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Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210239#msg1210239
« on: October 14, 2015, 11:12:05 am »
NAME:
Attribute: Peace Treaty
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
3 :light
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Both players creatures and weapons cannot attack or use spells that deal damage
for 1 turn. Doesn't Stack.
NAME:
Attribute: Peace Order
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
2 :light
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Both players creatures and weapons cannot attack or use spells that deal damage
for 3 turns. Doesn't Stack.

ART:

IDEA:
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NOTES:
Peace Treaty / Peace Order came from Sundial basically, but has the thematic purpose of peace. This means neither player can use damage spells or make creatures attack.
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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210241#msg1210241
« Reply #1 on: October 14, 2015, 11:12:54 am »
Why do all these cards have "Attribute" at the beginning of their names? It seems unnecessary.

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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210242#msg1210242
« Reply #2 on: October 14, 2015, 11:14:33 am »
Because they are attributes, as illustrated in the first card.

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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210243#msg1210243
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2015, 11:15:35 am »
Why do all these cards have "Attribute" at the beginning of their names? It seems unnecessary.

Quite so. The fact that they add effects is clear enough.

As for the card text, you can simplify it to something like
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All creatures and weapons are delayed for 1 turn.
Does not stack is optional, can be in either the card text or in Notes
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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210298#msg1210298
« Reply #4 on: October 14, 2015, 03:28:18 pm »
Upped seems too potent, going with unupped version -1 cost seems fine.

Otherwise I rather like this card.

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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210376#msg1210376
« Reply #5 on: October 14, 2015, 08:42:53 pm »
Isn't an attribute defined as something that only attaches to a creature and affects creatures in a certain way or only attaches to a permanent?
Anyways, I believe dimensional shield already does this to a lesser, but more potent extent.

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Re: Attribute: Peace Treaty | Attribute: Peace Order https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=60032.msg1210427#msg1210427
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2015, 04:24:48 am »
Because they are attributes, as illustrated in the first card.

May I suggest you add a link in the Series info to the first card?

I also think the upped is too powerful. It's much like a sundial but unbreakable. Lasting for 3 turns would be too much, since while your opponent may be doing next to nothing, you can continue hurting them with poison damage, or gather quanta for a OTKO. How about leaving the effect the same as unupped, but reducing the cost?
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