Simon's Story by Hobnob5000
A bit short but as long as the content's there it's fine. the ending was extremely obvious but I can't see why all the nymphs would decide to help out and why did they kill the Pharaoh as he'd done nothing wrong. I have no idea why the light nymph was so sympathetic, it surely should've seen other creatures be attacked and done nothing (circle of life) also I can see why simon fell in love (or whatever) but why did the nymph? But the ending (last line) was great.
Yes, the ending was obvious. Aren't all Romances obvious?
![Tongue :P](https://elementscommunity.org/forum/Smileys/solosmileys/tongue.gif)
As for your other points, I spose I needed it to have some basis of a plot. That and I suck at writing.
The last line was just for you
![Tongue :P](https://elementscommunity.org/forum/Smileys/solosmileys/tongue.gif)
Also, when does voting end?