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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg109689#msg109689
« Reply #12 on: July 07, 2010, 12:13:31 pm »
Anyone liked my previous story? Cuz if you did, you're gonna like this one even more.
@hobnob5000: LoL

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg109845#msg109845
« Reply #13 on: July 07, 2010, 05:54:28 pm »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...
XD that was funny.....when I got it.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110276#msg110276
« Reply #14 on: July 08, 2010, 08:09:00 am »
The Women of Chaos
                  There are many tales of small strange beasts, or large mythical creatures in this world. This is only one of the thousands. Many years beyond our current point in time, a group of scientists, known as Zanz Corp., were researching a mystical power in an underground laboratory. This strange power was illuminating from an ancient artifact dug up many miles away. A relic, of sorts. The Zanz Corp. didn't believe that this power was anything to fear. No longer did the people of this world believe in fairy tales, make-believe stories that children fell asleep to. This was a brutal, cold world that only let science lead themselves into the future. Some people say that this is regrettable, as without a faith or belief, nothing could truly, morally advance. Unfortunately, the people of Zanz Corp. didn't care for anyone but themselves. As one of the leading scientists, known as Scared Girl, carefully placed this relic in a large round tube filled with a thick gelatinous material, she closed and locked the electronic lid. She then proceeded to raise her thumb, signaling her friend Jmizzle7 to send several volts of electricity to the gel. Suddenly, in a burst of light, appeared an older, beautiful woman with a skull tattooed on her arm. He hair was floating as if she were standing in a spring breeze. Her head lie in one arm, her face muffled into the shoulder of her dark grey gown. Amazed, Scared Girl released the woman from the tube. "Who are you?" demanded Scared Girl, "And how did you get in that object?". Little did Scared Girl know, this Woman did not like being yelled at. Her eyes sparkled and glowed with a bright dark-purple light, and before you knew it, Scared Girl was shot across the room by a beam of light. She wriggled, paused, and her movement had ceased.
 
                   It was at that moment that Jmizzle7 had thought the worst of poor Scared Girl, but that was the least of his worries. In a blink of an eye, the glowing purple woman looked up at Jmizzle7. He quickly slammed his fist on the red emergency button, locking all doors and windows. The woman was locked away, and away from him. That was all he had worried about. A small group of Scientists, Icybraker Puppychow and Gl1tch, jumped at the alarm. "What does that m-mean?!" Icybraker Shuttered.
"I don't know, but calm down.." said Puppychow softly, "..You'll be fine."
Gl1tch remained silent. It was a scary silence, as not only was he quiet, but he was frozen. He was just in a blank stare. Icybraker shook him, then realized something had happened. Looking past Gl1tch's frozen body, he saw a bruenette woman in a brown tattered robe. Her eyes glowed dark brown, and before you knew it, Puppychow halted all movement as well. Icy, feeling brave, Looked about, and found a fire shooter. In a bolt of fire, the woman was hit and killed. Icybraker rushed to his friends' sides, making them drink a strange blue liquid. All of a sudden, they sprang back to life.
Gl1tch gasped, "Uh! What...What happened?!"
Puppy followed with, "You froze. Then I froze. Then..I'm not sure..."
It was Icybraker's turn to fill in the gaps. "That woman, over there. I killed her. She somehow froze you, but I got her with a fire shooter. I gave you both the healing blue liquid."
In utter disbelief, Gl1tch burst out with, "Thats insanity! Impossible! A bunch of damned lies!"
At that moment, they all went silent. Gl1tches rage soon ended, when the Red haired woman with the burnt gown appeared behind him. Then Puppychow and Icybraker soon followed him. They had died. Jmizzle was left alone with these insane women, all alone. No escape. Just survival.
 
                   Jmizzle7 quickly realized this when he had made his way to the security room, and saw more crazy women all over the laboratory. He paused, as he heard the breath of someone behind him. It was a glowing pale woman with a bright-white and clean dress. She spoke to him,
"Jmizzle7. Do not fear. I am not like those others. The golden one and I are not your enemies."
"What do you mean, golden one?"
"She is like me, but she has different abilities than I."
"Where is she?"
"That is my fear. I have lost her in this maze of metal and electricity. We're running out of time! We must find her!"
Jmizzle7 nodded, grabbed his map, and set out with the pale white woman. Many minutes of searching, avoiding the others, and running about, they had found the golden woman. The three decided they must defeat the others to escape. The golden woman closed her eyes, and said,
"The Black Dress Woman is behind that door", and she pointed forward. Then, strangely, an odd metal ball with a small hole in it fell from nowhere. He picked it up, and moved onwards to the room. She turned quickly and spit a strange acid at him, luckily missing. He aimed the ball at her and it shot out lightning, killing her on instant. After many more predictions and strange items appearing, all were dead but the three. At that moment, Jmizzle got an impulse. He turned, and quickly used lightning on the golden woman. She lay collapsed on the floor. Dead. The white woman began crying, sobbing at what Jmizzle had done. He realized he made a mistake, and tried to apologize. It was too late, nothing could revive her. Then, from nowhere, the white woman began glowing. She floated into the air, and swooped down for a devastating strike on Jmizzle. It was at that moment that Jmizzle had shot up, looked around, and heard a familiar voice. It was Scared Girl. She said,
"The test is complete, Jmizzle. Thank you for your participation. We now know that this drug causes mental hallucinations, and violent impulses. We can now fix this and put it on the market."
"What? It was...a chemical test? It was all a dream?"
"Yes."
"What about the crazy women?"
"All figments of your imagination."
Stunned, Jmizzle began laughing uncontrollably. He laughed until he could no longer breath. He could not regain his breathe, and died of a heart attack. This was the end, for Jmizzle. Later, the drug was enhanced and produced on the market. They named it "Mizzalto", in honor of Jmizzle7, who died for it.

