Sagittarius | Sagittarius

[jmdt]

For the upgraded version I would keep snipe at 2 and adjust accordingly.  Several of these with 1 cost would be very powerful.

[twinsbuster]

The cost of the upped version is already adjusted to 6.

[Kuroaitou]

Hm... Even though I'm still against the idea of creatures named after the Zodiac, this creature could be something that's implemented by Zanz (as a different element/name, possibly). I take back the strikethrough part; time needs better creature control.

Does your card have 'Ranged' as the passive? If so, you probably shouldn't have to put that in the table (Both the Airbourne and Ranged passives aren't on any cards yet). Also, your card NEEDS to have the word, 'Sniper' in the description text box, because otherwise the player doesn't know what exactly the two quanta is used for.

Instead of:

"Snipe
Deal 3 damages to the target creature, ranged"

Try:

" : Sniper
Deals 3 damage to the
target creature."

...in the ability text box, and change your ability description to match the above. It looks a lot more elegant this way. Also, get rid of the (rare) part after the creature - just mention that in your notes.

NAME: Sagittarius ELEMENT: Time COST: 5  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 3|7 ABILITY: : Sniper Deals 3 damage to the target creature	NAME: Sagittarius ELEMENT: Time COST: 6  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 3|8 ABILITY: : Sniper Deals 3 damage to the target creature

ART: pic of Saint Seiya edited by twinsbuster http://d.yimg.com/mw/nimage/081ca2ef822af1d4 (http://d.yimg.com/mw/nimage/081ca2ef822af1d4) IDEA: twinsbuster NOTES: we need more "ranged" creatures as the new version release SERIES: Zodiac Series http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,8964.0.html (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,8964.0.html)

[twinsbuster]

I only hope Zanz can look about it...at least

actually I just copy the description from Eagles' Eye
anyway thanks for your help and I'll try to adjust it later

[Kael Hate]

CURATOR COMMENT

To get to the Crucible

- Link to an actual copy of the picture you edited and not some random St Seiya Picture
http://media.photobucket.com/image/sagittarius%20seiya/LonaFEagle/Saint%20Seiya%20AKA%20Knights%20of%20the%20Zodiac/Gold%20Saints/shun031024x768.jpg?o=35
- Add the icon to the costs in the table
- Fix the disparity between the Table and the card image. The text in the table needs to be the same as the Card image and include cost icons.

[twinsbuster]

thanks for your review, I know it is very time consuming to comment on every card idea

so...is it ok now?