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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg305581#msg305581
« Reply #12 on: April 04, 2011, 10:12:12 pm »
You also need the symbol of the element in the card image... rather than Gravity / Earth written out.

I feel this is OP, say you have 2 Earth Pillars, 4 Gravity Pillars, and a Gravity mark.  Turn 2 you play this guy, turn 3 maybe another Gravity Pillar, use ability - he's a 9|9.  Turn 4 he's a 13|13.  And that's all unupgraded and without any buffs (such as an Acceleration).
Hmmm. I see your point. Well, I don't have the time right now, but howsa 'bout: +1 cost, add +2|+2 for each pillar of your mark on the field. Use once, Permanently.
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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg306156#msg306156
« Reply #13 on: April 05, 2011, 08:03:54 pm »
Making it a 1 time use ability sounds like it would be more balanced since otherwise it would grow quite large, but then you should probably keep it at +1|+1 and reduce the casting and ability costs.  Otherwise, with +2|+2, popping it mid-game could be extremely powerful (e.g., with 7 pillars, it gets +14|+14).  Reducing the cost would also force you to be strategic, making you consider the advantages of playing it / using the ability later for a potentially larger bonus.

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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg306206#msg306206
« Reply #14 on: April 05, 2011, 09:18:20 pm »
Making it a 1 time use ability sounds like it would be more balanced since otherwise it would grow quite large, but then you should probably keep it at +1|+1 and reduce the casting and ability costs.  Otherwise, with +2|+2, popping it mid-game could be extremely powerful (e.g., with 7 pillars, it gets +14|+14).  Reducing the cost would also force you to be strategic, making you consider the advantages of playing it / using the ability later for a potentially larger bonus.
Sounds ok. Changing it and the art now.
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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg320838#msg320838
« Reply #15 on: April 27, 2011, 01:19:14 am »
I know, I know, double posting, but I a) reworked the art and b) submitted this to the Crucible. Yay!
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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg326696#msg326696
« Reply #16 on: May 04, 2011, 03:07:09 pm »
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-Please remove the gravity and earth quanta symbols ( :gravity, :earth) from the ELEMENT section of the table. Placing those there means that the card belongs to, for example, the element "Gravity gravity quanta."
    -Also, the ELEMENT section of the upgraded column of your table shows that the card is of the Earth element, while the card image suggests otherwise, please fix this dicrepancy.
-Please fix the COST sections of the table such that they reflect the card image. What you have right now suggests that the casting cost will take 5 random quanta.
-Please adjust the TEXT section of your table such that it reflects the text on the card image.
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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg327114#msg327114
« Reply #17 on: May 04, 2011, 10:12:54 pm »
CURATOR COMMENT:
-Please remove the gravity and earth quanta symbols ( :gravity, :earth) from the ELEMENT section of the table. Placing those there means that the card belongs to, for example, the element "Gravity gravity quanta."
    -Also, the ELEMENT section of the upgraded column of your table shows that the card is of the Earth element, while the card image suggests otherwise, please fix this dicrepancy.
-Please fix the COST sections of the table such that they reflect the card image. What you have right now suggests that the casting cost will take 5 random quanta.
-Please adjust the TEXT section of your table such that it reflects the text on the card image.
Oops. Now I feel stupid for not noticing that glaring obviousness. Try again.
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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg331980#msg331980
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2011, 03:43:18 am »
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-...ugh.*

* = Technically this card doesn't break any 'new element' rules, but since the two cards are of different elements, what element poll do you want this card to be placed in?

On another note, doing cards like these make it somewhat flustering for the card curators to organize, because they have to ask this question to ensure that the card is placed in the right element for voting to avoid backlash/concerns. :(

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Re: Planetary Behemoth|Planetary Overlord. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=22612.msg332452#msg332452
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2011, 10:26:53 pm »
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-...ugh.*

* = Technically this card doesn't break any 'new element' rules, but since the two cards are of different elements, what element poll do you want this card to be placed in?

On another note, doing cards like these make it somewhat flustering for the card curators to organize, because they have to ask this question to ensure that the card is placed in the right element for voting to avoid backlash/concerns. :(
Alright, then. I believe that the unupped should go into the Earth poll, and the upped should go into the Gravity. I will put this into the 'notes' section from now on. If you want, add a link to the other one instead of a picture, so people can vote for both at once.
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