Raging Entity | Focused Entity

[ZephyrPhantom]

NAME: Raging Entity ELEMENT: Other COST: 1  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 1 | 1 TEXT: Deals 1 damage to a random target on the field each turn.	NAME: Focused Entity ELEMENT: 1 COST: 1  TYPE: Other ATK|HP: 1 | 2 TEXT: 1 : Deal 1 damage to target.

ART: Flayne IDEA: Zblader NOTES: Cannon Fodder with a catch.  The unupped version reprents anger- angry people have a tendency to be reckless.  Upped represented the calmed down version of the creature, able to focus properly and attack what it needs to. SERIES:

[EvaRia]

Fractal abuse is too obvious a choice for this.

It either needs to cost more, be put in an element, or both.

[Appawesome]

Fractal abuse is too obvious a choice for this.

It either needs to cost more, be put in an element, or both.

Any shield that blocks 1 damage is a counter...

[Ekki]

Any shield that blocks 1 damage is a counter...

But having 10 of this and 3-4 quantum pillars would be enough to kill lots of creatures every turn... Then you would be even able to choose an element to make a more focused attack with. So, it's just OP

EDIT: I'm talking about upped one, unupped seems UP

[ZephyrPhantom]

Any shield that blocks 1 damage is a counter...

But having 10 of this and 3-4 quantum pillars would be enough to kill lots of creatures every turn... Then you would be even able to choose an element to make a more focused attack with. So, it's just OP

Keep in mind that having a lot of Raging Entities means they could potentially kill themselves.  Focused Entity might need a nerf though.

[Ekki]

Any shield that blocks 1 damage is a counter...

But having 10 of this and 3-4 quantum pillars would be enough to kill lots of creatures every turn... Then you would be even able to choose an element to make a more focused attack with. So, it's just OP

Keep in mind that having a lot of Raging Entities means they could potentially kill themselves.  Focused Entity might need a nerf though.

Yep, forgot about that... I was talking about upped
Unupped actually seems OK, even UP...

[ZephyrPhantom]

Added a poll.  I will be nerfing Focused Entity in the near future, I'm just not sure how.

[joebob777]

if you keep it random raise health to help prevent self destruction

[Ekki]

Well, having the ABILITY to damage other creature is actually something hard to balance, specially when the creaature is an awesome Fractal fodder... And the fact of being of "other" doesn't help, since it is easily powered by quantum towers.

To be sort of balanced, take a look at Owl's Eye: It costs 7 (you can't easily run it in a rainbow), it's a weapon (not useful with fractal), and its power costs for unupped and for upped (I guess I'm right)

So you would have to solve:
1- Fractal (making its cost higher, and maybe make it aether ALSO, or make it immaterial)
2- The fact of reusable CC (needs to cost more than 1 random, in a 1 random cost creature)
3- It can help any deck archetype also, since 1 random is a huge meh in nearly any deck (upping its cost, making it an elemental creature would help)

I say change its mechanic, since it's easier. Maybe make it as the unupped, maybe 0 cost, but the 2 hp would be a good buff...

[Pineapple]

btw, you should take the  s out of the table.

Also, the format of the upped card text should be something like

1 : Focus
Deal 1 damage to a target.

Where Focus is the name of the ability. IDK what to do about the 1, as there are no abilities in the present version of the game that use rainbow quanta. In other cards, there is the quanta symbol.

: Web
The target creature loses its “airborne” skill

Or, if it's a click-able skill that costs nothing, it would be formatted like this:

Infect:
Sacrifice Virus to inflict 1 damage per round to a target creature

Question: Can any of these target the players? If Focused Entity can't, then you should reword it to "...to the target creature."

Raging Entity is definitely UP, should give it at least 2 HP.
Focused Entity is a tad OP, you could increase the playing cost to 3 or 4, make its ability a one-time use (like lycanthropy), and/or give it 0 attack. Oh, there's a poll.