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110419#msg110419
« Reply #15 on: July 08, 2010, 03:20:14 pm »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...

I lol'ed.:))

I tried to make one, but it sucked.

SunnyGreens

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110814#msg110814
« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2010, 03:19:28 am »
Scaredgirl, I am sorry but I read your idea and ran with it. I hope you don't mind.


The Loneliest Otyugh on the Elemental Plane
There was once a little Otyugh, lonely and sad, looking for someone to love. He searched and searched but all he found, were Massive Dragons and Graviton, bullies all. The lonely little Otyugh wailed, “Oh, how lonely I am! No one loves me here, so I will search elsewhere.”

So over the lava fields, and through the caldera, the lonely little Otyugh searched for someone to love.

“Oh Ruby Dragon, Ruby Dragon! Do you love me Ruby Dragon?” asked the lonely little Otyugh. “I am sorry little Otyugh,” the Ruby Dragon replied, “but the flame that burns brightest, burns shortest. I have no time to spend with one so small as you.” To which the Otyugh said, “But I love you Ruby Dragon, every bit of you! Why, your bright fires and brimstone add such zest to your personality. How bold! How piquant! Come, Ruby Dragon, let me kiss you goodbye then and be on my way.”

And the lonely little Otyugh was lonely once more.

So over the reflecting pools, and through a bought of madness, the lonely little Otyugh searched for someone to love.

“Oh Abomination, Abomination! Do you love me Abomination?” asked the lonely little Otyugh. “I am sorry little Otyugh,” the Abomination replied, “but mine is a fickle mistress, ever changing her mind. My love today may turn to hate tomorrow, only to fade into indifference the next.” To which the Otyugh said, “But I love you Abomination, every bit of you! Why, you are like a dozen in one, each with its own surprise. So exotic! So alluring! Come, Abomination, let me kiss you goodbye then and be on my way.”

And the lonely little Otyugh was lonely once more.

So over the swamps, and past the sepulcher, the lonely little Otyugh searched for someone to love.

 “Oh Flesh Recluse, Flesh Recluse! Do you love me Flesh Recluse?” asked the lonely little Otyugh. “I am sorry little Otyugh,” the Flesh Recluse replied, “but I adore meat above all else. Flesh, dripping, raw off the bone.” To which the Otyugh said, “But I love you Flesh Reculse, every bit of you! Why, is that a side of ham lodged within your abdomen? Such glamour! Such taste! Come, Flesh Recluse, let me kiss you goodbye then and be on my way.”

And the lonely little Otyugh was lonely once more.

So over the screeching gorge, and through the wretched wood, the lonely little Otyugh searched for someone to love.

 “Oh Vampire, Vampire! Do you love me Vampire?” asked the lonely little Otyugh. “Why yes, little Otyugh, I love you so very much, every bit of you! Why, you have such a beautifully beating heart. Such verve! Such vigor! Come, lonely little Otyugh, let me kiss you…”

And the lonely little Otyugh was lonely no more.



Moral of the Story:

Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love. 
(Albert Einstein)
~or~
There is no remedy for love but to love more.
(Henry David Thoreau)
~or~
There is no love sincerer than the love of food.
    (George Bernard Shaw)







Scaredgirl

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110924#msg110924
« Reply #17 on: July 09, 2010, 10:06:53 am »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...
XD that was funny.....when I got it.
Actually I think it was an unintentional joke. :) As you can see, the story has been edited there now.

miniwally

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110951#msg110951
« Reply #18 on: July 09, 2010, 11:43:33 am »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...
XD that was funny.....when I got it.
Actually I think it was an unintentional joke. :) As you can see, the story has been edited there now.
Well that's slightly dissapointing :P.

Purity_Riot

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg110984#msg110984
« Reply #19 on: July 09, 2010, 01:15:34 pm »
I really, really can`t wait for the voting.

Hobnob5000

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg111028#msg111028
« Reply #20 on: July 09, 2010, 03:06:23 pm »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...
XD that was funny.....when I got it.
Actually I think it was an unintentional joke. :) As you can see, the story has been edited there now.
Well that's slightly dissapointing :P.
You do realise I don't even know what the joke is. Can someone explain my sense of humour? :P

Scaredgirl

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg111031#msg111031
« Reply #21 on: July 09, 2010, 03:13:03 pm »
Screw Sci-Fi, after spending 4 hours trying to write some, I realised it is impossible. Maybe I will try a romance now, and see how that goes.

Simon's Story
Content coming soon...
XD that was funny.....when I got it.
Actually I think it was an unintentional joke. :) As you can see, the story has been edited there now.
Well that's slightly dissapointing :P.
You do realise I don't even know what the joke is. Can someone explain my sense of humour? :P
You chose romance as a genre and it's titled "Simon's Story". Reader might assume that you are Simon, and that this romance novel is about your love life. "Content coming soon..." means you don't have one.

Get it? :)

Hobnob5000

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg111033#msg111033
« Reply #22 on: July 09, 2010, 03:17:53 pm »
OHHHHHHHHH

I get it. I think I should have left that comment as it is now, considering that the story is shawking :P

And my name is not Simon :P

miniwally

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition (mystery/Sci-fi/romance) https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=9201.msg111047#msg111047
« Reply #23 on: July 09, 2010, 03:44:49 pm »
OHHHHHHHHH

I get it. I think I should have left that comment as it is now, considering that the story is shawking :P

And my name is not Simon :P
You have to ruin it.

 

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