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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg330622#msg330622
« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2011, 03:49:54 pm »
I actually like it. It's semi random, in that the creature remains the same...
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331185#msg331185
« Reply #13 on: May 11, 2011, 02:34:20 am »
I actually like it. It's semi random, in that the creature remains the same...
Agreed. A good way to separate it from Fallen Druid would be to make it a more defensive or offensive card. GotP is a good example. Perhaps 5/4 for 5 :aether with its ability would be a card I would use. Or you could even make it so that it would effect all creatures, not just ones with abilities. All things that would help.
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331193#msg331193
« Reply #14 on: May 11, 2011, 02:45:49 am »
very nice card, love the idea but maybe  a picture of the entire bird. ;D

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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331201#msg331201
« Reply #15 on: May 11, 2011, 02:54:47 am »
what i was reffering to was that Flux bird's ability is just like fallen druid but not half as good, if you know what i mean. i feel it needs something else entirely.

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well you could make it have chaos seed since you want a  :entropy skill.

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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331426#msg331426
« Reply #16 on: May 11, 2011, 01:06:02 pm »
very nice card, love the idea but maybe  a picture of the entire bird. ;D
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331911#msg331911
« Reply #17 on: May 12, 2011, 02:02:16 am »
I actually like it. It's semi random, in that the creature remains the same...
Agreed. A good way to separate it from Fallen Druid would be to make it a more defensive or offensive card. GotP is a good example. Perhaps 5/4 for 5 :aether with its ability would be a card I would use. Or you could even make it so that it would effect all creatures, not just ones with abilities. All things that would help.
You think this card can be a 5|4 for 5 :aether without being OP?
I got to have a curator look at this...
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331931#msg331931
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2011, 02:28:36 am »
I actually like it. It's semi random, in that the creature remains the same...
Agreed. A good way to separate it from Fallen Druid would be to make it a more defensive or offensive card. GotP is a good example. Perhaps 5/4 for 5 :aether with its ability would be a card I would use. Or you could even make it so that it would effect all creatures, not just ones with abilities. All things that would help.
You think this card can be a 5|4 for 5 :aether without being OP?
I got to have a curator look at this...
5|4 for 5 would be OP.
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331971#msg331971
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2011, 03:23:50 am »
Good thing i asked. Now is this card crucible worthy?
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg331975#msg331975
« Reply #20 on: May 12, 2011, 03:30:24 am »
Good thing i asked. Now is this card crucible worthy?
It is crucible ready. The card has been refined as much as I can see it being refined.
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg332051#msg332051
« Reply #21 on: May 12, 2011, 06:17:38 am »
It is crucible ready. The card has been refined as much as I can see it being refined.
Not in terms of formatting, unfortunately. ;)

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-Try to capitalize the names of the cards accordingly for your card image/title thread/NAME section of the table (Bird of Infinity, Flux Bird)
-Add an  :aether elemental icon after the card's COST ('4 :aether' instead of just '4', as the latter number by itself implies you use random quanta to play the card)
-Leave the SERIES section of the last table blank if the card isn't part of a Series
-Try to capitalize the name of the card's ability in the image/TEXT section of the table:

It should read:
":entropy :entropy: Erratic Fluctuation
Target creature's ability is
replaced by a random one"

I would personally have the text focus on 'active' skills only, assuming it works like a random lobotomy/mutation that grants a random active skill accordingly (i.e. - it shouldn't work on Ghost of the Past, Mummy, or Skeleton, because those cards only have passive (perpetual? I forgot what OT called it :P) skills that can't be removed, in contrast to active skills that can be changed accordingly. Is there a reason why Mind Gate's "Duality" skill isn't included alongside the list of skills that can be granted by the creature?

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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg332169#msg332169
« Reply #22 on: May 12, 2011, 01:00:50 pm »
Thank you for the criticism kuroaitou. I'll get it done later in the evening after college.

*EDIT*: finally fixed the formatting for the card info... i had business with RL these 3 last days
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Re: Bird of infinity | Flux bird https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25858.msg335639#msg335639
« Reply #23 on: May 17, 2011, 06:24:32 pm »
alright, sry for double post but i want to make sure this card is correctly done now.
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