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Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471634#msg471634
« on: March 17, 2012, 08:28:48 am »
NAME:
Uron
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
5 :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3/3
TEXT:
:earth : Frenzy
have a 50% chance of kill a double size creature (hp) or die.
NAME:
Uron
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4  :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3/3
TEXT:
:earth : Frenzy
have a 50% chance of kill a double size creature (hp) or die.
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smendez
NOTES:
a Uron (ferret) can kill snakes but the game doesnt have so... dragons or everything bigger xD
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NAME:
Uron
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
5 :
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3/3
TEXT:
:earth : Frenzy
Have a 50% chance of kill a dragon or die.
NAME:
Uron
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4 :
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3/4
TEXT:
:earth : Frenzy
Have a 50% chance of kill a dragon or die.
ART:
smendez
IDEA:
smendez
NOTES:
a Uron (ferret) can kill snakes but the game doesnt have so... dragons xD
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471635#msg471635
« Reply #1 on: March 17, 2012, 08:33:18 am »
thx again guys. what about this:
 :earth : Frenzy
have a 50% chance of kill a double size creature (hp) or die.
whe have 3 hp so can kill creatures with 6 or more hp (most of dragons).  if lose hp can kill creatures with 4 hp and 2 hp.

or even more, if the uron kill the creature, is injured (for the fight) and lose 1 hp so you can kill 3 creatures at most ( if you are lucky)

(this is my first card so im not sure about balance) any help is welcome
my english is not very good so feel free to correct everythig xD
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471704#msg471704
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2012, 03:33:26 pm »
Don't forget to put the card name on the card.

Actually, you may want to drop the costs to 4/3 or 4/2 if you want to keep the stats, as the effect is rather situational, since most don't actually run dragons.  Or, if you want to stick with 7/5 cost, make the stats are 6/6 for both.  Pretty sure that attack niche has yet to be filled in :earth .  Unupgraded at least.

Also, maybe call the ability "Slayer" or something to that effect.  Maybe "Frenzy" considering the chance to die, which, in my opinion, would be better off expanding it to all creatures, but increasing the chance to die.
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471734#msg471734
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2012, 06:12:17 pm »
Hunt might be a good ability name. I agree with drake. At that cost, you can raise the stats quite a bit.
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471758#msg471758
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2012, 07:56:56 pm »
thx for the feedback, i like the name frenzy for the skill. and with that stats i think can be a good add to a deck and sacrifice if a dragon show up.
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471759#msg471759
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2012, 07:59:27 pm »
Why must it kill a dragon? Why can't it thematically, say, kill a shrieker instead?
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471767#msg471767
« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2012, 08:15:24 pm »
Seems very situational if it's just a dragon. What about "Highest attack creature on the field"? Although that might mess with the balance a bit.
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471769#msg471769
« Reply #7 on: March 17, 2012, 08:16:04 pm »
Quote from: eaglgenes101 on March 17, 2012, 07:59:27 pm
Why must it kill a dragon? Why can't it thematically, say, kill a shrieker instead?
Check the notes.
But, continuing with your thought, any creature with > X attack?
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Re: Uron/Uron https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=37537.msg471804#msg471804
« Reply #8 on: March 17, 2012, 09:54:46 pm »
thx again guys. what about this:
 :earth Frenzy
have a 50% chance of kill a double size creature (hp) or die.
whe have 3 hp so can kill creatures with 6 or more hp (most of dragons).  if lose hp can kill creatures with 4 hp and 2 hp.
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