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Scaredgirl

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Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18519#msg18519
« on: January 19, 2010, 11:51:24 am »
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Elements Short Story Competition

RULES
  • Post your short story on this thread
  • You can write about anything as long as it's related to Elements
  • Entries must be in English
  • Entries must be entirely your own work and never previously published or broadcast, online or offline.
  • One entry per person only. You can rewrite your story as many times as you like until the countdown goes to zero
  • there is no word limit
  • No offensive material. Rule of thumb is that whatever you post as a short story should be something you could post on the forums as well without getting instantly banned
TIPS:
  • Try to incorporate into your story creatures, spells, permanents, opponents, anything found in the game
  • Use software like Microsoft Word (or our forum built-in spell check) to find possible typos and other errors before submitting your story
  • Sometimes simple is better. Might not be a good idea to write a 500 word story with all the cards in the game. "A Day in the Life of an Otyugh" could be just as interesting.
  • Remember to include a title
Winner will get tons of respect and an award icon (Creative Writer) under his/her Avatar. Also depending on what kind of stories we get, who knows maybe they might also at some point be added to the game itself and flavor text, but that's totally up to developers.

This competition runs for approximately one week after which we will have a vote on this same thread and determine the winner.

Good luck!


P.s I'm not a writer (really surprising, isn't it?) and haven't organized anything like this before so if you have any suggestion regarding the rules, just let me know.

Forfeit

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18527#msg18527
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2010, 01:40:46 pm »
Um, can you add one more rule, that the stuff written can't directly contradict with the seriously written stuff in the wiki. I'd seriously hate to go through that and figure everything out if it did. And lol, the person who kept the story running and made a section for this in the wiki, and has written one story and edited the main story line, yeah, no, I'm really not deserving of the 'creative Writer', title after all that. And getting us a creative arts section, and a few others. Nope, not at all, lol. And planning to continue it. Now off to go edit my last post in the 'story', thread and tell everyone to come here.

P.S. I may be doing something like this, but strictly for the continuation of the 'fan based storyline', not the 'fan based side storys', hope you don't mind. The idea is kinda based on this, but also something I was planning on doing before I saw this fourm. Expect my short story for elements what-not soon, btw.


P.S. Everybody, have fun doing this. And remember, Stuff can be added to the wiki without winning here (or at least with our current wiki it can) and already has. And visit the 'Well, is there a story, there is now', thread. And read the stuff in the wiki, its great!

Also, after leaving here and going off to find the short story already written, it makes no sense. It is under the cards section, in cards art. If it could be moved into a section called 'elements art', or the like. We can either move all the card art with it too, or make one more specifit for writing, and link to the wiki card of the week in there too. I think it would fit. Yeah, the only reason I found the short story is 'cause I've posted in it already. And are we going to fix the typing lag on this forum, I'm sitting and watching my words type a minute after I've typed them.

Scaredgirl

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18528#msg18528
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 01:59:28 pm »
Um, can you add one more rule, that the stuff written can't directly contradict with the seriously written stuff in the wiki. I'd seriously hate to go through that and figure everything out if it did. And lol, the person who kept the story running and made a section for this in the wiki, and has written one story and edited the main story line, yeah, no, I'm really not deserving of the 'creative Writer', title after all that. And getting us a creative arts section, and a few others. Nope, not at all, lol. And planning to continue it. Now off to go edit my last post in the 'story', thread and tell everyone to come here.

P.S. I may be doing something like this, but strictly for the continuation of the 'fan based storyline', not the 'fan based side storys', hope you don't mind. The idea is kinda based on this, but also something I was planning on doing before I saw this fourm. Expect my short story for elements what-not soon, btw.

I'm not going to add a rule like that.

This competition has nothing to do with any previous stories or stuff written in wiki. It's a totally separate thing where anyone can write about anything using Elements characters, spells, etc. It doesn't matter how much it contradicts any previous "seriously written" material. This is just for for fun and anything goes, just like it should be in competitions like this one.

Also this is not a competition about who get a title of "Creative Writer". The winner only gets an award icon, kind of like a trophy. And I'll probably change the name into something more trophy-like, for example "Short Story Competition Winner.

