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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg235776#msg235776
« Reply #84 on: December 29, 2010, 10:32:47 pm »
I was refering to the FG in the game hermes using farheinheit. The story is game related :P
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« Reply #85 on: December 30, 2010, 12:33:15 am »
Yeah, I realized that right after making the post. But I also did a bit of extra research, and it is true that Hermes has no rule over fire, but he invented it, according to the myths. My bad!

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg235868#msg235868
« Reply #86 on: December 30, 2010, 12:35:33 am »
Lol dude. No harm done, it's all good :)
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg235950#msg235950
« Reply #87 on: December 30, 2010, 04:43:44 am »
Here is my story for Trident/Poseidon.
 One time, while Zanzarino was looking for a ghost (he was a ghost buster and a game maker,) he found a diary. The cover of the diary said Poseidon A.K.A. Jake's diary. Zanzarino read many things in it. He learned that Adam was in love with Katy, and that Katy was in love with Jake. Jake didn't want to be in a relationship though. Jake hated Adam, because in the third grade, Adam didn't invite Jake to his slumber party. Jake was so tired of Katy hitting on him, that he asked Katy what she wanted. "I want you!" Katy said. Jake didn't want her. Jake decided to help Adam, so Katy would stop bugging him. Jake told Adam to be nice to Katy and be his self. Katy still didn't like Adam because he was so stupid, and Katy started to hate Adam. Adam got really mad that Katy started hating him. Adam got really depressed because he was an idiot and was hated by the love of his life. He decided to end it. With Adam gone, there was nothing Jake could do to get Katy to stop liking him. One day, Jake overheard Katy talking to Amy. Katy and Amy were going to the pool on Saturday. That Friday, Jake wanted to make a weapon, to attack Katy with. In his den, Jake was watching television, and a family was eating. Jake noticed the pointy fork. Jake took a 2 wooden sticks, and on one of them, he made the top pointy. With the other, he curved it and made both ends pointy. He stuck the curved wood on top of the wood at the top, like a fork. He called this weapon a trident because it had 3 prongs, he was in his den, and he likes the letter t. Jake decided to change his name. He was listening to Old MacDonald's Had a Farm. They started singing about an opossum. Jake took the 3rd, 4th, and 5th letter and made it the first 3 letters of his name. Then he added EIEIO, but took out EIO. Jake then added den to his name, because that's where he was, his den, but since den was in Trident, he decided to make it don. His new name was Poseidon. On Saturday, Poseidon went to the pool and found Katy. Poseidon decided to splash Katy with his Trident. He pretended it was an earthquake that started the splashes. Zanzarino thought that the Trident and Poseidon was such genius, he added it to the game.

Was this supposed to be serious? In my story, Zanz is a ghost buster, we talk about forks, there's a love triangle, there's suicide, there's swimming, there's watching Television, School, Old MacDonald had a Farm, what else could you want?


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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236041#msg236041
« Reply #88 on: December 30, 2010, 10:26:47 am »
Finally finished, enjoy :)

Darkness, impenetrable shadow swept across a charred and heavily worn area of combat.  The last great war of the Elements had played out its final chapter as each team left the battlefield, glad to be rid of the worries of war, but troubled nevertheless.  Willng3 gazed about at his surroundings; a mortal wound had left him unable to return to the scene of combat and he owed his life to his general for every living breath he now made.  Regardless of his team’s accomplishments, he still felt enraged, as if a red hot poker was pressing down on every nerve; he was not satisfied, he still experienced an insatiable quench for blood.  It was far too late however, and with nothing but contempt in his mind, he placed his blade over his shoulder and began his journey home. 

As he walked terrible thoughts began to pervade his mind; he became convinced that the very reason the war had been lost was due to errors on his part.  Wrestling with this inexplicable sense of guilt and shame, Willng3 collapsed to the ground.  His breathing became labored as if someone was pressing down on his throat.  A chilling burst of laughter split the air as Willng3 suddenly jumped to his feet.  Searching frantically, he desired to find this new adversary and punish them for disturbing him in such a disrespectful manner.  However, no matter how hard he looked, his eyes could not penetrate the veil of shadow which lay before him.  A sudden whistling noise caused Willng3 to snap alert immediately.  Willng3 ducked instinctively as a blade ripped apart the air over his head.  Performing a roll on the ground, Willng3 retaliated at this unseen foe as he struck forward at the exact location he had heard his enemy’s sword break the silence.  Horrorstruck, he realized:  He had missed completely.  A second later Willng3 felt the sting of metal across his shoulder as he was struck from behind.  Invigorated by this new sensation of pain, Willng3 swerved around and swung full force at where he believed his opponent to lie.  Yet his blade had missed yet again.  Willng3 suddenly began to panic.  How could such an opponent overtake him like this?  Willng3 stepped backwards as he cleared his mind in order to counter any future assault made towards him.  He did not need to wait long.  The enemy struck out again, but this time Willng3 miraculously parried the blow.  He allowed his instincts to take hold as he countered again and again, frightening himself with his newfound ability and becoming emboldened all the same. 

