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Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg147943#msg147943
« on: August 28, 2010, 12:55:19 pm »
Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke
NAME:

Veil of Smoke
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
5 :darkness
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:

Prevents 1 damage from physical attacks. Attacking creatures gain ability Veil for 2 turns. Not stackable.
NAME:
Veil of Smoke
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
4 :darkness
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:

Prevents 2 damage from physical attacks. Attacking creatures gain ability Veil for 2 turns. Not stackable.
ART:

http://www.sxc.hu/photo/213819
IDEA:
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NOTES:
I was looking at the post about what the game "needs" and went from ideas of there to make a card. This is a shield for :darkness. Veil will be an ability added to the card that lasts 2 turns. possibly a black counter with 2 on it. While the Veil counter is on the creature is has 50% of attacking its owner instead of the opponent. With adrenaline this would be the first 2 attacks each one having 50% of attacking the owner. After the 2 turns it returns to the normal attacking of the opponent.
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg147959#msg147959
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2010, 01:34:40 pm »
its OP for its cost, methinks. raise it to 6/7 ish? o.0

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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg147961#msg147961
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2010, 01:44:58 pm »
its OP for its cost, methinks. raise it to 6/7 ish? o.0
sorry forgot when i was editing it to add the 2 turns bit. costs changed as well.
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150421#msg150421
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2010, 11:11:48 pm »
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-You have the wrong icons for your cards. They should be permanent symbols, not Spell symbols (i.e. - it shouldn't be a Lightning bolt)
-Provide a link to the image in question
-Change 'Card Text' to 'Text' in your table sections as of the recent changes found here (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5039.msg156494#msg156494)


"Attacking creatures gain ability Veil..." - mind explaining what 'Veil' does exactly in your notes to avoid confusion? ^^;

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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150634#msg150634
« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2010, 06:22:44 am »
CURATOR COMMENT
-You have the wrong icons for your cards. They should be permanent symbols, not Spell symbols (i.e. - it shouldn't be a Lightning bolt)
-Provide a link to the image in question
-Change 'Card Text' to 'Text' in your table sections as of the recent changes found here (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5039.msg156494#msg156494)


"Attacking creatures gain ability Veil..." - mind explaining what 'Veil' does exactly in your notes to avoid confusion? ^^;
ill fix it.. and now its TEXT? it was CARD TEXT last i saw.. quit changing it!
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150700#msg150700
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2010, 11:27:34 am »
ok all edited fixed and ability Veil explained better i hope.
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150705#msg150705
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2010, 12:06:21 pm »
op might want to nerf it to something like
 
unupped 5 :darkness
attacking creature has 50% chance of getting vail for 2 turns. 50% to hit owner

upped   5 :darkness
prevent 1 damage from phyiscal sources.attacking creature has 50% chance of getting vail for 2 turns. 50% to hit owner


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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150709#msg150709
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2010, 12:23:14 pm »
how is it OP? its 2 turns with a 50% chance of it happening. its fine just like this..
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150713#msg150713
« Reply #8 on: September 02, 2010, 12:36:46 pm »
how is it OP? its 2 turns with a 50% chance of it happening. its fine just like this..
does the effect stack every time the creature attacks?

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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150714#msg150714
« Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 12:40:33 pm »
how is it OP? its 2 turns with a 50% chance of it happening. its fine just like this..
does the effect stack every time the creature attacks?
i thought of that when i replied. and as it stands yes. if you think about it though 50% chance to attack the owner so if it does that no counters added. if that is too powerful fine but so far you are the first to say so. i need more thoughts on it with more than "OP" or similar. i prefer thought filled comments so i can than rework the card.. being told something is UP or OP with no explanation does not help.
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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150778#msg150778
« Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 03:53:52 pm »
just compare the upped to an improved dusk

both cost 4 :darkness
dusk has a 50% chance to miss while this not only has the same % chance to make your opponent miss but also damage him while reducing 2 physical dmg.
thats OP

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Re: Veil of Smoke | Veil of Smoke https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11954.msg150784#msg150784
« Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 04:14:37 pm »
just compare the upped to an improved dusk

both cost 4 :darkness
dusk has a 50% chance to miss while this not only has the same % chance to make your opponent miss but also damage him while reducing 2 physical dmg.
thats OP
its a 50% chance to hit me or hit the owner.. so it could still just as well hit me for same damage amount. well minus the 2. if balancing it would be meaning to give a % to the veil ability fine. but im not changing it based on 1 persons opinion/suggestion.
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