Scaredgirl

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18529#msg18529
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 02:15:19 pm »
Also, after leaving here and going off to find the short story already written, it makes no sense. It is under the cards section, in cards art. If it could be moved into a section called 'elements art', or the like. We can either move all the card art with it too, or make one more specifit for writing, and link to the wiki card of the week in there too. I think it would fit. Yeah, the only reason I found the short story is 'cause I've posted in it already. And are we going to fix the typing lag on this forum, I'm sitting and watching my words type a minute after I've typed them.
This is going off-topic but I'll reply quickly. Right now all non-card-art threads go under "Off-Topic Discussions" -> "Creative Arts". This is because:

MAIN REASON: These art threads are not that popular (only a handful of threads/posters so far), therefore don't deserve their own main forum section
SECONDARY REASON: Although they are technically about Elements, they don't really have much to do with the game itself

There are still some general art threads in "Card Art" but I'll take care of it right now.

In the future, if more people get involved and/or some of these writing gets added to the game, then we'll find a better spot for art discussion.

As for this "typing lag".. are you talking about the forum or the chat?

If you want to reply to those two things, please start a new topic in "Forum Feedback and Suggestions" or PM me as it's off-topic.

slovenc555

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18542#msg18542
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 04:03:08 pm »
Ok, there's my story (hope that it belongs here):

At first, there were 13 elements. They were the only things that exzisted. There were no planets, buildings creatures or spells. Soon after their creation elements discovered that they could build pillars that would prodice material simmular to themselves. It was appearing in shape of perfect orbs of differing colors. Some time the elements were scared of the orbs, fearing to touch them. But after they did, all that happend was a change in the touched orb. The elements have left their marks on them. The elements were confused, they did not know what to do with orbs. But the thirteenth element, that was neutral and made all of the orbs started to preform magic. The other elements did the same. They were overwhelmed by charm, so much, they have been thorn appart, to form replicas of them selves. The original peices, now known as fake gods got angry and attacked the thirteenth element and destroyed it. After the neutral element was destroyed, the elements started to fight. they fuond ways to create creatures, that would attack ther opponents for them. As the Fake gods did that, the replicas immatated them. The war has started. The remaning elements explored the quantums that pillars produced, and soon they discovered they could also create weapons and shields. The abundance of things they've created made them weak, unable to protect themselves without sheilds or attack other without weapons. So they upgraded their spells, so they could steal enemy protection, make creatures take the damage and attack. After they did that they wanted to upgrade further, and so they did, but not only spells, also creatures and pernaments. The Fake gods retreated and made peace with each other, tradeing secrets and creatures, makeing them specialised. But the others grew, to the point they could defeat the Fake gods. You are one of the fragments. You are young, you are about to transform, to pick your element. And if you succed, you will have descendants, wich will be like you now, the tirtheenth element. They also transform into one of the elements. But it is up to you to choose. Will you be a part of Aether? Light? Maybie Darkness? Or Time? Maybie you will choose anything else, but it's up to you!

Sorry it was that long, i kinda couldnt stop. it just want ended. Sry.

Lanidrak

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18547#msg18547
« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 04:47:25 pm »
My short story. Written in MS-Word. Will edit it and make it more reader friendly in here!
--------------------------------Get Comfortable--------------------------------
There have always been Twelve.

There is He who governs all. And for whom the entire history of Mankind can pass in the blinking of an eyelid or for whom the very act of blinking can take an Eternity. It is He who gives all others being. Without Him there can be no others. He is Time, the First and in all likelihood the Last. It is in His Realm that all takes place, for without Him, there could be no Realm.

There are those who seek to find order and structure. They seek to chain chaos and tame the random into a structure more akin to Time. These are the primal beings. These are Earth, Fire and Water. They have no concept of time, existing only in themselves and for themselves. A Fire can rage within indefinitely or it can smoulder and consume very rapidly. Earth moves slowly and has a sense of permanence but can also fall and shatter immediately. Water flows gently and bursts forth with great force. For these there is no need for knowledge of Time. It is through the politics and allegiances of these that give us the others.

Fire and Water rage for centuries in very opposition to what can only be called their nature. Their battles and fierce resistance to each other have given us Air. Earth and Water have had a more constructive relationship, moulding together and flowing to give us Life in the presence of Air. Air prides itself on being above the petty squabbles of its’ parents and Life is a truly powerful being in that for Mankind and all other forms of being could not exist without it.

It is in the hearts and minds of men that morality and conscious gave birth, unwittingly to Darkness and Light. These two cannot exist, one without the other, and therefore are locked indefinitely in a struggle for dominance in the very souls of the Men they were born in. Light strives for justice, honour and order, whereas; Darkness seeks to corrupt, conceal and harm. It is the very morality and sense of balance of Mankind which in the early days of the birth of Mankind gave us the need to balance Life. Therefore we have Death, the omnipotent claimer of lives. He who grows in Darkness and wreaks havoc amongst Life using any means possible.

