Time Warp | Time Rift

[Annele]

NAME: Time Warp ELEMENT: Time COST: 3 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Deals 2 damage to target for every 10 time quanta in your possesion. Target may be stuck in a time bubble.	NAME: Time Rift ELEMENT: Time COST: 1 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Deals 2 damage to target for every 10 time quanta in your possesion. Target may be stuck in a time bubble.

ART: Annele IDEA: Annele NOTES: Time's bolt. I'm wondering if time bubble should be random (delay between 1-5 turns), be altered depending on how much  one has, or just 3 like freeze. Time bubble is like what happens with Procastination. Cost may need to be changed. This will be part of the 'bolt' series I am currently constructing. Any ideas for the other elements would be appreciated. Is the art ok? SERIES:

[TheAccuso]

i personally think that time have nothing to do with direct damage like that, but i'll like an idea as:
Delay the target creature in a time bubble for 1 turn for every 5 time quanta you own.

[Annele]

i personally think that time have nothing to do with direct damage like that, but i'll like an idea as:
Delay the target creature in a time bubble for 1 turn for every 5 time quanta you own.

It was supposed to be something like the creature going through a time warp/rift, which is unstable and causes damage to the creature depending on how far in  they go. They also may not reapear for a few turns, hence the time bubble. This is the best way, imo, for to do direct damage thematically.

[TheAccuso]

It was supposed to be something like the creature going through a time warp/rift, which is unstable and causes damage to the creature depending on how far in  they go. They also may not reapear for a few turns, hence the time bubble. This is the best way, imo, for to do direct damage thematically.

you know, time it's inevitable, but it takes its...TIME to make damage, that's why i didn't like this concept, was too direct.

[Annele]

Oh Zanzarino. Stupid typos. It was only meant to be 2 damage. How the heck did that 3 get in there??? 

[Annele]

Fixed typo. It is only supposed to do 2 damage, like all other bolts.

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