Willng3 quickly realized he had not met such a formidable adversary since he had first crossed blades with a Discord wielder; the maiden who had defeated him had manipulated the sword with such grace and strength that it was as if she and the weapon were truly one.  He attempted a similar tactic in this position and became more and more empowered as he gained more confidence in himself and his sword.  After seemingly hours of the sound of steel clashing against steel had begun to dissolve the silence of the wilderness, Willng3’s confidence betrayed him.  Grinning madly, Willng3 knocked the unseen blade aside as he struck straight forward and watched as his sword missed its target.  Defenseless, Willng3 was bashed in his chest by a powerful force and slammed into a large rock lying not far from him on the ground.  He raised his blade to parry the next assault but became devastated when the invisible foe’s sword split his own in two.  With this resistance gone, the blade proceeded to embed itself in Willng3’s shoulder, cutting into the muscle and causing his left arm to go limp instantly. 

He could sense the blade of his opponent being drawn back for one final blow as he felt the weight of his maimed sword in his right hand.  He reminisced about the numerous battles that the blade had saved him from harm, bringing him closer to victory and giving him a new sense of hope each and every time it was drawn.  This feeling of hope caused his mind to ponder other things:  The teammates he had learned to call brothers, the villagers of his home town who looked up to him for guidance, and lastly his fiancé whom eagerly awaited his safe return from battle.  He closed his eyes as he dwelled on her image, as the scent of vanilla filled his nostrils at once.  It was at this moment he realized:  He could not lose.  Energy suddenly coursed through his body as Willng3’s eyes flashed open and he struck forward with what remained of his blade, desiring nothing more than to pierce the great darkness before him. 

In this instant, something mysterious happened.  A beam of light suddenly surged forward from what appeared to be the blade itself and obliterated the great shadow before him.  Willng3 realized that he had somehow managed to acquire the mythical Morning Star, a sword which presented itself only when the wielder was placed in the greatest depths of the pit of despair.  As he stared at the blade, Willng3 also realized that his adversary had disappeared with the night.  The sun rose up and warmed his face as he smiled and continued down his path.  He began to question whether there truly was an enemy in that dark forest, or if it was nothing more than his darkest thoughts manifesting themselves in their cruelest form.  It did not concern him.  He now knew that the future was what was desirable in his life, and that had made all the difference.
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236060#msg236060
« Reply #89 on: December 30, 2010, 11:45:08 am »
Finally finished, enjoy :)

Darkness, impenetrable shadow swept across a charred and heavily worn area of combat.  The last great war of the Elements had played out its final chapter as each team left the battlefield, glad to be rid of the worries of war, but troubled nevertheless.  Willng3 gazed about at his surroundings; a mortal wound had left him unable to return to the scene of combat and he owed his life to his general for every living breath he now made.  Regardless of his team’s accomplishments, he still felt enraged, as if a red hot poker was pressing down on every nerve; he was not satisfied, he still experienced an insatiable quench for blood.  It was far too late however, and with nothing but contempt in his mind, he placed his blade over his shoulder and began his journey home. 

As he walked terrible thoughts began to pervade his mind; he became convinced that the very reason the war had been lost was due to errors on his part.  Wrestling with this inexplicable sense of guilt and shame, Willng3 collapsed to the ground.  His breathing became labored as if someone was pressing down on his throat.  A chilling burst of laughter split the air as Willng3 suddenly jumped to his feet.  Searching frantically, he desired to find this new adversary and punish them for disturbing him in such a disrespectful manner.  However, no matter how hard he looked, his eyes could not penetrate the veil of shadow which lay before him.  A sudden whistling noise caused Willng3 to snap alert immediately.  Willng3 ducked instinctively as a blade ripped apart the air over his head.  Performing a roll on the ground, Willng3 retaliated at this unseen foe as he struck forward at the exact location he had heard his enemy’s sword break the silence.  Horrorstruck, he realized:  He had missed completely.  A second later Willng3 felt the sting of metal across his shoulder as he was struck from behind.  Invigorated by this new sensation of pain, Willng3 swerved around and swung full force at where he believed his opponent to lie.  Yet his blade had missed yet again.  Willng3 suddenly began to panic.  How could such an opponent overtake him like this?  Willng3 stepped backwards as he cleared his mind in order to counter any future assault made towards him.  He did not need to wait long.  The enemy struck out again, but this time Willng3 miraculously parried the blow.  He allowed his instincts to take hold as he countered again and again, frightening himself with his newfound ability and becoming emboldened all the same. 

