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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226259#msg226259
« Reply #36 on: December 17, 2010, 01:38:01 am »
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The Ocean and the Moon

A small boy runs across the beach, lapping his feet in the oceans waves.  And the ocean, lifeless, simply claws at the ground, emotionless, empty, ever eroding the earth.  But it was not always this way.

Long ago the Ocean spirit was a lively one.  She danced, and played, and tickled the earth as she rolled up against his sturdy banks.  Because long ago, the ocean was in love.  With the moon.

The Ocean and the Moon were perfect for each other.  Pushing and pulling and rhythmically matching, the Moon's life revolved around the Ocean, and the Ocean's waters in turn would spin round the world just for a mere instance of being closer to his being.

But they never touched.

And one, sad day, the Moon gazed down on his Ocean lover and said "I must go.  I will forever love you, but I must go."
And as the sun came up, the Ocean was confused.  But that night she realized what horrors were about to transpire.  For when the moon arose, a small sliver was missing.

"What happened!?" She cried.  But the Moon simply smiled down and said "I will forever love you, but I must go."
And so, on the first night of the moons absence, the Ocean cried.

She cried, and cried, and cried, for three days, pouring the very essence of her loneliness onto the banks of the earth, and to her surprise, on the morning of the fourth day, a little girl was there.  And the little girl shared in the Oceans loneliness, crying all her own.  The little girl gave the ocean courage, so that night she looked up to the heavens, and saw the side of the moon's face was gone.  And she cried.

She cried and cried, for three days, pouring the very essence of her desire for the moon to live.  And the little girl on the bank of the shore cried too, but as her tear hit the ground, another girl arose.  This girl was elusive, evasive, she looked inquisitively at the world, and shedding but one tear, made a small shell immortal.  And the ocean saw the immortality, and it gave the ocean courage.  So that night she looked up to the heavens, and saw one quarter of the moons face was gone.  And she cried.

On the seventh and eighth days she missed it's light, and upon the shore appeared a girl who returned light to anything that had gone dark.  And the light made the ocean look skyward once again.  But upon seeing the moon, barely half of himself, the ocean cried and wished she could regrow the moon.  And upon the shore appeared a girl who could turn the world to stone.  And on the eleventh day the ocean was so confused, so unstable, upon the shore appeared a girl who was followed by a fair, lovely perfume, that exploded with a passion of fury whenever the girl became annoyed.

But it was on the fourteenth day the ocean made it's biggest regret.  Looking at the moon, now no more than a sliver, the oceans instability and anger came to a climax and the ocean wished it dead.  And upon the shore came a girl who murdered all she touched.  And the next night, when the ocean looked to the sky, the moon was gone.  All through the night it was dark.  And cold.  And the ocean wept.

She was angry, and she cried tears of rage, screaming it wasn't fair, and upon the shore appeared a girl almost self destructive in wrath.  And on the sixteenth day, she was scared of what she'd created, wishing she could collapse into herself and disappear, and upon the shore was a girl who was so introverted she could suck the very soul out of a person trying to escape inward.  But on the eighteenth day things changed.  The ocean looked to the sky and weeped tears of joy.  For a small sliver of the moon had returned.

She immediately wished she could undo all the hurtful things she'd done, spawning upon the shore a girl who inverted the very essence of everything she touched.  And the ocean wished she could donate part of herself to help heal the moon, and upon the shore appeared a girl who turned beings into creature of the night, feasting on others youth.  And the ocean wished she could see the future, and know what was going on, and upon the shore came a girl who could see vast expanses of time and space for there were no secrets to her.  And the ocean wished, with all her heart, time would speed up so the moon would return, and upon the shore appeared a girl who made snails slide faster than a man could run.  And as the moon approached full, and the twelve girls born of tears frolicked on the bank, the oceans hopes rose unbelievably high.  For on the 28th day, it looked as the thought the moon had returned.

But as that final sliver of the moon arose in the night sky, and he was full and glorious again, a new sliver had already appeared on his face.  He was already eroding.  He was never whole again.  And he never spoke to the ocean again.

The ocean's waves pounded furiously on the earth, and her twelve daughters scattered across the land.  But after years the ocean finally gave up hope.

Should you visit the beach today, you will see the ocean.  Lifeless, it simply claws at the ground, emotionless, empty, ever eroding the earth.  But it was not always this way.

Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226261#msg226261
« Reply #37 on: December 17, 2010, 01:40:43 am »
I call in these orders:

1.Life Nymph
2.Death Nymph
3.Light Nymph
4. Electrocutor

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226264#msg226264
« Reply #38 on: December 17, 2010, 01:48:32 am »
Cookies for the one who makes a decent and entertaining story for poor air nymph without mentioning her intestinal functions!
So, tell me my friend, what can you see? What comes into your mind as you breathe?
'cause I see colors flourishing like you'd never believe... like a pendulum swings, they swing with me!

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226270#msg226270
« Reply #39 on: December 17, 2010, 01:56:00 am »
I change from LOBOTOMIZER TO Turquoise Nymph!!!

Hmm...

<<<Completed>>>

  Turquoise Nymph was the youngest of the eleven sisters.
She had always been different, as everyone was much older than her. Even though she was the most doted on in the family, she had no skills, so she wanted to learn some. She liked Time, so she knocked on the the door of Golden.
  "Golden, may I learn how to make precognitions?" she asked hopefully. Golden was understanding and was least likely to reject her.
  "Oh, what do we have here! Little Turquoise wants to learn how to make precognitions
! Though I doubt you are suitable in making Time Magic, I can teach you if you want,"Golden exclaimed cheerfully.
  Turquoise jumped in glee. Her sister had fnally agreed to teach her. She spent no time wasting preparing all the apparatus need as Golden told her to do so.
  "Add two drops of Time quanta," said Golden.
  Turquoise obeyed and carefully took the beaker of Time quanta from the Time Factory in her sister's room and poured two drops of the golden liquid into her conical flask.
  "Good, you're doing just fine! Now take your Eternity and say the magic words : 'Invertire il Tempo', " said Golden.
  "Invertire il Tempo?" Turquoise said awkwardly.
  Suddenly, the ground began to shake. Golden light shined from the Eternity. Turquoise squinted her eyes. The mysterious carvings on the Eternity began to glow with an eerie light. She could barely make out the words of Golden. "Point the Eternity at the flask!" she shouted.
  Turquoise lifted the heavy weapon and pointed it at the flask. However, the tip of the pointy weapon knocked over the flask and the liquid spilled over the table.
  "Not over my Procrastination shield!" Golden shouted.
  But it was too late. The magical liquid had dripped all over the Procrastination. Turquoise thought she heard an explosion. She tried to open her eyes, but her eyelids were as heavy as stone. Deep purple pain seared through her body. Then it went black.
  And then she woke up. She opened her eyes, and all she saw was a vast expanse of sand. She got up on her weary legs, still holding her Eternity. She spotted a traveler and immediately ran towards him.
  Turquoise asked the traveler,"Do you know where the castle is?"
  "What castle?" replied the traveler.
  "You know, the famous castle of Nymphland?" Turquoise said. The castle should be a well know landmark.
  "What Nymphland? Don't kid with me, young one." The traveller started to sound irritated.
  "Where is this place?" Turquoise finally asked.
  "This place? Well of course its Egypt, were near the Nile!" said the traveller.
  Turquoise was shocked. Had she time travelled into Ancient Egypt?
  "Wait, is is that the sacred Eternal Staff you're holding?" exclaimed the traveller, "The Oracle had predicted that a lost girl will come holding the sacred Eternal Staff. You must be the lost girl! Oh, what can I do for you?Take this Pendulum." He took out a small pendulum and gave it to her. "Now let me take you to Anubis!"
  "Wait..."shouted Turquoise,"This isn't a sacred Eternal Staff... is it?" Before she knew it, she was being dragged by the traveller and heading towards the city.
  Soon, she reached a temple. A voice came from inside. "I hear you are the lost girl with the sacred Eternal Staff. I am Anubis, the sacred Time priest. Do not be afraid. For you, are The Chosen One."
  A man with a jackal-shaped head walked out. The Great Anubis.
  "M..Me?" Turquoise exclaimed.
  "Yes, you. You will be the one who will help us. I don't know how, but this is what the great Oracle has said. Come with me." said Anubis.
  Turquoise followed Anubis deeper and deeper into the temple. Soon, she reached a large hall. Now," Anubis said," I will teach you the magic of Quintessence."
  Anubis and Turquoise trained day and night. Soon, she was able to use quintessence. She was very happy with her new skill.
  "Your training is almost done," said Anubis.
  Suddenly, a man came running in frantically. "Anubis! Oh great Anubis, Osiris has come yet again! His Scarabs are destroying the city, and our greatest warriors are dying!"
  "Who's Osiris?" asked Turquoise.
  "He brings destuction! Come and help us fend him off!" Anubis cried.
  As they ran out of the temple, the temple started collapsing, and Scarabs swarmed in.
  "Use what I have taught you!" said Anubis.
  Turquoise immediately started chanting an Ancient spell, and she felt power glow inside her. She felt indestructable.
  At last, the pillars of the temple gave way, and the temple collapsed at their feet. Thankfully, they made it out just in time.
  "Use the sacred Eternal staff!" shouted Anubis.
  Turquoise suddenly remebered what Golden had taught her. " Invertire il Tempo,"  Turquoise said firmly. And again, her Eternity glowed a magnificent golden. She pointed the large staff at Osiris.
  "What? Not the Eternal staff!" said Osiris. There was a golden beam of light.
  And suddenly Osiris was gone.
  "You have saved our city!" cried Anubis.
  "I..I did?"Turquoise stammered, not believing what she had did.
  All the villagers in the city started cheering for her. Turquoise could not help but feel proud.
  "But now, you must go back."Anubis said, You will be remembered.
  Anubis took out a scroll and started chanting the hieroglyphics on the scroll. A warp appeared. "Go into the portal. And you will go back to where you once were."
  "Goodbye Anubis. I will remember you too." She walked into the portal. Strange lights flickered, then went off, and everything turned dark.
  The morning sunshine seeped into her room. She woke up in bed. She wondered if it was all a dream. She reached into her pocket and found a small rusty pendulum.
   And that was how Turquoise Nymph came to be.
<<<Completed>>>
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226274#msg226274
« Reply #40 on: December 17, 2010, 02:06:15 am »
I call in these orders:

