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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg231726#msg231726
« Reply #72 on: December 23, 2010, 10:18:10 pm »
Just a quick question, since it isnt clarified in the first post.  What are the prizes?

What does winning this competition get you? A super awesome forum award icon and your story featured or linked on the respective card thread here on the forum!

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg231737#msg231737
« Reply #73 on: December 23, 2010, 10:29:11 pm »
Ok here is my reserved story for the golden nymph.One time while zanz was looking for some undiscovered creatures,permanents,or spells he found a tunnel with times and dates written all over the front of it.Zanz then decided to look inside and see what was inside.He then saw a nymph with a bunch of papers upon on a table with hourglasses and an eternity next to the table to defend itself.When Zanz approached the nymph he was then reversed to the entrance of the nymphs cave.He was confused then went back in.This time when he went in he was fast forwarded to the nymph.He then asked the nymph what was wrong.The nymph then said "What are you doing here".Zanz then replied "i was searching for new creatures in this area then i came upon your cave".He then asked the nymph why she was yellow.She then said "One day when i was playing with my friends i was using precognition and something went wrong and i fainted,when i awoke i was figuring out what happened and it turned out it became a part of me." She then explained how when she is in danger she just uses the skill like how other creatures do and then she can easily see what the opponent plans to do and gets to draw another card to try and stop the enemy's plan 1 turn faster.Zanz then felt sorry for her and offered to try and help her but She would have to come with him.The nymph then went with Zanz.On the way they were attacked by a few phase spiders and photons but the  Nymph helped him dodge then and attack them.When they got back to his lab he  then decided to name the nymph"Golden Nymph" that we all know and love  today. Thank you for reading my story.It's between 250 to 300 posts.(had to rush it a bit)

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232595#msg232595
« Reply #74 on: December 25, 2010, 05:37:23 am »
Here is my story for Trident/Poseidon.
 One time, while Zanzarino was looking for a ghost (he was a ghost buster and a game maker,) he found a diary. The cover of the diary said Poseidon A.K.A. Jake's diary. Zanzarino read many things in it. He learned that Adam was in love with Katy, and that Katy was in love with Jake. Jake didn't want to be in a relationship though. Jake hated Adam, because in the third grade, Adam didn't invite Jake to his slumber party. Jake was so tired of Katy hitting on him, that he asked Katy what she wanted. "I want you!" Katy said. Jake didn't want her. Jake decided to help Adam, so Katy would stop bugging him. Jake told Adam to be nice to Katy and be his self. Katy still didn't like Adam because he was so stupid, and Katy started to hate Adam. Adam got really mad that Katy started hating him. Adam got really depressed because he was an idiot and was hated by the love of his life. He decided to end it. With Adam gone, there was nothing Jake could do to get Katy to stop liking him. One day, Jake overheard Katy talking to Amy. Katy and Amy were going to the pool on Saturday. That Friday, Jake wanted to make a weapon, to attack Katy with. In his den, Jake was watching television, and a family was eating. Jake noticed the pointy fork. Jake took a 2 wooden sticks, and on one of them, he made the top pointy. With the other, he curved it and made both ends pointy. He stuck the curved wood on top of the wood at the top, like a fork. He called this weapon a trident because it had 3 prongs, he was in his den, and he likes the letter t. Jake decided to change his name. He was listening to Old MacDonald's Had a Farm. They started singing about an opossum. Jake took the 3rd, 4th, and 5th letter and made it the first 3 letters of his name. Then he added EIEIO, but took out EIO. Jake then added den to his name, because that's where he was, his den, but since den was in Trident, he decided to make it don. His new name was Poseidon. On Saturday, Poseidon went to the pool and found Katy. Poseidon decided to splash Katy with his Trident. He pretended it was an earthquake that started the splashes. Zanzarino thought that the Trident and Poseidon was such genius, he added it to the game.

Was this supposed to be serious? In my story, Zanz is a ghost buster, we talk about forks, there's a love triangle, there's suicide, there's swimming, there's watching Television, School, Old MacDonald had a Farm, what else could you want?