Willng3 quickly realized he had not met such a formidable adversary since he had first crossed blades with a Discord wielder; the maiden who had defeated him had manipulated the sword with such grace and strength that it was as if she and the weapon were truly one.  He attempted a similar tactic in this position and became more and more empowered as he gained more confidence in himself and his sword.  After seemingly hours of the sound of steel clashing against steel had begun to dissolve the silence of the wilderness, Willng3’s confidence betrayed him.  Grinning madly, Willng3 knocked the unseen blade aside as he struck straight forward and watched as his sword missed its target.  Defenseless, Willng3 was bashed in his chest by a powerful force and slammed into a large rock lying not far from him on the ground.  He raised his blade to parry the next assault but became devastated when the invisible foe’s sword split his own in two.  With this resistance gone, the blade proceeded to embed itself in Willng3’s shoulder, cutting into the muscle and causing his left arm to go limp instantly. 

He could sense the blade of his opponent being drawn back for one final blow as he felt the weight of his maimed sword in his right hand.  He reminisced about the numerous battles that the blade had saved him from harm, bringing him closer to victory and giving him a new sense of hope each and every time it was drawn.  This feeling of hope caused his mind to ponder other things:  The teammates he had learned to call brothers, the villagers of his home town who looked up to him for guidance, and lastly his fiancé whom eagerly awaited his safe return from battle.  He closed his eyes as he dwelled on her image, as the scent of vanilla filled his nostrils at once.  It was at this moment he realized:  He could not lose.  Energy suddenly coursed through his body as Willng3’s eyes flashed open and he struck forward with what remained of his blade, desiring nothing more than to pierce the great darkness before him. 

In this instant, something mysterious happened.  A beam of light suddenly surged forward from what appeared to be the blade itself and obliterated the great shadow before him.  Willng3 realized that he had somehow managed to acquire the mythical Morning Star, a sword which presented itself only when the wielder was placed in the greatest depths of the pit of despair.  As he stared at the blade, Willng3 also realized that his adversary had disappeared with the night.  The sun rose up and warmed his face as he smiled and continued down his path.  He began to question whether there truly was an enemy in that dark forest, or if it was nothing more than his darkest thoughts manifesting themselves in their cruelest form.  It did not concern him.  He now knew that the future was what was desirable in his life, and that had made all the difference.
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236082#msg236082
« Reply #90 on: December 30, 2010, 12:34:16 pm »
Bravo Will, bravo.  That was an excellent story.  No other story stands a chance against yours.  We should just give you the competition now.  Regardless, you have earned my vote ( if we get more than 1).
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236209#msg236209
« Reply #91 on: December 30, 2010, 04:38:08 pm »
Druidic Staff/Jade Staff
Whispers speak of a legend, long before the time of the Nymphs, where the land lay desolate. The constant battles had left the earth scorched in fire. The sky no longer shined its light. Disease and famine ravaged those who had not died by the blade. It was the age of death.

Hope was a word no longer spoken. A plague had swept through the inhabitants until few remained. They were on the brink of extinction… Suddenly, a light shined forth and all were healed. The light called them near like a beacon of hope after a ships long voyage. Quickly they moved towards the source of the light and found a Staff stuck in the earth.

The dead land suddenly started to return to life. The trees bore fruit again. The water was purified of its deathly stench. A ray of light burst through the sky's darkness. Then another, then another, until all the hope they had lost returned.

Down to this day, on the first new moon after the long winter, when the sky is the darkest, people pay their respects to the Druidic Staff by planting seeds by the river bed.

In more recent times many replicas of this staff have been forged. Many even claim to have improved on the original, calling it the Jade Staff. The popularity of these staves, with their healing ability, coupled with the easy accessibility, became so widespread that many, many people owned several copies. Thus the rarity of it became nonexistent. So a man, a creator of many things, decided to put a stop to this 'abuse of the system.'  That, however, is a tale for the future…

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236291#msg236291
« Reply #92 on: December 30, 2010, 06:04:19 pm »
My Submission. I didn't make the Air Nymph a very nice person though...

Why Else Would Air Walk?

A quiet night reigns over the elemental plane, a silence which couldn’t possibly last. As if on queue a fell wind begins to blow. Air, drifting formlessly over the land, is not pleased by what she hears spoken amongst her sisters. Beware traveler, should you pass this way, that Air might bottle her rage. All will be the peace and calm of the doldrums one moment, a howling maelstrom the next!

