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Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280253#msg280253
« on: February 28, 2011, 09:07:04 am »
 :life Treant|Treant  :life


NAME:
Treant
ELEMENT:
:life
COST:
5 :life
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4|6
TEXT:
:life :life : Entangle
The target creature takes 1 damage and is delayed by 1 turn
Flammable.
NAME:
Treant
ELEMENT:
:life
COST:
:life
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5|8
TEXT:
:life :life : Entangle
The target creature takes 1 damage and is delayed by 1 turn
Flammable.
ART:
....
IDEA:
DeathPanda1
NOTES:
Flammable = takes double damge from fire.
So Fire bolt will do 6 damage, fire shield will do 2, rain of fire will do 6 damage and so on with the upped cards
SERIES:
None
Due to recent events i have taken down the pict and have unable to find another one

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280306#msg280306
« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2011, 01:41:55 pm »
See Iridium Warden | Vanadium Warden (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,21460.0.html).

Also you should link to the source of the art in the future.
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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280315#msg280315
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2011, 02:04:41 pm »
Well, that's  :earth, this is the  :life version :D

Looks pretty nice and normal powered to me :D

"...and is delayed..." a small grammar typo :)

It should somehow regenerate if you have  :life or  :earth as mark, imagining it rooting itself to heal itself
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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280318#msg280318
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 02:08:20 pm »
Well, that's  :earth, this is the  :life version :D
Redundancy needs a proper cause. Let DeathPanda1 make the case for redundancy. If there is no cause for redundancy then the card effect should change.
Looks pretty nice and normal powered to me :D

"...and is delayed..." a small grammar typo :)

It should somehow regenerate if you have  :life or  :earth as mark, imagining it rooting itself to heal itself
Let's Keep It Simple. Flammable is pushing it already
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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280403#msg280403
« Reply #4 on: February 28, 2011, 07:11:33 pm »
Right i think i fixed everything up, when im typing i usually forget to type bit and pieces

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280408#msg280408
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2011, 07:21:32 pm »
Right i think i fixed everything up, when im typing i usually forget to type bit and pieces
When you have time please explain why you think this card merits creating redundancy between it and Warden.
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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280484#msg280484
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2011, 09:59:10 pm »
Also, art is copyrighted (http://willowwisp.deviantart.com/art/DS-Monsters-Treant-43917980?q=boost:popular%20Treant&qo=12). Please read the description next time and remember that all art from Deviantart is copyrighted by default.

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Would this stock-free photo work for your card? (http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1337093) 

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg280589#msg280589
« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2011, 11:58:37 pm »
Hurting the target creature is kind of out of Life's Theme/scope.

Delaying I can see - possibly. Hurting I can't.


This card is rather redundant as stated and it is expensive and weak to fire. If you want to make a tree card that is flammable, I suggest you stick with that idea, give it a slight boost in stats, reduction in cost and forget the CC aspect. Life cards are relatively cheap on the whole and this card doesn't seem to fit that bill either.

I think you need to make an argument as to why Life deserves hard CC (hp damage) and why a tree would be what does cc. If life was gonna have CC it seems, to me at least, it would be in the for of an animal, not a plant. I can kind of see plants like vines, stinging nettles, roses and others that are painful and or restrictive working as CC - but we already have thorn shield.


There have been many card prototypes that involved trees and life - none have made it into the game. Why is this tree card better than previous tree cards?

Anyhow, glad to have your idea, but there is still room for improvement.

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg281227#msg281227
« Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 11:24:02 pm »
The art source clearly states the copyright notice. Please change the card art.
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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg281578#msg281578
« Reply #9 on: March 02, 2011, 08:56:24 am »
Making cards is all new to me with making it balanced and to make it fit the element i just dont see why life has to be so cheap/weak, sure "nature" isnt exactly the strongest thing around but surely life needs mid hitter perhaps not this card but it would be nice to see some good damage from life.

I used life quanta for a the ability only because i thought u would entangle something with the roots of the treant or perhaps if i changed the name of the ability to 'Thorned Roots' or something could be better in a way or not

Right i think i fixed everything up, when im typing i usually forget to type bit and pieces
When you have time please explain why you think this card merits creating redundancy between it and Warden.
To be honest i have no idea what u mean by this?
 

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg281593#msg281593
« Reply #10 on: March 02, 2011, 09:24:20 am »
I'm not really sold on the concept of this card... when I pulled it up, I was expecting to see something like this: Treant by doomdesire385 not a leaf... and I read what Flammable is, but it seems to make the card unnecessary considering its 5 | 7 cost ...

Life doesn't really have any heavy hitters aside from Emerald Dragon, maybe making it a 7 attack / 4 HP creature instead?

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Re: Treant|Treant https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21858.msg281596#msg281596
« Reply #11 on: March 02, 2011, 09:56:28 am »
I'm not really sold on the concept of this card... when I pulled it up, I was expecting to see something like this: Treant by doomdesire385 not a leaf... and I read what Flammable is, but it seems to make the card unnecessary considering its 5 | 7 cost ...

Life doesn't really have any heavy hitters aside from Emerald Dragon, maybe making it a 7 attack / 4 HP creature instead?
ive seen that pict before but i remember seeing something like it in a game so i wasnt sure if i should use it or not and my best guess would have to be a no

 

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