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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232623#msg232623
« Reply #75 on: December 25, 2010, 06:28:36 am »
Here is my story for Trident/Poseidon.
 One time, while Zanzarino was looking for a ghost (he was a ghost buster and a game maker,) he found a diary. The cover of the diary said Poseidon A.K.A. Jake's diary. Zanzarino read many things in it. He learned that Adam was in love with Katy, and that Katy was in love with Jake. Jake didn't want to be in a relationship though. Jake hated Adam, because in the third grade, Adam didn't invite Jake to his slumber party. Jake was so tired of Katy hitting on him, that he asked Katy what she wanted. "I want you!" Katy said. Jake didn't want her. Jake decided to help Adam, so Katy would stop bugging him. Jake told Adam to be nice to Katy and be his self. Katy still didn't like Adam because he was so stupid, and Katy started to hate Adam. Adam got really mad that Katy started hating him. Adam got really depressed because he was an idiot and was hated by the love of his life. He decided to end it. With Adam gone, there was nothing Jake could do to get Katy to stop liking him. One day, Jake overheard Katy talking to Amy. Katy and Amy were going to the pool on Saturday. That Friday, Jake wanted to make a weapon, to attack Katy with. In his den, Jake was watching television, and a family was eating. Jake noticed the pointy fork. Jake took a 2 wooden sticks, and on one of them, he made the top pointy. With the other, he curved it and made both ends pointy. He stuck the curved wood on top of the wood at the top, like a fork. He called this weapon a trident because it had 3 prongs, he was in his den, and he likes the letter t. Jake decided to change his name. He was listening to Old MacDonald's Had a Farm. They started singing about an opossum. Jake took the 3rd, 4th, and 5th letter and made it the first 3 letters of his name. Then he added EIEIO, but took out EIO. Jake then added den to his name, because that's where he was, his den, but since den was in Trident, he decided to make it don. His new name was Poseidon. On Saturday, Poseidon went to the pool and found Katy. Poseidon decided to splash Katy with his Trident. He pretended it was an earthquake that started the splashes. Zanzarino thought that the Trident and Poseidon was such genius, he added it to the game.

Was this supposed to be serious? In my story, Zanz is a ghost buster, we talk about forks, there's a love triangle, there's suicide, there's swimming, there's watching Television, School, Old MacDonald had a Farm, what else could you want?


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If you have more than one card are your main important card of the story, you canot have a reservation. If you don't have a reservation, you have to have more than one card as the main focus of your story. It is stated in the first post :P
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232639#msg232639
« Reply #76 on: December 25, 2010, 07:43:37 am »
If you have more than one card are your main important card of the story, you canot have a reservation. If you don't have a reservation, you have to have more than one card as the main focus of your story. It is stated in the first post :P
I meant, can I submit more than one story. (One story for trident, and one story for gravity nymph)

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232640#msg232640
« Reply #77 on: December 25, 2010, 07:52:01 am »
If you have more than one card are your main important card of the story, you canot have a reservation. If you don't have a reservation, you have to have more than one card as the main focus of your story. It is stated in the first post :P
I meant, can I submit more than one story. (One story for trident, and one story for gravity nymph)
Oh, I see what you mean. No, it's only one story per person.
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232909#msg232909
« Reply #78 on: December 25, 2010, 08:08:31 pm »
Here is my story for Trident/Poseidon.
 One time, while Zanzarino was looking for a ghost (he was a ghost buster and a game maker,) he found a diary. The cover of the diary said Poseidon A.K.A. Jake's diary. Zanzarino read many things in it. He learned that Adam was in love with Katy, and that Katy was in love with Jake. Jake didn't want to be in a relationship though. Jake hated Adam, because in the third grade, Adam didn't invite Jake to his slumber party. Jake was so tired of Katy hitting on him, that he asked Katy what she wanted. "I want you!" Katy said. Jake didn't want her. Jake decided to help Adam, so Katy would stop bugging him. Jake told Adam to be nice to Katy and be his self. Katy still didn't like Adam because he was so stupid, and Katy started to hate Adam. Adam got really mad that Katy started hating him. Adam got really depressed because he was an idiot and was hated by the love of his life. He decided to end it. With Adam gone, there was nothing Jake could do to get Katy to stop liking him. One day, Jake overheard Katy talking to Amy. Katy and Amy were going to the pool on Saturday. That Friday, Jake wanted to make a weapon, to attack Katy with. In his den, Jake was watching television, and a family was eating. Jake noticed the pointy fork. Jake took a 2 wooden sticks, and on one of them, he made the top pointy. With the other, he curved it and made both ends pointy. He stuck the curved wood on top of the wood at the top, like a fork. He called this weapon a trident because it had 3 prongs, he was in his den, and he likes the letter t. Jake decided to change his name. He was listening to Old MacDonald's Had a Farm. They started singing about an opossum. Jake took the 3rd, 4th, and 5th letter and made it the first 3 letters of his name. Then he added EIEIO, but took out EIO. Jake then added den to his name, because that's where he was, his den, but since den was in Trident, he decided to make it don. His new name was Poseidon. On Saturday, Poseidon went to the pool and found Katy. Poseidon decided to splash Katy with his Trident. He pretended it was an earthquake that started the splashes. Zanzarino thought that the Trident and Poseidon was such genius, he added it to the game.

