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Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049014#msg1049014
« on: March 07, 2013, 02:21:16 am »
NAME:
Foreshadow
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
6 :time
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Summons a copy of the target creature in your hand. Creature lasts one turn.
NAME:
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ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
7 :time
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Summons a copy of the target creature in your hand. Creature lasts two turns.

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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049015#msg1049015
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2013, 02:37:17 am »
This is way UP. Look at Parallel Universe. The creature is automatically in play for 7 quanta.

With this card, you have to actually pay for the creature, and then it dies! Bring to cost down. A lot.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049018#msg1049018
« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2013, 02:43:26 am »
This is way UP. Look at Parallel Universe. The creature is automatically in play for 7 quanta.

With this card, you have to actually pay for the creature, and then it dies! Bring to cost down. A lot.

The reason why the quanta is so high for this, is because you are targeting a creature in your hand, which you may not have the correct amount of quanta to play, such as a dragon.

If this does not justify it, could you recommend a quanta cost for both cards.

All advice is welcome.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049021#msg1049021
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2013, 02:52:10 am »
I like this.

It'd probably be pretty specialized, but might be interesting in certain decks....

I don't think the cost is unreasonable, but I don't like that it's time. Although any specific element wouldn't work. I want to be able to run this in a monodeck to allow me to use the abilities of a creature from another element without using a duo.

Not sure what to tell you. I'll think about it.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049022#msg1049022
« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2013, 02:57:07 am »
I like this.

It'd probably be pretty specialized, but might be interesting in certain decks....

I don't think the cost is unreasonable, but I don't like that it's time. Although any specific element wouldn't work. I want to be able to run this in a monodeck to allow me to use the abilities of a creature from another element without using a duo.

Not sure what to tell you. I'll think about it.

Well, in the spirit of foreshadow I made it time, but this could be any element really.  I just didn't want to make it aether, because aether has PU/TU.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049023#msg1049023
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2013, 03:08:17 am »
Ah. I misread. I still think that it is a little UP though.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1049033#msg1049033
« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2013, 04:37:23 am »
How about both cost 6?
Lower cost of each by 1.

Could be useful in OTKs, though I've yet to think of a good application.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1053753#msg1053753
« Reply #7 on: March 24, 2013, 10:12:14 am »
Text in card is a little misreading, as people would think you select a target on the field and add it to your hand.
How about "The selected creature in your hand is summoned on the field. Creature dies in one turn."
Also, it's still kind of UP, it's basically a nerfed version of PU that is temporary that selects cards in your hand.
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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1062134#msg1062134
« Reply #8 on: April 21, 2013, 04:40:24 am »
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Correct these errors as soon as possible and feel free to submit again when ready.

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Re: Foreshadow | Mirage https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=47509.msg1062191#msg1062191
« Reply #9 on: April 21, 2013, 09:11:01 am »
quanta cost is just too high to be useful.

I'm not sure if this would be better or worse, but if the effect was to actually summon the target creature for 6-7 time permanently, that'd be something.
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