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Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243114#msg243114
« on: January 08, 2011, 03:04:25 pm »
NAME:
Unicorn
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
3 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
2|3
TEXT:
:water : Refraction
The target creature is invisible for 1 turn. This skill can be used multiple times per turn.
NAME:
Elite Unicorn
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
3 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|5
TEXT:
:water : Refraction
The target creature is invisible for 1 turn. This skill can be used multiple times per turn.
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not only dark can hide something.  with light, you can even make a mirage.  :P
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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243120#msg243120
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2011, 03:13:13 pm »
"The target creature is invisible for one turn..."
You should get someone to proofread your card texts before you go about making cards. Now you have to remake the card image ^^

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243122#msg243122
« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2011, 03:15:35 pm »
i'm alway have a problem with my card text.  even don't make some card in my head cuz i'm don't sure what to write on it text....

btw.  thx.   i'll fixed it as fast as i can   ;D

edit:fixed it. :P

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243124#msg243124
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2011, 03:20:47 pm »
it might not matter but http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,9565.0.html is a link to a unicorn card in level 2
you might want to change the name

on the otherhand, can you use it multiple times on the same card?

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243127#msg243127
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2011, 03:23:31 pm »
wow...  and that unicorn even use  :water to cost a skill too.....   

you can use it.   but for what?  that have a same effect like 2 cloack in your field.

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243137#msg243137
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2011, 03:49:50 pm »
First look and opinion of this card is that it's overpowered, I mean isn't this just a quint for every one of your creatures with an average of 1-8 upkeep of water quanta? Although interesting concept of giving invisibility to creatures without cloak, but why should it be able to be used multiple times a turn? This could go 2 ways to keep the card generally the same, either change the skill cost to 2 water quanta or change the skill to only be used once. HOWEVER, there are still some counters to this card, there is still lobotomize and certain types of mass CC, but once the unicorn gets through the first turn, it's pretty much invincible after that. Not quite sure if shields affect invisible creatures, but if they do, then I guess the unicorn doesn't have to be nerfed too badly. I'll have to see what more people think about the card before I could give more detailed thoughts and opinions on the card idea. I think the concept is quite good, light+water=refraction(or is it just reflection?) altough I think I read somewhere that refraction is more light shining on a crystal, so it might be better off using aether quanta if refraction was used as the name. A good suggestion for the name could be mirage copy, like giving the idea of a double copy or fake if something(not TU) Just giving my opinions, any other suggestions or comments from the creator of the card idea?
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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243147#msg243147
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2011, 04:12:13 pm »
um....

are you forget that anubis can quint your creature for eternal turn with only 1  :aether?

make my creature quint (no.  it's less than quint cuz can reveal by AOE spell)  by 1  :water with only 1 turn must have something to prove isn't it?

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243156#msg243156
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 04:30:43 pm »
I find that this mass invisibility with a recurring cost is worth about the same as Immortality (the skill) that is to say 3 quanta worth.
Coincidently the card currently prices the skill at 3 quanta and is therefore balanced. (What luck.)

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243158#msg243158
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 04:34:54 pm »
Its actually better than immortality because you can still pump the creature, and light has on colored buffs.

Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243161#msg243161
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 04:45:22 pm »
I like it, not OP or UP, very good creature for  :light, fair ability, good combo with  :water/ :light nymph rush... 6 of them could protect Nymph Queens and White Nymphs... Overall, a good card, I'd like to see it in-game.

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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243262#msg243262
« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2011, 06:49:08 pm »
This could go 2 ways to keep the card generally the same, either change the skill cost to 2 water quanta or change the skill to only be used once.
i really didn't know what to to think when i saw the name of this card. but after seeing it, it's made a good first impression. as for the ability though, i agree with the above statement
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Re: Unicorn | Elite Unicorn https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19080.msg243281#msg243281
« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2011, 07:02:36 pm »
I like the card. Has lots of possiablities. Altho you might want to change it's name to something like "Sliver Unicorn",
"Elite Sliver Unicorn" as was pointed out by someone else their is already an "Unicorn" card in the level 2 vote thats in the top 3-4 of voteing. Even tho the other card is mine I only say this to keep down any confusion between them.

 

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