Simon's Story by Hobnob5000
A bit short but as long as the content's there it's fine. the ending was extremely obvious but I can't see why all the nymphs would decide to help out and why did they kill the Pharaoh as he'd done nothing wrong. I have no idea why the light nymph was so sympathetic, it surely should've seen other creatures be attacked and done nothing (circle of life) also I can see why simon fell in love (or whatever) but why did the nymph? But the ending (last line) was great.
Yes, the ending was obvious. Aren't all Romances obvious?
As for your other points, I spose I needed it to have some basis of a plot. That and I suck at writing.
The last line was just for you
Also, when does voting end?