In the greatest minds of Mankind and in the weakest thoughts of all Life, there is knowledge of Light and Dark, of good and of evil. It is through the mind that knowledge and understanding have given us Gravity: the force which holds and sustains all Planets of Earth and Water, Air and Fire. For although there have always been Twelve, there is an growing infinity beyond even the understanding of Time. The intellectual thinkers, theorists and prophets grant us insight into this infinity. It is in looking through and past infinity to realise that there is nothing more other than infinity to be seen. However, it is in infinity that exists the Aether. The power of mystery and the very knowledge of the infinity that holds true that there must exist an Aether. The Other Dimension.

It is the legacy of mankind that False Gods, remnants of past religions, have made allegiances with the Elements. It is the legacy of mankind that leaves an untold number of planets littered with shrines and pillars to the Elements. It is the legacy of mankind that the very need for balance was created, through Light and Dark and Life and Death.

And so it was for millennia, centuries, years, months and days. Truthfully, so it was for an untold amount of time. All existed in the caring embrace of Time. Mankind came and went, bringing in its path untold destruction and death but also love and compassion. The balance of good and evil remains precarious at best. Life coexists with Earth and Water while Fire and Death rage on. And so it was.

For there have always been Twelve.

The Twelfth has returned. She who seeks to upset the balance, to tilt the scales; She whose motives are unknown and malicious. She who knows only chaos and unsystematic thought - rejected by Time – and cast into hiding for so long. She has returned. She is Entropy. Her very gaze and touch is enough to corrupt and send the most fortified mind into turmoil.

The Others now fight amongst themselves. Earth has rejected Life, becoming barren and unfertile. Air suffocates and leaves vacuums of nothingness. Light and Darkness seek now to overpower the Others and grow further. Fire rages on. The very being of Gravity has weakened and now seeks not only to maintain order, but to expand and envelop the Others. Water no longer flows, it has developed a mind of its own, it’s own agenda and motives, freezing at will and poisoning those it disregards. The Aether has made its presence known and Death has grown hungry. And that is as it is now. A Universe of war and turmoil, chaos and order. The End has never been nearer. A release from it all. Who will be victorious? Is it the end for all?

Only Time will Tell.
--------------------------------The End--------------------------------

Only 872 words. I'm used to writing essays and assignments which are 3,000 + longer! Hope you like!

slovenc555

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18549#msg18549
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2010, 05:03:27 pm »
Awesome, just one problem tougth... i think that air would replace fire in the primal beings... something. and life would be next, fire would follow it. why you ask? I'll tell you why: fire needs both, air and organic matter in order to survive. and by the way, the steam rising from the fire is after you poar some water on it is'nt air, it's just water vapour. after it cools down, it'll become liquid water once again.

and again I could get carried away, but i stoped myself (by noticing my dinner is on fire :( )

otherwise the story ig prety FRAEKI'N AWESOME! tough it sounds more like an dascription. not of the game, but about how elements are arranged.

Lanidrak

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18550#msg18550
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2010, 05:07:22 pm »
Hehe yeah thanks. I sort of got carried away and had to keep counting to make sure I including all 12 elements.

I know that when you boil water it doesnt give off air. It's just water vapour (which is a gas, and therefore similar to air?). But then again, in who's kitchen kettle can you have Lava Destroyers and Fire Bucklers against Chrysaora and Thunderstorms? :)

slovenc555

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18560#msg18560
« Reply #8 on: January 19, 2010, 06:38:18 pm »
let's se... does a furnise owen count as a kettle?  :D

Daxx

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18564#msg18564
« Reply #9 on: January 19, 2010, 07:09:02 pm »
I'm working on something. I could do with the prompt to be creative.

Who's judging this?

Scaredgirl

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18566#msg18566
« Reply #10 on: January 19, 2010, 07:22:19 pm »
I'm working on something. I could do with the prompt to be creative.

Who's judging this?
We all are. Once the counter goes to zero, I will list all the participants and everyone can vote their favorite. Same system we are going to have with that Best Card Idea competition.

Lanidrak

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Re: Elements Short Story Competition https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=2269.msg18621#msg18621
« Reply #11 on: January 19, 2010, 10:45:02 pm »
Mine could use some fine tuning. I wrote it in about 30 minutes  :))..

I can still edit it right as long as the timer is still ticking down? I'd like to add more relating to why we are fighting and the pillars and false gods etc...

 

anything
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