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Re: Short Story Competition - Draconic Guardians https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29012.msg376716#msg376716
« Reply #48 on: August 07, 2011, 09:29:43 am »
Nyx slithered along the mountain path lazily, the afternoon sunlight reflecting off her glistening obsidian scales. Puffs of black shadows escaped from her nostrils as she yawned. She looked at me with her large, luminous red eyes. “Maybe it’s out hunting or something,” she said to me telepathically. “I mean, we’ve searched the lair twice already. And have you ever heard of any crimson dragon hiding from enemies?” I could feel her boredom from the telepathic link we shared.

To be honest, I was starting to feel frustrated too. “But we can’t just give up right now,” I looked at my black dragon companion. “If we leave, then that crimson dragon will just come back and terrorize the village again.” To relieve my boredom, I made a few slashing motions with my sword, the Morning Glory. I shot a crescent-shaped blast of Light magic, and watched with satisfaction as it cut through rocks like paper. Dragon hide couldn’t be much tougher, could it?

Nyx sighed, and contorted her reptilian face into the dragon equivalent of a pout. “I don’t even understand my own kind sometimes,” she grumbled. “I mean, how would living be fun if everyone is afraid of you?

Well, you think that because you grew up with us elementals,” I replied. As I said that, I could not help but to take a little trip down the memory lane. Twelve years ago, when I was still a six-year-old child, and when Nyx was just a little black dragon hatchling, I rescued her from a horde of beasts in a dark forest. I used my Light magic to heal her wounds, and she just wouldn’t let me go after that. Her parents were dead, and she had nowhere else to go, so I had no choice but to take her in. Here she was twelve years later, now a fully grown black dragon and the one being in existence I trust with all my life. Dragons were just as intelligent as us, and it was amazing how elemental-like they could be if they spent their lives among us. Nyx telepathically spoke my language, lived my life, and thought exactly like a teenaged girl except calmer and wiser. If she could transform her body into that of an elemental, nobody would have ever guessed her draconic nature. “Most dragons grow up by themselves; it’s not surprising that they become violent and selfish.

Hmph. No wonder they’re called animals. I’m glad I didn’t grow up like them.” Nyx spread her umbral wings and flapped them gracefully, rising into the sky. “I’m going to go up and look around for the crimson dragon again. If I don’t find it this time, we’re out of here.

I’m coming too,” I said as I spread wings of my own. I knew that very few things in the world could threaten a fully grown black dragon, but I still did not like the thought of letting my closest companion and confidant fight a fire-breathing menace by herself. To put it simply, she was a girl while I was a guy. Guys should protect girls.

Just as I levitated myself to Nyx’s height, we heard a vicious snarl coming from the distance. Then I saw a pair of crimson wings blocking out the sun, the wind from its powerful beats pushing against my face. While Nyx was a creature of beauty and elegance, the red dragon’s form displayed nothing but raw, brute strength. The mere sight of it was overpowering. It was almost twice as large as Nyx, with a mouth full of wicked teeth, claws that could rend flesh from bone in an instant, and red-hot flames that gushed from its nostrils whenever it exhaled. It gazed malevolently, and leered at Nyx’s serpentine form.

So I heard that some adventurer and his little dragon pet are here to take me down,” the crimson dragon spoke directly into my mind. I could literally feel malice and disdain dripping from its mental voice. It spoke my language too; perhaps it spent so long terrorizing elementals that it learned to speak like them. “I shall enjoy devouring your charred corpse, insolent elemental. And then I shall make your beautiful companion my mate, and bear my hatchlings.

In your dreams!” Nyx hissed. Before I could stop her, Nyx struck recklessly, breathing out a stream of black energy that drained its victim’s life force. The crimson dragon countered with its own breath weapon, a huge torrent of flames that completely overpowered Nyx’s darkness blast. Nyx almost couldn’t dodge in time; I felt her pain at being burned through our mental link.

The crimson dragon was powerful. Incredibly so. I supposed that there was a reason no one was able to stop it before we came along. And now it seemed that we would fail too. While they waited for their breath weapons to recharge, Nyx and the red dragon engaged in melee combat. Not a particularly wise choice, given the red dragon’s bulk and power. And it was experienced, too; Nyx could barely avoid the crimson dragon’s strikes even with all her agility and finesse. I tried to help whenever I could, but a puny Light elemental, even a strong one like me, had little place in a battle between two great mythical beasts. My sword could pierce the dragon’s scales, but the creature was just so large that my attacks inflicted nigh negligible damage.

