still can do everything fine. It's only "visually confusing." If they have a good memory, they could even remember which creature/permanent was in which square. But, of course, it'll increase the chance of targeting a wrong creature, etc. :)
I hope it's not OP, I mean...

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254978#msg254978
« Reply #32 on: January 23, 2011, 07:13:08 am »
What happened to your dancing bear by the way?

Ummm,,,, alive.... maybe.... or..... I'm haunting my computer to finish the work I've started....  :P


I personally don't think it'd be OP, but I'll wait to hear from more people. If anything, I can always modify to target only certain cards (like creatures only?), but we'll see.

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg254999#msg254999
« Reply #33 on: January 23, 2011, 08:12:09 am »
What happened to your dancing bear by the way?
He went to work along with yoggi the bear or in a milk advert. But IDK :P

I personally don't think it'd be OP, but I'll wait to hear from more people. If anything, I can always modify to target only certain cards (like creatures only?), but we'll see.
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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg255002#msg255002
« Reply #34 on: January 23, 2011, 08:26:51 am »
Haha. Yea, after I said it, it sounded better than every card. With your vote, I've no doubt, so I went ahead and changed it.

Just in case anybody wonders, this is every creature, so it includes opponent's creatures. Opponent can still use them fine, but s/he wouldn't know which creature or creature's skill s/he is activating. (then again, if they are your cards, you very likely remember what they are or where they are, so it probably won't be as bad). ;)

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Re: Dark Avatar | Shadow Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19610.msg263364#msg263364
« Reply #35 on: February 03, 2011, 05:39:24 am »
Just in case anyone is not subscribed to the series thread where I made the general announcement, this avatar is now in crucible. So, if you like this card, please cast your vote  ;D

Thank you  ;)

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