1.Life Nymph
2.Death Nymph
3.Light Nymph
4. Electrocutor
Well, no one else reserved Life Nymph yet so it's yours. You can't reserve more than one though :P
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226276#msg226276
« Reply #41 on: December 17, 2010, 02:14:44 am »
Cookies for the one who makes a decent and entertaining story for poor air nymph without mentioning her intestinal functions!
A CHALLENGE IT IS!

Please change my reservation from Eternity to Air Nymph!


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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226303#msg226303
« Reply #42 on: December 17, 2010, 03:10:03 am »
Is there a word limit for this "short" story?

I have barely written most of my story yet. Turquoise still has not met Anubis.

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226304#msg226304
« Reply #43 on: December 17, 2010, 03:11:17 am »
Is there a word limit for this "short" story?

I have barely written most of my story yet. Turquoise still has not met Anubis.
If you read the rules in the very first post, you will see that the word limit is a minimum of 250 words, and a maximum of 1000 words.
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226308#msg226308
« Reply #44 on: December 17, 2010, 03:13:45 am »
oh. crap.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

can you change it from 1000 to 10000?

I estimate my story to be around 5000+ words.

I like writing long essays.

YAY managed to short the story. removed the first bit. and the last bit. And the middle bit. And the bit about the dreams. And the bit where she sails on the Nile.

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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226309#msg226309
« Reply #45 on: December 17, 2010, 03:15:26 am »
oh. crap.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

can you change it from 1000 to 10000?

I estimate my story to be around 5000+ words.

I like writing long essays.
There is a reason behind this
2. All submissions must be between 250 and 1000 words. Novels are lovely, but a casual reader has to be able to connect to the story. Longer stories may result in a tl;dr(too long; didn't read) and overlooked.
So, tell me my friend, what can you see? What comes into your mind as you breathe?
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226312#msg226312
« Reply #46 on: December 17, 2010, 03:25:23 am »
oh. crap.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

can you change it from 1000 to 10000?

I estimate my story to be around 5000+ words.

I like writing long essays.
You make like writing long essays, but this is a short story competition. The word limit stays where it is :P
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Re: Short Story: Rare Mythology https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17738.msg226318#msg226318
« Reply #47 on: December 17, 2010, 03:54:59 am »
I call Eternity!
I'm A Dragon!

 

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