Nyx, being more slender than the crimson dragon, began to tire. The crimson dragon took advantage of this, and managed to pin her to the ground of the mountain path. I cried out, and dash forward to slash the dragon’s arm, but felt the wind knocked out of my lungs as the red dragon bashed me away with a flick of its finger. I crashed very painfully into a large rock. Nyx hissed in rage, and tried to unleash another blast of dark energy from her mouth, but the red dragon simply clamped her mouth shut with its other claw. Glaring at her viciously, the crimson dragon spewed forth a stream of searing, red-hot flames directly at Nyx’s face.

Pain. It was all I felt for the next seeming eternity. I felt my own pain of being flung like a ragdoll, and I felt Nyx’s pain at having her face burnt off. Nyx wanted to shut off our telepathic link, to shield me from the excruciating sensations assailing her mind, but I refused to let her. If we died, we would die together.

Were we really going to die like this?

Some said that the moment before you died, your life would flash before your eyes. My life certainly did. I remembered the first time I met Nyx, saving her from a horde of savage beasts. I remembered the day when she first grew wings and tried to fly. I remembered our first adventure together, when we helped a town get rid of a few hungry otyughs. I remembered the time Nyx first learned to use her breath weapon, just in time to save our lives from a rather oversized lava golem. I remembered the times when I saved her life, and the times when she saved mine. I remembered the joy, the sorrow, and the everything in between that we shared. I remembered that despite being a fearsome mythical beast, Nyx was not really any different from me at all.

I cherished those memories from the deepest depths of my heart. God, I didn’t want to die. I wanted to live, to have more adventures, and to keep making those memories…

For some reason, I suddenly remembered a strange fairy tale that my father had told me and Nyx years ago. It was about dragons with incredibly potent magical powers, able to polymorph their entire bodies into other creatures. Some dragons had changed themselves to resemble elementals, and had supposedly lived among our kind for centuries.

If I could do that…” Nyx began to whisper in my mind, “I would spend my life with you as an elemental…

Ugh. That would be nice, but I think I’d rather spend my life with Nyx as a dragon. It would make me a lot more powerful, as well as enabling us to defeat this crimson dragon that was cooking her alive…

The red dragon stopped its fire breath. It then turned around me, its eyes almost ablaze with malice. “I will now devour your elemental pet, my little black serpent. Then you shall be mine.” The dragon let go of a horribly burnt Nyx and walked slowly toward me, wisps of flames escaping from its nose with every breath. Maybe this was it…

No!” Nyx screamed into my mind. “Take my power, Sol! Take it and fly away!

I felt power flooding into me, through the mental link we shared. If Nyx wanted to sacrifice herself so I could survive, so be it. I would run away, stay alive, and not make Nyx sacrifice herself in vain. I opened myself up to my black dragon companion fully, feeling her thoughts, her memories, her emotions, her entirety at once, cherishing what was perhaps our last few moments together. I accepted her influx of power, feeling my wings and wounds repair themselves. I had never felt this powerful before. Perhaps, after absorbing all of Nyx’s power, I would possess enough magical energy to transform into a six-winged archangel. Then I would destroy the red dragon and avenge the death of my black serpent. My power was growing seemingly without a limit, and even my body felt stronger. Strange. Was an archangel this powerful?

W-What?!” I heard the red dragon gasp in shock. “How can this be?!

I opened my eyes. The vision that came to my eyes was quite odd, as I was somehow looking down at the red dragon. Then I noticed that my arms were covered in bright, gleaming golden scales, and I had talons instead of fingernails. My angelic wings were still there, but my backside felt funny, as though I had an extra appendage growing out of my rear. My face felt strange too. I could somehow see 360 degrees around me, and licking them with my tongue showed that my teeth were much sharper than they used to be. I then looked at Nyx, who was no longer a black dragon, but a stunningly beautiful young woman with shiny midnight black hair the exact same shade as her scales. She smiled at me weakly, showing her scarlet eyes. Don’t tell me…

You?! A golden dragon?!” The crimson dragon hissed in rage. “No matter! You shall still burn!