Was this supposed to be serious? In my story, Zanz is a ghost buster, we talk about forks, there's a love triangle, there's suicide, there's swimming, there's watching Television, School, Old MacDonald had a Farm, what else could you want?


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wow and I thought everyone would be writing fiction... Nice little autobiographical look into your life...

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg232982#msg232982
« Reply #79 on: December 25, 2010, 10:01:05 pm »
Title: The Exile
Author: Wynden
Rares Used: all rare weapons

Alone on the high mountains of Sk'lar were beings of enormous power. They were the kings and queens of the world, each protecting their own element from outside influence.
Etren, the sage. Learning the art of time control, he can manipulate everyone and everything to his whim. Lorenz; ruler of an ethereal plane of existence, he could drain the soul of a creature with a single glance, making them lose their ability to fight. Owen: protector of the skies. Vowing smiting the ones who dared to hurt his brethren, he had a heart of gold, and the creatures bowed down to him as a god. Vandala, the mistress of the night. She was known for her stubbornness and her need to feed on her enemies. None would stand in her way for fear of losing all that they hold dear. Aren, the plague. A king of tombs, his blood itself was a deadly poison, destroying everything in its path. Purice, the shield maiden. Holding her bloody mace in battle, she was known her 'one-woman seige', bringing the city to ruins. D, the wanderer. Lost and confused, he wandered the world in search of a truth. He brings with him an aura of wonder, and leaves behind him a trail of questions. Falen, the fire mage. Falling into a volcano when she was a child, she found herself transformed anew. By being near heat, she can channel enormous amounts of power, annihilating anything in his path. Titania, a woman with strength to spare. Her hammer, over 10 feet high, was known to cause shockwaves in the earth with every smash. Draen, the healer. A guardian of the forest, he was always creating, raising trees from the ground to protect his allies. Moira, the archangel. She nurtured her brothers and sisters, and in turn, they lent her the power to usher in an age of light to the world. Trienne, the breaker. She had the ability to destoy the foundations of the world, and recreate it in her image. Together, they presided over the world, as its protectors from enemies.
Today, a new threat had arised. The creator was furious at the kings and queens. Their elements were corrupted with a growing evil: the other. The creator, for fear that he would not have enough power, told the kings to aid him in his crusade against the other. They, proud of their abilities and ignorant of the other’s influence, chose not to aid the creator. Only one stood to fight: Owen. He courageously bowed down to the creator, and chose to lend his strength to defeat the other. In a fit of anger, the creator changed the kings and queens, even Owen. They all became weapons, and together, wielded by the creator, the other was forced back. The creator, in a moment of guilt, created a spell to return these kings and queens to their original power, but trusted it to the realm of the only one who would come to his aid: air. To this day, these weapons have protected the world of elements and are known to us as the rare weapons. The spell the creator crafted, to this day, still exists. We all know it as ‘Flying Weapon’. These powerful kings and queens, once so majestic and proud, were sealed within these tools of war, their names lost forever.

Note: The fact that all of the names coincide with the rare weapons' names is not a coincidence. I did it because I got bored. :P

560 words total.

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg233631#msg233631
« Reply #80 on: December 26, 2010, 07:36:26 pm »
Well then, I'm finally finished with my text of the Auburn/Earth Nymph... well kind of. Might still do some tweaks ;)
Any kind of constructive critique is welcome!

Moved my text to my first post. Can be seen on page 2.

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg234128#msg234128
« Reply #81 on: December 27, 2010, 03:26:52 pm »
Have anyone take the trident? If no, i reserve it

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg235516#msg235516
« Reply #82 on: December 29, 2010, 02:33:04 pm »
Okay, so uhhh.. I eventually decided to write a little something. Little is an understatement, unfortunately. A big understatement. Since I withdrew my reservation earlier, I've used two rares as major roles in the story, though technically, I used every single one.. On the bright side, I basically did an all-in-one story that may as well be the basis for all of Elements! If this doesn't win the competition, I hope it can at least be archived somewhere to be read for enjoyment. That being said, if you're about to read it, then please, enjoy!

Title: [/color][/b]
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Trident / Poseidon
In a time long before elementals inhabited this world, there was only Nymphadora. Having spent countless ages in solitude, she was adept in the arts of creation. She spent her life decorating the land to her liking until, one day, she felt a deep sorrow, as there were no other beings to share in her delights. For this, she wept.