“Why, they must take delight in these insults! Joy and merriment at my expense? I think not. I will not see my element trivialized, reduced to some minor convenience! Dragons take flight because I allow it. Clouds flood rain across the plains by my will.

Earth haughtily declares I am handy at clearing her mountains of dust…
A cool night upon sun-warmed stone? Blizzard!
Worn away to dust then blown away!

Fire thinks I make her flames dance delightfully in the twilight glow…
A lively brush fire brightens the night? Typhoon!
Mere kindling without the strength of my winds!

Light thinks I arrange her fireflies in such beautiful constellations…
Fireflies dance amongst the graves? Squall!
Ha ha! Scattered to the four corners of the world!

But, what is this? The others walk the plane as well. They will make light of air as these three have. Will Death claim I make her bones rattle and trill through the night like so many drums and flutes? Aether will surely ignore me entirely. Dark will claim the wind’s howls and moans were her own idea. No, I cannot allow such insults to continue. Drastic measures are clearly necessary…”

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236295#msg236295
« Reply #93 on: December 30, 2010, 06:06:32 pm »
My Submission. I didn't make the Air Nymph a very nice person though...

Why Else Would Air Walk?

A quiet night reigns over the elemental plane, a silence which couldn’t possibly last. As if on queue a fell wind begins to blow. Air, drifting formlessly over the land, is not pleased by what she hears spoken amongst her sisters. Beware traveler, should you pass this way, that Air might bottle her rage. All will be the peace and calm of the doldrums one moment, a howling maelstrom the next!

“Why, they must take delight in these insults! Joy and merriment at my expense? I think not. I will not see my element trivialized, reduced to some minor convenience! Dragons take flight because I allow it. Clouds flood rain across the plains by my will.

Earth haughtily declares I am handy at clearing her mountains of dust…
A cool night upon sun-warmed stone? Blizzard!
Worn away to dust then blown away!

Fire thinks I make her flames dance delightfully in the twilight glow…
A lively brush fire brightens the night? Typhoon!
Mere kindling without the strength of my winds!

Light thinks I arrange her fireflies in such beautiful constellations…
Fireflies dance amongst the graves? Squall!
Ha ha! Scattered to the four corners of the world!

But, what is this? The others walk the plane as well. They will make light of air as these three have. Will Death claim I make her bones rattle and trill through the night like so many drums and flutes? Aether will surely ignore me entirely. Dark will claim the wind’s howls and moans were her own idea. No, I cannot allow such insults to continue. Drastic measures are clearly necessary…”
So... the Air Nymph went to create unstable gas?

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236324#msg236324
« Reply #94 on: December 30, 2010, 06:27:39 pm »
Silly, but better than nothing xD


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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg236356#msg236356
« Reply #95 on: December 30, 2010, 06:51:14 pm »
My Submission. I didn't make the Air Nymph a very nice person though...

Why Else Would Air Walk?

A quiet night reigns over the elemental plane, a silence which couldn’t possibly last. As if on queue a fell wind begins to blow. Air, drifting formlessly over the land, is not pleased by what she hears spoken amongst her sisters. Beware traveler, should you pass this way, that Air might bottle her rage. All will be the peace and calm of the doldrums one moment, a howling maelstrom the next!

“Why, they must take delight in these insults! Joy and merriment at my expense? I think not. I will not see my element trivialized, reduced to some minor convenience! Dragons take flight because I allow it. Clouds flood rain across the plains by my will.

Earth haughtily declares I am handy at clearing her mountains of dust…
A cool night upon sun-warmed stone? Blizzard!
Worn away to dust then blown away!

Fire thinks I make her flames dance delightfully in the twilight glow…
A lively brush fire brightens the night? Typhoon!
Mere kindling without the strength of my winds!

Light thinks I arrange her fireflies in such beautiful constellations…
Fireflies dance amongst the graves? Squall!
Ha ha! Scattered to the four corners of the world!

But, what is this? The others walk the plane as well. They will make light of air as these three have. Will Death claim I make her bones rattle and trill through the night like so many drums and flutes? Aether will surely ignore me entirely. Dark will claim the wind’s howls and moans were her own idea. No, I cannot allow such insults to continue. Drastic measures are clearly necessary…”
So... the Air Nymph went to create unstable gas?
Nah, Air took on a humanoid form like I implied the other Nymphs were doing so she could personally start beating them for insulting her (that's what the title is implying as well). I decided not to mention Unstable Gas since everyone always associates it with flatulence.

 

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