The red dragon charged at me. Somehow, the fire-breathing monstrosity seemed a lot smaller now. I overpowered its lunge quite easily, and pinned it down onto the ground. It blasted fire into my face, but it hurt much less this time. Feeling the power surge within me, I opened my jaws and allowed a beam of blinding white energy to escape. The crimson dragon let out an agonized howl, and was no more. I turned to look at Nyx, who now looked tiny.

“So I guess the legend is true?” Nyx said out loud for the first time in her life. She struggled to stand up. I breathed down a gentle stream of healing energy to reinvigorate her. “I’m now a Darkness elemental, and you’re a golden dragon!”

Yeah, I suppose,” I spoke into her mind. I briefly wondered if I could return to elemental form, and before I knew it I was already at eye level with Nyx. “You look beautiful as an elemental, by the way.”

“And you look handsome as a dragon,” she winked, before rapidly expanding back into the sinuous coils of her black dragon form. “Come on, let’s go back and tell them the good news.” She soared into the air without waiting for me.

I chuckled, and felt my body change just by thinking about it. With a powerful flap of my wings I took to the skies, catching up to Nyx easily. Ha, I could get used to this.

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Re: Short Story Competition - Draconic Guardians https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29012.msg376721#msg376721
« Reply #49 on: August 07, 2011, 09:58:14 am »
I have to withdraw since I've been busy these last few days.

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Re: Short Story Competition - Draconic Guardians https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29012.msg376827#msg376827
« Reply #50 on: August 07, 2011, 04:58:05 pm »
My story will be coming in today (hopefully :-\ ) I have a tendency not to submit things at all if I don't think they're good enough.
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Re: Short Story Competition - Draconic Guardians https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29012.msg376898#msg376898
« Reply #51 on: August 07, 2011, 07:03:49 pm »
:entropy Dissipation Field/Shield
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       Entropy did not care to lose.
       He played a part in every move of every other force of the universe. Try as they might, they could do nothing without him. To act was to change. And wherever they were, whatever they did, Entropy was there, blessing each change with a bit of himself, that it might continue to change and spin away from the structured and the predictable.
       This was satisfying, but it was not enough. For not all change worked in Entropy’s favor. Some change gave Air further freedom to fly where it willed, or helped Gravity along its relentless assaults. It could harden and stabilize Earth, spread the cold waves of Water, or multiply the destructive heat of Fire. It had the annoying tendency to create Light and Darkness effortlessly, and to birth new Life and feed the cold machines of Death just as readily. Some change actually solidified the structures and orders of damnable Aether, and merely fell into step with the endless plans of persistent Time.
       Entropy needed a new strategem, something to keep at his side for situations like these, when change itself failed him and strengthened his enemies. He needed a new way to use his power. But what? It was certain that the tactic he sought would appear eventually. Yet, as he observed what he had wrought throughout the worlds, new thought eluded him.
 
       And so he called for his three half-blooded children to attend him. They were the ones born of his drive for chaos, the ones constantly clashing with themselves and others across the universe. Perhaps they had seen something that he could not, some new vector for change, amongst their own wanderings.
       Entropy’s true daughter, Dream Catcher, exploded into being before him. Moments later his true son, Chaos Lord, arrived in a swath of shifting colors. Then came Destiny, the bastard child, walking as silently and carefully and assuredly as Time itself. Entropy hated that about Destiny. She held the power of Entropy close, yet she took after her other parent so clearly. 
       Entropy explained his dilemma to his children.
       “Father, I don’t understand,” said Destiny. “You need only to use your power to move your enemies along their ordained course.”
       “Their ordained course? Ridiculous!” snapped Entropy. “I can only assume you got this daft idea from Time. There is no order. Nothing moves without my will, and even I do not guide it. Chaos is no toy for meddling and playing. It is greater than that. It is essential!”
       “How can chaos be essential, Father? You are not limitless. You must be bound by something.”
       “Daughter, you disappoint me again. You understand nothing. Begone,” sighed Entropy. Seething, but saying no more, Destiny left as silently as she came. Dream Catcher smirked and Chaos Lord’s colors whirled and danced with vicious glee. Their father’s nature was an obvious fact to them, the purer children.
       “Well?” Entropy growled impatiently.
       “Destroy!” cried Dream Catcher. “Shatter. Kill. Annihilate. Focus your strengths, father. Change all that they have made into nothingness.”
       “This is not what our father has asked, sister,” Chaos Lord cautioned her. “The strength of Entropy is not necessarily in destruction. Something never comes from nothing.”
       “No, it does not,” replied Entropy. “But nothing can come from something.”   
       “Father?” Dream Catcher said, utterly bewildered.
       “I will show you soon. You have all shown me what I could not see, even your misguided half-sister. Thank you, children. You may go.”
   
