Clock of Death | End of Time

[Snopel]

NAME: Clock of Death ELEMENT: Time COST: 12 TYPE: Permenant ATK|HP: NaN ABILITY: When your card count hits 0, it will sacrifice itself and deal 50 Damage to you and your opponent's HP.	NAME: End of Time ELEMENT: Time COST: 14 TYPE: Permenant ATK|HP: NaN ABILITY: When your card count hits 0, it will sacrifice itself and deal 50 damage to your opponent's HP only.

ART: A page off Google =P IDEA: Snopel NOTES: This card CAN be destroyed as an ordinary permenant. If it is destroyed before the user's card count hits 0, it has no effect at all. I also upped the cost on the upgrades so people wouldn't spam it and destroy everything in sight. SERIES: NaN

This is my first time ever making a card of my own. So I want a little help...
Is this good, crap, Overpowered, underpowered, too expensive.. etc?
I can take criticism. Just please don't go into a state of rage and start putting me down. =)
Tell me what you think.

[unionruler]

Meh game result issues--what happens if both players have the same hp and both go into the negative for unupped? The upped looks like you just want a cheap way to win--creatureless quickdraw with regen/antimatter. Don't like it at all 

[Snopel]

Meh game result issues--what happens if both players have the same hp and both go into the negative for unupped? The upped looks like you just want a cheap way to win--creatureless quickdraw with regen/antimatter. Don't like it at all 

I thought it would have failed. =\ Meh I guess I can learn from my mistakes.
And for unupped, you lose anyway. lol

Ok now looking at that i agree. it does suck. o_o;

EDIT: Ok I guess it's fixable.
What if i changed the damage to 35, when your opponent or your HP is lower, it does 25, If lower, 15, If lower, 5, And if even lower, reduces the HP to 1?

[actionjack]

What is its starting count?

The unupped version can maybe be cost less, say 6 or so.... but it would create lots double KO I would think..


Maybe even consider a creature version.... of 1|2 creature with a clock count of 4, that does 40 damage at end of its count ( 50 for a upped one) at cost of 6

(the number were pick with consideration to a unupped Cockatrice, since for 6 Q, you can get about 4X2X4(turn) = 32 damages, thus 40 damage on a high risk creature seem fair)

[tyranim]

get 2 of these out and use a crap load of precogs and hourglasses ftw