“What is power that is not shared?” she asked herself. Upon reaching an impasse to the wonder in her mind, she constructed eleven statues in her image. Each was granted with essence and command over a respective region. Nymphadora then distributed her powers among the statues, allowing them to create for themselves within their own regions. The statues came to be known as Nymphs, as each was similar to Nymphadora. In turn, Nymphadora was given the title of Nymph Queen.

The lands flourished under the reign of the Nymphs. Each of the Nymphs turned their own way to create wondeful masterpieces. The Purple Nymph invented chaos, allowing the random to occur. The Auburn brought forth the mountains and the underground. The Blue created the heavens. The Green spawned the creatures to dwell in the spaces provided by the Green and Blue. Each Nymph had something to offer the world.

Eventually, the Nymphs grew dissatisfied with their limited regions and saught to conquer one another’s land. The Nymphs erected pillars to draw power from. They commanded the creatures of their domain to attack the others. So began the war between elements.

During the war, again discontent with their limits, the Nymphs sought even greater power. They built pillar upon pillar, ‘til the pillars became towers. With the immense amount of energy emanating from the towers, the Nymphs forged weapons of destruction, each fashioned to their own prowess.

The Nymph Queen saw all this and was very displeased. Alas, she was incapable of stopping the warring Nymphs, as all her powers were infused in the Nymphs themselves. In despair, she wandered the lands in hopes of finding means to restore peace. After centuries of searching, she found herself standing on the remains of what was once the birthplace of the statues.

The years had not done the land well. Blood of the creatures sent to war was splattered across the floor, so thick that Nymphadora did not notice the pool of the substance she could not explain. It was not like anything she’d ever seen. Though it smelled of salt and sank through the spaces in between her fingers when she tried to grasp it, it was not blood. Instead, it was clear like glass. She named the great expanse “lake”, after the crimson colour of the blood that was found by the mass, and named the contents of the lake “water”.

As she drank from the pool of water, The Nymph Queen realized that the lake was made of her own tears so long ago. The drink endowed her with command over water, the source of all creation. With this newfound power, she forged her own weapon: a trident. Nymphadora used her trident to bring down the pillars and towers of the Nymphs, causing the loss of their power. This earned the Trident the title of Poseidon, the Earthshaker.

While the Nymphs were weak, The Nymph Queen seized their weapons and sealed the Nymphs inside ancient relics, fearing that leaving the Nymphs free would lead to another war. After the relics were hidden away and the Nymph’s weapons scattered across the land, Nymphadora decided that her work was done. She entered a state of rest, but not before creating the first elementals. Among these were Zanz, Scaredgirl, and Kamietsu.

Thus, the epic tale of Elements begins.

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg235532#msg235532
« Reply #83 on: December 29, 2010, 03:06:28 pm »
So, i finally decided to get up and write my story before the deadline. So off to the races we go!
Story for farheinheit.
It's 403 words btw :)
Title: Power and control
Author: TNG
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Before the first war between gods, Hermes requested a special sword from Zanzario that he could carry into battle to show the immense power of fire. Zanz accepted his request and went on to find a sword to show the true power that fire can take into war.

He traveled far and wide, through the oceanic chambers, in which neptune guarded his weapon of power. He carried on past the shifting sands, where destiny lay in wait preparing himself for the coming fight. As he traveled he looked up into the blinding sun he shut his eyes for a moment of peace, when he had a vision. Flames erupting from the mouth of a volcano, fire shooting out in all directions and in the middle he saw something which held all this destruction, all this rage and power. He knew he must go there and claim this something for fiery proportions.

So onward he went, until he came to the hills of the destroyer. These savage and brutal monsters guarded the weapon of fire, he knew they wouldn't just hand over this weapon without a fight. So Zanz went back to the god of water, neptune. He, the god of the ocean, should be able to calm these fiery monsters and settle their rage. To the hills of destroyers Zanz took neptune, as he re entered their village he saw something unusual. The destroyers were throwing the phoenix, a strong majestic bird into the volcano to strengthen the sword.

They continued with Zanz sneaking behind the destroyers village as neptune took the epic battle of :fire and :water to a far away place. Zanz ascended up the volcano, until the sword was in his sight. It hovered over top the flames, never to be touched by man not born of flames. He saw an opening in these flames tho. A small gap in which they didn't cover, he knew he had to jump. He might not make it out without burning his flesh or skin, after obtaining the sword. It was a risk he had to take, he jumped.

All had seemed lost and then Zanz flew up into the sky on the back of the earlier cremated phoenix. He called to neptune as they made their leave. Hermes now had his weapon, in which all the power and rage of a volcano was controlled. The fight among gods shall begin soon......
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