        Entropy was pleased. Even flailing about like the children that they were, Chaos Lord and Dream Catcher and Destiny could not help but create something new.
        He had brought them together, they had sputtered ineffectually, and then they had gone.
        They had come, tried to impact him, and dispersed.
        They had come, acted, and nothing had resulted.
        They had made something into nothing.
        And they had given him exactly what he had been looking for. They truly were his children.
        He let the idea flash through his mind and breathed existence into it. He did not try to shape its appearance. Entropy loved surprises, anyway.
        What materialized before him was a shield of blackish metal with a symmetrical array of swooping spikes. Beside Entropy’s sword, the bent and twisted instrument of turmoil known as Discord, it looked positively… organized. Methodical, even. But upon closer inspection, the shield shimmered with the same ghostly purple energy as Discord.   
        Entropy did not know what it could do. But he was certain it was what he wanted.
        He informed his children that it was ready. Dream Catcher, displeased by such a quiet and passive-looking thing, turned up her nose at the mere sight of it and tromped away in disgust. Destiny gave no word and made no move; Entropy was certain she thought her plans were complete and that this shield had no place in them. But Chaos Lord, his son, was enthralled. He was transfixed by its swirling energies, and could not stop gazing into its shining blackness.
        “Father,” he asked, “may I carry this into battle?”     
        “Of course, my son!” Entropy beamed. “It will bring no change sitting here unused. Take it with you. I will be watching.”
        Chaos Lord touched the shield. In a crackle of purple light, one shield instantly became four, and he bore them all up and carried them away. Entropy felt an emotion emanating from his variable and usually inscrutable son. He was nearly sure that it was joy.

        Chaos Lord placed the power of Entropy into the shield, and just small pieces of this essence – the tiniest little bits of change – would deflect the blows of dozens. Or hundreds. All Chaos Lord needed to do was assure a flow of Entropy, and it made all his enemies’ attempts at harm into pure futility. Something became nothing, over and over again.
        Entropy watched with fascination. He wondered if he could bend the other Elements to this purpose so easily. It was a simple matter for Entropy to gather their essences. He needed only to reflect on the universe, the constant simultaneous birth and death of energy and clouds and stars, and all twelve forces would rush to him. His children had each inherited a semblance of this very power. 
        Idle contemplation was a powerful thing in the thoughts of Entropy. He looked upon the black shield and saw the purple field around it begin to expand, and then to waver with many colors. Chaos Lord felt the change and… what was that he did? As usual, no one, even his father, could be sure. Did he… laugh?
        Chaos Lord stretched his many arms to the pillars he used to channel the elements, and caused them to light, one by one. Energy of all Elements flowed through him – and now, when his foes struck the shield, a rainbow of colors erupted as all twelve energies met and absorbed their blows. The foes struck harder. It made no difference. They were fighting energy itself, and their efforts dissipated into nothing.
        The shield was not perfect. Magic paid little heed to Entropy’s grasp. Darkness would sap Entropy’s energies, leaving little to fuel his creation. Gravity would do the same, or charge straight through it in her single-minded way. Fire, in his rage and passion, would simply cause it to explode.
        But this was no large matter. Soon enough Entropy would change himself, or them, into something they could never have expected. And their struggle to resist would begin all over again.
        And Entropy smiled.

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Re: Short Story Competition - Draconic Guardians https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=29012.msg377000#msg377000
« Reply #52 on: August 07, 2011, 10:50:21 pm »
And time's up. Stories will be reviewed and voting will start soon.

 

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