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Re: Powder Vampire | Elite Powder https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11896.msg150462#msg150462
« Reply #12 on: September 02, 2010, 12:01:28 am »
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-You need to add the quanta icons ( :darkness) in the 'Cost' section of the table. As it is now, you're implying that the card costs 4 generic quanta, which is wrong compared to the card (4  :darkness)
-Add the 'Art by ratchamer' to the image (bottom left corner of the artwork) to provide credit to him
-Fix the numerous differences between your Card Text found on the card and within the table ('Expanding Powder'?)
-* Try to make the wording a bit more concise

* = Just a suggestion. Example:

 :gravity Absorb: Destroy a card
in your hand. Vampire Powder
gains +2|+0. Damage dealt is
returned to you as healing.


Tis' a very cute idea, even though it seems bizarre (Vampire Powder? O_o).

 

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