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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144229#msg144229
« Reply #12 on: August 22, 2010, 06:56:51 pm »
Dead without a reason

You stray onto the open air,
but you can only breathe despair.
So do not try to run or hide,
for death shall be your only bride.

If you manage to brake free,
you will wake up but you wont see.
If you don't want to be awake,
Life will pass you like a striking snake.

Hear me sing, hear me roar,
soon your mind shall be soar.
For now you live, but when you die,
noone will be there to say goodbye.

And so you stand and so you wait,
not knowing that you are just a bait.
Now the world is trough with you,
only one more thing for you to do.

Do as told and do it well,
you are just an empty shell.
If you ever take a brake,
your life will be just a fake.

Despite the fact that you are dead,
noone is really sad.
So I give you another chance,
to take revenge in battlestance.

Why don't you wake up and see,
that is happening to me.
I burn in eternal hell,
and yet my body is my only cell.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144245#msg144245
« Reply #13 on: August 22, 2010, 07:11:15 pm »
My word that's cheerful

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144385#msg144385
« Reply #14 on: August 22, 2010, 09:55:47 pm »
Abrupt Beginnings

Untold struggles await the spirit, so what soul resides within you?
A life must cling to purpose and declare to which it's due
One might reckon the answer elementary, but rest assured will embroil
Among twelve elements which inhabit this plane on which you toil

Earth humbly enduring, providing little relief
Fire brightly burning, ardent yet brief

Air dancing above, far striking and keen-eyed
Water flowing free, shield and cudgel echo the tide

Light forever radiant, striving to strengthen and abate
Time surprisingly malleable, for something bound by fate

Darkness ever deepening, an unrepentant thief
Gravity unrelenting, its push and pull a persistent grief

Entropy reliably fickle, utterly unbound by constant flux
Life so frenzied, unabated energy at its crux

Aether standing still, eternal and unchanging
Death strangely vibrant, persistent in its scourging

Though but one element at heart only fools dare neglect
Other elemental skills with the energies they direct
Twelve elements inhabit this plane so severe
Twelve elements you must master should you wish to persevere.


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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144933#msg144933
« Reply #15 on: August 23, 2010, 05:37:33 pm »
so we whrite about anything about  elements the game except for the element types or something?

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg144951#msg144951
« Reply #16 on: August 23, 2010, 06:20:07 pm »
My word that's cheerful
Well, I'm cheerful too.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145229#msg145229
« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2010, 01:11:31 am »
A haiku!


Otyugh, devourer,
om nom nom nom nom nom nom,
nom nom nom nom, burp.
So long and thanks for all the fish!

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145230#msg145230
« Reply #18 on: August 24, 2010, 01:13:28 am »
A haiku!


Otyugh, devourer,
om nom nom nom nom nom nom,
nom nom nom nom, burp.

LOL VRT FTW!!!!!

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145232#msg145232
« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2010, 01:14:35 am »
A haiku!


Otyugh, devourer,
om nom nom nom nom nom nom,
nom nom nom nom, burp.
You, sir, reek of win.  A haiku like that is what makes life worth living.
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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145238#msg145238
« Reply #20 on: August 24, 2010, 01:18:06 am »
VRT's haiku is instant win.
To be or not to be, I can do both at once. Go learn quantum mechanics, n00b.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145337#msg145337
« Reply #21 on: August 24, 2010, 04:34:59 am »
This has potential to be very interesting.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145366#msg145366
« Reply #22 on: August 24, 2010, 06:47:00 am »
A haiku!


Otyugh, devourer,
om nom nom nom nom nom nom,
nom nom nom nom, burp.
I like your spirit but the first line is 6 syllables not 5 and the requirement for entry is 50 words. You'll need to add a mega title.

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Re: Free Writing Competition: Poetry in the Spirit of Elements https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11448.msg145368#msg145368
« Reply #23 on: August 24, 2010, 06:55:36 am »
I like your spirit but the first line is 6 syllables not 5
Change "devourer" to "devour" and it'll be fine :P
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